THEGAME_ Posted January 4, 2014 Report Share Posted January 4, 2014 Kingdom Hearts Fans should appreciate this card because Vanitas can reck some serious havoc on the field by destroying 2 cards while dealing a significant amount damage not to mention his second ability to come back from the darkness recharged with more dark powers! i figured 2 level 7 dark warriors and and paying 1000lp with a fair amount of ATK power would balanced out the overall power of this card. I was also thinking of changing the summoning requirements to 1 dark level 7 warrior monster and 1 level 7 light monster to be more realistic to the nature of Vanitas origin. [attachment=40381:image.jpg] Is it OP? What would you change? Are you feeling the concept ? Share your thoughts. 2 Level 7 Dark Warrior monster Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to destroy 2 cards on the field. If this card was destroyed or banished by another cards effect you can pay 1000 life points to special summon this card during your next standby phase, if so attach 1 dark monster from your graveyard as Xyz material for this card. ***Note: When activating his effect while there are only 2 cards on the field including this card it destroys itself) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JACMaker Posted January 4, 2014 Report Share Posted January 4, 2014 I believe this card should have been posted in Pop Culture Cards. Anyways, do you know there are only 5 DARK Warrior-Type monsters in the game and 4 of which do not have the easiest summoning conditions. [spoiler=List of DARK Warrior-Type monsters]Dark Magician Knight Elemental HERO Dark Neos Garma Sword Swift Gaia the Fierce KnightWall Shadow[/spoiler] [spoiler=OCG Fixes]2 Level 7 DARK Warrior-Type monsters Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy 2 cards on the field. When this card is destroyed or banished by another card's effect: you can pay 1000 Life Points; Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase, and if you do, attach from your Graveyard to this card 1 DARK monster as Xyz Material. This card must be in the Graveyard or Banished to resolve this effect.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEGAME_ Posted January 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2014 [quote name="JACMaker" post="6331583" timestamp="1388867205"]I believe this card should have been posted in Pop Culture Cards. Anyways, do you know there are only 5 DARK Warrior-Type monsters in the game and [u]4 of which[/u] do not have the easiest summoning conditions. [spoiler=List of DARK Warrior-Type monsters][u]Dark Magician KnightElemental HERO Dark NeosGarma Sword[/u]Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight[u]Wall Shadow[/u][/spoiler][spoiler=OCG Fixes]2 Level 7 D[b]ARK[/b] Warrior[b]-Type[/b] monster[b]s[/b]Once per turn[b]:[/b] you can detach 1 Xyz [b]M[/b]aterial from this card; destroy 2 cards on the field. [b]When[/b] this card [b]is[/b] destroyed or banished by another card[b]'[/b]s effect[b]:[/b] you can pay 1000 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints; [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummon this card during your next [b]S[/b]tandby [b]P[/b]hase, [b]and [/b]if[b] you do[/b], attach from your [b]G[/b]raveyard [b]to[/b] this card 1 [b]DARK[/b] monster as Xyz [b]M[/b]aterial. [b]This card must be in the Graveyard or Banished to resolve this effect.[/b][/spoiler][/quote] Just because it's based off a video game doesn't mean it should be limited to the realistic section besides the pop culture section might as well be the joke cards section. this card as a whole was meant to be taken seriously thanks for your feedback I really appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JACMaker Posted January 4, 2014 Report Share Posted January 4, 2014 Just because it's based off a video game doesn't mean it should be limited to the realistic section besides the pop culture section might as well be the joke cards section. this card as a whole was meant to be taken seriously thanks for your feedback I really appreciate it I was not sure. That is why I started with, "I believe," and I did not mean to step on your toes. I appologize if I upset you. By the way, for your first card I think you did excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEGAME_ Posted January 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 [quote name="JACMaker" post="6331605" timestamp="1388869742"]I was not sure. That is why I started with, "I believe," and I did not mean to step on your toes. I appologize if I upset you. By the way, for your first card I think you did excellent.[/quote] Hey no need to apologize you said nothing wrong I really appreciated you sharing your thoughts on my work good or bad feedback is better than none even tho nothing u said was wrong the way I started off my response made me seem upset sorry about that and thanks for the OGC fix the way you fix it was perfect I read it like 30 times lol anyway I hope you judge and criticize my future work peace out ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEGAME_ Posted January 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Oh and one more thing there's over a ton of dark warrior monsters I didn't even know it till I did the research Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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