Simaru Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 So these are my first cards...and i am new at the whole posting on forums so yeah ;p critcize, and plz tell me any mistakes or even if just dont like it! (revised Terra Dragon) [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/4821/58308.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + "Black Rose Dragon" When this card is Synchro Summoned with any Plant- Type monster, that monster returns to your hand instead of going to the Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for every Plant monster in your graveyard. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/4821/58308.jpg[/img] "Ice Barrier" + 1 or more non- Tuner monsters You can discard any number of cards to the Graveyard, to return the same number of cards from the Graveyard to the deck, then shuffle and draw the same amount of cards you returned to the deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 No attachments. Click on the card in the cardmaker and copy/past the code that appears below it. Effect is redundant, you're only going to be able to use 2 monsters to syncchro summon this monster without level alterations, and I doubt people would waste a second tuner on this card. Also, the tuner comes before the remaining material monsters on the requirements. And why Black Rose with EARTH monsters? Black Rose is most useful in Plant Decks, make an effect that revolves around plants and is stronger than Black Rose. Make it "1 Tuner + "Black Rose Dragon"" for synchro materials. If you do increase this guys level, change the requirements. Also, pics with no backgrounds aren't liked a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simaru Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 ok thank you, it was my first one so i just wanted to see what everyone would think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Its pretty good for your first one it has a couple of OCG errors but its good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simaru Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seattleite Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Good things: Good Pic, Nice name, mostly good OCG (EARTH in all caps, not "Earth Attribute other than that ok) Bad things: Honestly I don't think you could even fit this in an extra deck, it's so underpowered. Requires a lv1 EARTH tuner.. and Black Rose (dragon?} The effect doesn't make up for it, the effect of Black Rose Dragon that decreases ATK is actually more useful than 400 extra ATK. Overall Presentation 7/10 just fix up on OCG Stats: 5/10 needs better effect badly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simaru Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 ok, yeah I am going to re-do it and also I found another card I want to create, so I will put those up soon. and thank you for the criticism, i appreciate it a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Your tuner needs to be a lot more specific. Right now your second card is literally unplayable because there is no monters called "Ice Barrier". There are "Ice Barrier" monsters, but none are named that. What you need to put is "1 "Ice Barrier" Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters" unless you meant 1 specific monster. Anyway, I like how it goes with the Ice Barrier theme of keeping hand/field advantage, not sure if it's OP'd or not, because you could return a Synchro monster in the Grave to the Extra Deck with this effect and still draw a card for it. Though while it says you can return any kind of cards from your Grave, it's OP'd. Limit it to monsters, because recycling certain spells is too much, even if you have to re-draw them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 The first card is... Simply bad. I think that has been stated enough now. Black Rose Dragon has a rather awesome effect. I wouldn't prefer this card over Rose Dragon, leave alone use another tuner for it. Then the monster type. A monster can't have 2 types. Rose Dragon, although both a plant and a dragon, is only dragon type. That's why many newer plant support cards have "Plant-type monster or "Black Rose Dragon"" on it, making it also count for rose dragon. 2 types is just not possible. The second card is very good, maybe even OP, as it has enormous drawing power (even though you keep a +0, you can still renew your entire hand) Restrict it to 2 or 3 cards per turn and it should be fine. Overall I'm gonna give 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hentrik Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Good for your first card 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 You can't return Terra to the hand, cuz it's a Synchro. I'd prefer only Black Rose instead of it. Canoirb is simply the best card ever, cuz you return cards to the deck with NO COST at all. First: 5/10 Second: 4/10, it's way too overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simaru Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 thank you everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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