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Yugioh gx fanfic feedback

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Can i have feedback want to continue but also feel like im wasting my time cause no one seems to like it by they dont give me feedback 

https://www.wattpad.com/story/186374699-photon-seal-a-gx-original-story

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What kind of feedback do you want? I think you should continue writing this out, only to progress your ability to write. As of now, you're an average WattPad writer with Character inserts that is not presenting a literary story. That is fine, if that is what you want to do. However, any feedback given would be more up to the type of story you're trying to write out. If you are going to continue writing this story, I suggest you try and build an idea or a theme to work on rather than just details that can be put together in a narrative.

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