Ideal card for a Dark Magician collector!

[Grant2600]

Hi, this is my first card, i collect dark magician cards so i'll be happy to see what you guys have, here is Dark Magician of Disaster he is beatable (spell, trap and some monster cards, especially effect cards) but its ATTACK and DEFENCE offer a great survival chance :)

 

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Please if you could message me telling me of any comments, improvements or ideas of new cards that you would like to have me make and post on the thread.

 

Thank You.

[Andx]

Wow, even without an effect you made an overpowered card. No monster deserves 12 levels and greater than Blue Eyes Ultimate Stats, heck no monster should have much over 3000 ATK. Also you have 2 incredibly bad things going for you. 1, you didn't give the card an effect and the users of YCM hate that; 2, you used attachments that every person hates. In order to post your cards go into the card maker, click on the actual card you bring up, a code should appear below, copy and paste the code (and img tags) into the post. Many people will call your overpowered, no effect, monster worthless spam so please try a bit harder before posting again. You get a "I can't score this"/10.

[-DG-]

I quote above post. Read the rules and ask questions. We all had to do it, you know.

[Grant2600]

Ok thanks for the heads up, im new so i didn't expect i would make a good card from the start,

 

I'll redo the card and try to improve it, i'll post it on this topic when im done

[jayl1996]

its good. but if it is a 12 star it should be more attack power than its 4500

[Grant2600]

Here is the new version of Dark Magician of Disaster, I put a effect on it and decreased its variables a bit.

 

[Dream]

The new one is better. 7/10

[Dark Judgment Dragon]

Better but still bad

5.5/10

[Thomas Wolf]

Actually, it's not bad now that you redid it. Still though, it doesn't earn a high rating. 6/10.

Ideas for improvement are:

-Get a better pic: Pics need backgrounds to be considered good. Just having a card that stands infront of color is boring. Ontop of that, there's a black border at the top. You can get rid of that in MS. paint. It looks better without. Last thing about the pic, it's just DM, you upgraded the card so try to find a pic that makes his look upgraded. Make sense?

-Secondly your OCG (Official Card Grammer) is off: You're close, but off just alittle. It should read something like, "As long as you control this face-up monster all Spellcaster monsters you control gain 300 ATK and DEF. When this card is destroyed it is removed from play."

-Last tip: Be more creative. That's a good card, but it lacks any kind of wow factor. Give it something that's just plan awsome. Like have your effect because it is good, but you could add to it something like, "If this card is removed from play, you can remove 2 DARK Spellcaster monsters you control from play to Special Summon this card." or something like that to make it stand out.

[Brendano Harns]

I quote above post. Read the rules and ask questions. We all had to do it' date=' you know.

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I didn't, I learned the hard way, but nonetheless, I agree.

 

You can get banned for using attatchments, so do not use them. Here is what you do: While in the card maker, click on your card. A little box with the words "Uploading to Imageshack" will appear under your card. That will eventually go away, usually within 2 or 3 secs, depending on the speed of your computer, and a code will appear in the box. Copy and paste the code into your sig, and WHALAA! That is how you use an IMG tag.

 

EDIT: I see the new card now. You should have just erase the attatchment, and put the new one there.

 

You need a better pic, or render the one you already have. Also, the new one is very balanced, just a lot of OCG errors. Good work! You are learning! :D

[aznxpwr]

it looks exactly like a dark magician

[al9090]

its good. but if it is a 12 star it should be more attack power than its 4500

DONT LISEN TO THIS NOOB

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Better 8/10