this is my firs t card so enjoy

[zulax345]

[Dream]

It sucks. Try harder next time.

[Καsτοr]

Ok, here it goes:

 

1. DIVINE monsters aren't realistic.

2. Robot isn't a real type.

3. Your using the Spirit Sub- Type wrong. Look it up.

4. ATK is overpowered.

5. OCG Correction:

This card cannot be destroyed by Trap Cards.

6. Image is blurry. Get a better one.

7. Capitalize the first letter is Robot and Warrior.

8. Thats really it. If you make those corrections, it should be good.

[Zigzix]

Do not use fake types, needs a set ID, Type should be Machine, Divine doesn't seem fitting, image is blurry, that is not the correct spirit effect, for more information go here

The OCG should read:

This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap cards.

 

The effect is pretty simple, the card is overpowered, it's too similar to Tenkabato Shien.

 

Remember to capitalise your card names and take a look at the official OCG thread here the image also needs a background.

Please take all that into consideration and you'll get better in no time!

4/10 sorry

[Starly_64]

Pretty bad:

Use capitalization: robot warrior= Robot Warrior

The picture is slightly blurred, and needs a more interesting background

"Robot" is not a real type

If it's a "Spirit" subtype, then it should have "This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up." in its effect

OCG errors: "This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap Cards."

Why is it DIVINE?

Overpowered. There is no drawback to it whatsoever to make it even.

 

4/10