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iCherry Newbie

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No.

 

Lucas Maximus.

 

He's a guy I made up who comes from the realm of make believe. His powers are looney toon powers. In other words' date=' he can defy logic from time to time.

 

He is usually a funny trickster with a bugs bunny aditude. His mission is to keep the gates that connect the dimensions undercontrol.

 

His main enemy is Drain, reason because is that Lucas Maximus is practically invincible, except to Drain, because he absorbs everything, except for death, leaving despair.

 

Drain is after the power of the gates, so Lucas must fight him off. If Drain were to achieve the power of the gates, he could open the Master Gate and destroy everything. Then, with that power, he would create his own universe, as part of his revenge for his home being destroyed long ago.

 

Lucas has many friends, a GIANT HAMMER! and his phrase To The MAX!!! which is a powerful move that is belived to be as devestating as a Falcon Pawnch from both ChuckNorris and CPT. Falcons colliding. He must be careful.

 

 

I also plan on making a game based off him. :D

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Sounds lulzy.

I want to see that game though.

 

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In ancient times' date=' there was a legend about a giant war taken place in the Heavens. There was a powerful being, whom the Ancients called Masester, the ruler of everything. There was also a being of great power as well, and was believed to have power that rivaled Masester himself. That being was known as Kaos. Kaos, was, of course, envious of Masester’s spot in the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s especially since he was a powerful as him. One day, the being of Envy and Mischief, Jailik, decided to play a prank on Kaos. He told Kaos that Masester was turning evil and was trying to destroy the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s, and Earth itself, and only Kaos can save them. Kaos then decided that it was the right thing to do, and went to save them. He confronted Masester, only to be told by Masester that he’s not doing anything. Kaos believed that Masester was lying, and started to fight with him. The fight of the two powerful beings caused the great “Eclipse of Kaosester”. The fight lasted 10 days and 10 nights, and eventually, Masester won. Masester banished the innocent Kaos to Krayula, and Kaos lied there, for years, for being tricked. Everyone then thought that everything was okay.

 

That was until Kaos finally had enough. He rampaged through Krayula, and destroyed everything in his path. He went towards the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s and went to go after his 2 targets. Jailik and Masester. He then found Jailik and Masester, conversing along with the other Heyn-Ra’s. Kaos knocked them out of the way and went to kill Jalik first, seeing as it was his fault to begin with. Kaos grabbed a RaSpear and went for Jailik’s chest. Right before it impaled Jailik, Masester grabbed the weapon with his left hand, and crushed it. The spear did injure him though, and Masester was forced to use his right hand. They battled for countless days and nights when finally, Masester grew tired. He was about to die when Jalik grabbed the broken weapon and threw it at Kaos, paralyzing him. Masester then banished Kaos to the lowest pit in Kayula, Knokra, and the he lied, bound to Krayula.

 

It is said though, that the chains binding somebody in Knokra slowly get weaker until they eventually disappear though. If that were to happen, Kaos would be able to get freed and cause even more hell then he did before.

 

But it’s just a legend, right?

 

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Chapter 1.

Do want.

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[align=center][spoiler=Prologue]

In ancient times' date=' there was a legend about a giant war taken place in the Heavens. There was a powerful being, whom the Ancients called Masester, the ruler of everything. There was also a being of great power as well, and was believed to have power that rivaled Masester himself. That being was known as Kaos. Kaos, was, of course, envious of Masester’s spot in the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s especially since he was a powerful as him. One day, the being of Envy and Mischief, Jailik, decided to play a prank on Kaos. He told Kaos that Masester was turning evil and was trying to destroy the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s, and Earth itself, and only Kaos can save them. Kaos then decided that it was the right thing to do, and went to save them. He confronted Masester, only to be told by Masester that he’s not doing anything. Kaos believed that Masester was lying, and started to fight with him. The fight of the two powerful beings caused the great “Eclipse of Kaosester”. The fight lasted 10 days and 10 nights, and eventually, Masester won. Masester banished the innocent Kaos to Krayula, and Kaos lied there, for years, for being tricked. Everyone then thought that everything was okay.

 

That was until Kaos finally had enough. He rampaged through Krayula, and destroyed everything in his path. He went towards the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s and went to go after his 2 targets. Jailik and Masester. He then found Jailik and Masester, conversing along with the other Heyn-Ra’s. Kaos knocked them out of the way and went to kill Jalik first, seeing as it was his fault to begin with. Kaos grabbed a RaSpear and went for Jailik’s chest. Right before it impaled Jailik, Masester grabbed the weapon with his left hand, and crushed it. The spear did injure him though, and Masester was forced to use his right hand. They battled for countless days and nights when finally, Masester grew tired. He was about to die when Jalik grabbed the broken weapon and threw it at Kaos, paralyzing him. Masester then banished Kaos to the lowest pit in Kayula, Knokra, and the he lied, bound to Krayula.

 

It is said though, that the chains binding somebody in Knokra slowly get weaker until they eventually disappear though. If that were to happen, Kaos would be able to get freed and cause even more hell then he did before.

 

But it’s just a legend, right?

 

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All I could found wrong was too many proper nouns. But that's my opinion~

 

Is this fic based off anything?

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Well, I don'y know how to make a game for it.

 

WE I DON'T HAVE THE TECHNOLOGY!

 

However, the game is kinda like mario, with pimped out levels, lots of different enemies, but you have to collect not coins nor rings, but "PARALLELs" which give you powers if you have enough. You're also capable of resting them so you don't get stuck.

 

You can do a bunch of awesome crap easy, but if you slip up...death is upon you.

 

And I was going to make a comic, but the story wasn't good enough and was confusing, so I had to rethink it.

 

 

And Ice: DO IT!

I'll +rep you if you can put my character in there, some, how. :/

 

Zeo: Whens chapter 8 coming?

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@X-L: I'll try.

 

[align=center][spoiler=Prologue]

In ancient times' date=' there was a legend about a giant war taken place in the Heavens. There was a powerful being, whom the Ancients called Masester, the ruler of everything. There was also a being of great power as well, and was believed to have power that rivaled Masester himself. That being was known as Kaos. Kaos, was, of course, envious of Masester’s spot in the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s especially since he was a powerful as him. One day, the being of Envy and Mischief, Jailik, decided to play a prank on Kaos. He told Kaos that Masester was turning evil and was trying to destroy the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s, and Earth itself, and only Kaos can save them. Kaos then decided that it was the right thing to do, and went to save them. He confronted Masester, only to be told by Masester that he’s not doing anything. Kaos believed that Masester was lying, and started to fight with him. The fight of the two powerful beings caused the great “Eclipse of Kaosester”. The fight lasted 10 days and 10 nights, and eventually, Masester won. Masester banished the innocent Kaos to Krayula, and Kaos lied there, for years, for being tricked. Everyone then thought that everything was okay.

 

That was until Kaos finally had enough. He rampaged through Krayula, and destroyed everything in his path. He went towards the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s and went to go after his 2 targets. Jailik and Masester. He then found Jailik and Masester, conversing along with the other Heyn-Ra’s. Kaos knocked them out of the way and went to kill Jalik first, seeing as it was his fault to begin with. Kaos grabbed a RaSpear and went for Jailik’s chest. Right before it impaled Jailik, Masester grabbed the weapon with his left hand, and crushed it. The spear did injure him though, and Masester was forced to use his right hand. They battled for countless days and nights when finally, Masester grew tired. He was about to die when Jalik grabbed the broken weapon and threw it at Kaos, paralyzing him. Masester then banished Kaos to the lowest pit in Kayula, Knokra, and the he lied, bound to Krayula.

 

It is said though, that the chains binding somebody in Knokra slowly get weaker until they eventually disappear though. If that were to happen, Kaos would be able to get freed and cause even more hell then he did before.

 

But it’s just a legend, right?

 

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All I could found wrong was too many proper nouns. But that's my opinion~

 

Is this fic based off anything?

 

The Proper Noun crap bothered me too.

 

No, it's completely original.

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@X-L: I'll try.

 

[align=center][spoiler=Prologue]

In ancient times' date=' there was a legend about a giant war taken place in the Heavens. There was a powerful being, whom the Ancients called Masester, the ruler of everything. There was also a being of great power as well, and was believed to have power that rivaled Masester himself. That being was known as Kaos. Kaos, was, of course, envious of Masester’s spot in the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s especially since he was a powerful as him. One day, the being of Envy and Mischief, Jailik, decided to play a prank on Kaos. He told Kaos that Masester was turning evil and was trying to destroy the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s, and Earth itself, and only Kaos can save them. Kaos then decided that it was the right thing to do, and went to save them. He confronted Masester, only to be told by Masester that he’s not doing anything. Kaos believed that Masester was lying, and started to fight with him. The fight of the two powerful beings caused the great “Eclipse of Kaosester”. The fight lasted 10 days and 10 nights, and eventually, Masester won. Masester banished the innocent Kaos to Krayula, and Kaos lied there, for years, for being tricked. Everyone then thought that everything was okay.

 

That was until Kaos finally had enough. He rampaged through Krayula, and destroyed everything in his path. He went towards the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s and went to go after his 2 targets. Jailik and Masester. He then found Jailik and Masester, conversing along with the other Heyn-Ra’s. Kaos knocked them out of the way and went to kill Jalik first, seeing as it was his fault to begin with. Kaos grabbed a RaSpear and went for Jailik’s chest. Right before it impaled Jailik, Masester grabbed the weapon with his left hand, and crushed it. The spear did injure him though, and Masester was forced to use his right hand. They battled for countless days and nights when finally, Masester grew tired. He was about to die when Jalik grabbed the broken weapon and threw it at Kaos, paralyzing him. Masester then banished Kaos to the lowest pit in Kayula, Knokra, and the he lied, bound to Krayula.

 

It is said though, that the chains binding somebody in Knokra slowly get weaker until they eventually disappear though. If that were to happen, Kaos would be able to get freed and cause even more hell then he did before.

 

But it’s just a legend, right?

 

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All I could found wrong was too many proper nouns. But that's my opinion~

 

Is this fic based off anything?

 

The Proper Noun crap bothered me too.

 

No, it's completely original.

 

Cool. But just be warned, a majority of YCM doesn't like stories without some anime or game tacked onto the title. D:

 

Zeo: Whens chapter 8 coming?

 

It probably isn't.

I'm starting a new one.

 

;_;

 

Want me to edit or something? D:

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[align=center][spoiler=Prologue]

In ancient times' date=' there was a legend about a giant war taken place in the Heavens. There was a powerful being, whom the Ancients called Masester, the ruler of everything. There was also a being of great power as well, and was believed to have power that rivaled Masester himself. That being was known as Kaos. Kaos, was, of course, envious of Masester’s spot in the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s especially since he was a powerful as him. One day, the being of Envy and Mischief, Jailik, decided to play a prank on Kaos. He told Kaos that Masester was turning evil and was trying to destroy the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s, and Earth itself, and only Kaos can save them. Kaos then decided that it was the right thing to do, and went to save them. He confronted Masester, only to be told by Masester that he’s not doing anything. Kaos believed that Masester was lying, and started to fight with him. The fight of the two powerful beings caused the great “Eclipse of Kaosester”. The fight lasted 10 days and 10 nights, and eventually, Masester won. Masester banished the innocent Kaos to Krayula, and Kaos lied there, for years, for being tricked. Everyone then thought that everything was okay.

 

That was until Kaos finally had enough. He rampaged through Krayula, and destroyed everything in his path. He went towards the Tower of Heyn-Ra’s and went to go after his 2 targets. Jailik and Masester. He then found Jailik and Masester, conversing along with the other Heyn-Ra’s. Kaos knocked them out of the way and went to kill Jalik first, seeing as it was his fault to begin with. Kaos grabbed a RaSpear and went for Jailik’s chest. Right before it impaled Jailik, Masester grabbed the weapon with his left hand, and crushed it. The spear did injure him though, and Masester was forced to use his right hand. They battled for countless days and nights when finally, Masester grew tired. He was about to die when Jalik grabbed the broken weapon and threw it at Kaos, paralyzing him. Masester then banished Kaos to the lowest pit in Kayula, Knokra, and the he lied, bound to Krayula.

 

It is said though, that the chains binding somebody in Knokra slowly get weaker until they eventually disappear though. If that were to happen, Kaos would be able to get freed and cause even more hell then he did before.

 

But it’s just a legend, right?

 

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Hawt. And oh noez sounds like Kronos Kaos is pissed D;

 

Lol, but you never make any FF's cuz YOU NEVER FINISH ANYTHING.

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Im So bored, i may make another RP, or just continue the last one (doubt it) anyone got any ideas, i got nothing >.>

 

 

PM me or post here if so, just nothing based on Naruto or Pokemon, something original. And if i like it we can co-host or something.

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