Castle Age Heroines

[Ruim]

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I think i have some OCG's [Help Fix Pls] and sorry about the lame effects. I'll have more up soon as I figure out how to transfer their abilities to effects. xD
This is my first post in a while and I hope you guys like it. comments and constructive criticisms are welcome.

[NeosWiseman]

[u][b][size="3"]Serene:[/size][/b][/u] [i]At the beginning of your Battle Phase, you can pay any amount of Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by half that amount.[/i]
I suggest that you limit the amount that you can pay to let's say 2000 or so. Than it would be something like that: [i]At the beginning of your Battle Phase, you can pay up to ____ Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by half the amount you paid. [/i]The basic stats of the card are a bit high. 1900 ATK and a boosting effect can make it too powerful, but it's not a big problem.

[u][b][size="3"]Halcyon:[/size][/b][/u] [i]When this face-up Defense Position monster is selected as an attack target, increase its DEF by half its original ATK.[/i]
If you put the effect like that, than by can just say [i]by 900 points[/i], because the original ATK cannot be changed. I'm not familiar with the character and the game she comes from but you can make her gain half the original ATK of the attacking monster even if this goes slightly out of her character. It goes like that, naturally: [i]When this face-up Defense Position monster is selected as an attack target, increase its DEF by half the original ATK of the attacking monster. [/i]

The cards are good for a first try. The effects are not lame. All effects are useful in their own way. Some are just a little too simple, but that doesn't matter.
I like your cards and I'll +rep you for your work expecting you to keep it up! ^^