Riku Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 kool poem wish i could write that good.. That but I know a kinda good one. :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Ah, Nice. My Comments:PoeticTouchingFunny I am sure if your girl sawa this she would be very, very (_F_I_L_L_I_N_T_H_E_B_L_A_N_K) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 The poem is really deep, but I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 All I can say for improvement is instead of teh F - Bomb, I'd just say Damn. The F - Bomb was, well, it didn't go great with the rest of it. But the poem was still amazing. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 [align=center]Really deep.Good poem.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artix_Von_Kreiger Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Nice poem, though I really don't get the third & Fourth line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 o_O You must really miss her.. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Touching, though it would've seemed much better if you weren't revealing that you were a lesbian. I have no problem with that, though lesbian relationships don't seem half as romantic as straight ones to me. Deep poem' date=' man.Nice job.Hope to hear more from you.^^\m/[/quote'] Tea Leaf is a girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Culpa Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 WTF? Good. You wrote this cause you didn't see your girlfriend for two days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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