Black Horned Dragon- First Card Made

[Cactuar]

This is my first card.

 

The text says: This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Ice Mountain Spirit". You must also offer monsteers whose total level is 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. If this monster destroys another monster, it has a chance to destroy either another monster or your opponents life points directly. At the end phase, this card and the Ritual Spell Card return to your deck after use.

[Skaj]

Good.

Basically, a ritual BEWD, which sucks. BUT! Listen, there's more, if you add a special Spirit effect, like it can attack twice in a row if it destroys a monster by battle, or something, and then also have it read the normal Spirit Effect, you know, this monster returns to the owners hand at the End Phase of their turn, that's what a Spirit monster is. And also.. now that I think about it, a ritual Spirit monster doesn't make sense, you'll have to keep summoning it with the ritual spell card, which goes to the graveyard after you use it... so.. why not make the ritual card return to your hand after use? or even your deck! That way it isn't overpowered. At any rate, since the text would be way small on this card after making, I suggest putting what is on this card only on the spell card, kinda like Relinquished.

But it's a weird idea, new, never imagined a Spirit Ritual Monster, it's a good and new "sassy" idea to build onto, doesn't make much sense at first, but if it's got a gnarly effect and a good way to reuse it, then it's actually worth it[/u]. Good job.

[Cactuar]

I updated the card.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

OCG fix:

 

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Ice Mountain Spirit". You must also Tribute monsteers whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. Once per turn, if this card destroys a monster by battle, it can attack once more. During your End Phase, return this card and the Ritual Spell Card used to Sumon it to your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled.

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Still need to make the ritual spell for it.

[Skaj]

Now it's too Overpowered. Attacking your foes life points directly with a 3000 pt Attacker? It's just not reasonable. I suggest using this effect if you were to have something like that.

 

"This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the Ritual Spell Card "Ice Mountain Spirit". This card returns to it's owners hand during the End Phase of the turn that it is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, it may attack 1 other monster once again in a row or attack your opponents Life Points directly. The Battle Damage this card inflicts to your opponent by using this effect is halved."

 

That's what I would do.

[Lord Smeagle]

Considering the effort a Ritual Monster takes to summon, and it just comes back to your hand anyway, it's positively balanced.