eliranshim Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 plz rate and comment. all photos from deviantart. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by offering 3 "Prayer Token"s on your side of the field as a Tribute. When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard as a result of battle, increase your Life Points by an amount equal to the original ATK of the destroyed monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by offering 3 "Prayer Token"s on your side of the field as a Tribute. In each of your Main Phases you may discard 2 cards from your Hand to return one card from your Graveyard to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zini Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 From a first overlook the Cards look good. However they seem a bit underpowered. Please bare also in mind I am kinda new to this so my suggestions are not meant to give you an idea on how to improve it rather then being the final text. Zeus Has to less ATK and DEF if you take into account that he is so hard to summon. Hades Up as well I suggest increasing his ATK and change the number of cards you need to discard to 1. I could be wrong with this, so you should ignore this part or ask someone with a clue about it, but you don't need to state. Shuffle your Deck. Since awhile ago they stopped to write this on cards as it is a basic rule that will always apply when you return cards to your deck unless the cards says otherwise. Athena Could also use a boost in ATK otherwise its a decent effect. Mount Olympus Seems to be a nice Card however gathering those tokens will be hard as hell. I suggest adding a effect like, once per turn negate the destruction of one Player Token on your side of the field. Faith Seems useless to me 300 will do nothing. even if you manage to get 3 of them out the token will have only 1400 DEF which will not help you Increase this value to I don't know something around 500. Wrath of the Gods This Card has a powerful effect but is to hard to pull of. As you need at least 9 turns to get all the tokens out you need. And if you have the 3 Deity Cards out I don't thing you need to have a field cleaning. I suggestion that you reduce the number of Deity's needed to activate this card to 2. This will way it will still be hard to pull off. Satyr Warrior This one is ok but i would increase his stats a little 1300 ATK at a minimum. Nymph. Seems ok but for a DEF monster it is also on the low side compared to the lots of 2000 DEF 4 Star monsters you can have. Medusa This Card is like Blizzard Dragon exept that you activate it in your opponents turn. But the OCG should be changed to include the words You can. Pandora's Box This one is nice the picture is kinda compressed. Other then that it is a nice Card. Final notes:Offering is not used in OCG or am I wrong? It should say tributed.Also you might want to lower the Token needed to 2 and change it from special summon to normal summon. Overall you Set seems underpowered but the OCG is nice as far as I can tell. The Pics are OK. I rate this Set 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira_Fuma Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Yeah, one big mistake: tokens aren't cards. They are just whatever you have around you that you can use to stand in for actual cards. Otherwise, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Kiko Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Well, I liked it! Zeus was amazing... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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