CMRenji Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 [center]Hey guys, wazzup!? It's me, Renji, and I'm back on YCM! For all of those who remember me I welcome any and all hi-fives! And, to celebrate my return on 11/11/11, I've made a new card. I haven't made a single card in months though, so I expect my OCG and balance to be off. XP Anyway here's the card: [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/2439/145730o.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=1]Jazin Kay Image[/size][/center] [center] [i][b]When this card is summoned: send the top OR bottom card from your Deck to the Graveyard; increase this card's ATK or DEF by 400. When this card is destroyed, you can send this card to the bottom of your Deck; Special Summon 1 Lv 4 or lower FIRE monster from your Graveyard. It gains 500 ATK and DEF on the turn it was Special Summoned.[/b][/i] It's great to be back on YCM! [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qdrack Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 where do you get such sweet pics?! Oh and your balance is still pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 nice card! glad you have it with high ATK and DEF or then you could search for it, which would be bad lol but no, this is very nice, although, all it does is boost, then speacial summon a fire monster, which are rarely run to begin with, i'd use it, but, im not sure others would... 7/10! welcome back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast for the type the lv4 or lower FIRE summoning is the better effect, the boosts are a bit too small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted November 11, 2011 Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 Welcome back Renji. You probably me better as Talos or Dhole, but good to see you are back. You gonna open another shop? Anyway to the card. It is balanced. OCG is a little off, I don't admit to being an OCG master but I'll try and help you out a little more. [i][b]When this card is Summoned: send the top OR bottom card from your Deck to the Graveyard; increase this card's ATK or DEF by 400. When this card is destroyed, you can place this card on the bottom of your Deck; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your Graveyard. It gains 500 ATK and DEF on the turn it was Special Summoned.[/b][/i] Not too much wrong, just a few minor errors. Not bad for being gone for quite a few months. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Thanks for the comments guys, it's so awesome to be back. It's good to see you again Talos, I'm glad my card is still decent even after months. XD And yes, I will make a new shop in due time, once I readjust myself with Gimp. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3]Renji!!!! ^^ *glomps* Glad you're back, and it's me Lauren. Had my name changed not too long ago. xD[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [quote name='qdrack' timestamp='1321032396' post='5632830'] where do you get such sweet pics?! Oh and your balance is still pretty good. [/quote] JazinKay or hpdoom on photobucket OT: Card is pretty smexy imo... lol i love they way it can mill for either side of teh deck... nice 9/10 and welcome back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Lauren, so good to see you again! =D About your name. Best. Name. Evar. XP @Ren: Thank you very much man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 [quote name='~Renegade~' timestamp='1321033432' post='5632851'] [i][b]When this card is Summoned: Send the top OR bottom card from your Deck to the Graveyard; increase this card's ATK or DEF by 400. When this card is destroyed: You can place this card on the bottom of your Deck; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your Graveyard. It gains 500 ATK and DEF on the turn it was Special Summoned.[/b][/i] [/quote] Yet I am the Card Grammar expert. Now, on to the card. I do enjoy the ATK and DEF ending with 50; it creates math problems for the newbs and n00bs. The overall feel of this card is wonderful, but I don't see it getting play in a dedicated FIRE Deck. I do see it getting a bit of time when the right Deck presents itself. The effect is decent as it is, which is fine for a non-meta card. Overall, a very good comeback card Renji. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Thank you Striker, for a detailed comment as always. Lol, I didn't think I could actually make a nice card after all this time. I quite honestly made this card in like 5-7 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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