Kyubi20017 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 [align=center]Stars warsthe rise of the Neutral Force[/align] the character that i am using from stars wars i do not own. The new Characters that i a using I own unless some our already take for! 23/2/09. I also own this story star wars rise of the neutral! 24/2/09 [spoiler=Plot] A new age 15 YEARS AFTER, LUKE SKYWALKER KILL HIS FATHER DARTH VADER. He became a Jedi Master and was allow to be in control of the new Republic Academy and unaware to him he had a son called Nathan Skywalker. Even though the Empire & the republic made peace, The feeling of War was raining all over the Galaxy. A new force is Coming and A new war many begin but Has the Empire & Republic build more troops, the empire took Hoth and the plants near it. So even tough the republic was rebuild with the new rebel troopers there new planet naboo was the empire next target but with both sides strong will there ever be an end to this war which 15 years later a new war is about to bring. [spoiler=characters] Nathan Johnson-Nathan skywalker bio:unaware to Nathan that is father is Luke sky walker. He was born with the Neutral dragon sealed inside him. Mark Hamill-Luke Skywalker Bio He became a Jedi Master and was allow to be in control of the new Republic Academy. unaware to him that Nathan sky walker was his son. Mary Ross- Bio:She lined with her father...... for 15 years but while heading to the Academy she becomes Mates with Nathan Sky walker.. Lee Jones- Bio: Lee was born and rise my the republic and current he is now working at the republic Academy as a Jedi Master teacher. Voice of the dragon Demon-Bio: seal inside a Jedi called Nathan sky walker. Harrison Ford-Han SoloBio: comes in the first movie or season to save is wife Princess Leia from the empire. Carrie Fisher-Princess LeiaBio: the first episode or season she is caught by the empire and is Luke sky walker Sister. Tom Willy-bio: the first member of the new republic council. Van-Bio: the dark lords apprentice Dark lord-Bio: After the Death of the emperor, a strong Jedi with no name was made the dark lord after he killed the new jedi to the dark side, Sith lord Ron. Peter Mayhew-ChewbaccaBio: the friend of Han solo (more coming soon) [spoiler=star wars N-episode 1] Episode N-I: Rise of the neutral…After Luke skywalker killed his father Darth VaderHe Became a Jedi Master and was given the republic Jedi Academy,Little does He know a lost son was about to join the Academy,This Jedi was different as a dragon daemon was sealed inside him Little does The Republic know that in the 15 years of peace between The empire and republic there home planet of Hoth was taken and ANew threat, the neutral Federation was about to attack. Even with Even with the new republic rebel troopers, the Neutral FederationSpell doom throughout Galaxy, The Empire was about to break the peaceAnd once again a new War begins but With a big republic Transporter ship carry 300 Jedi rookies which was heading yavin 4 But the empireHad a secret weapon the new space station. galaxy... Pam down, as the empire space station was preparing ThereNew weapon which was strong enough to destroyed an entire planetWith The empire Space station lies deep with in the Roche AsteroidsThe republic are unaware of the upcoming doom. With a force field. An Republic Transporter Ship heads towards the Planet Yavin 4 followed by two new Republic Cruise fighters . ItWas heading to were the new Empire space station wasThe peace was about to be broke. INT Republic Transporter Ship-The lobby there was three hundred rookie Jedi on board, talking with them selfs MaryHey, Nathan can't wait towe get to the Academy andbecome Jedi masters NathanI know can't wait to we getOur own lightsabers. MaryHope we are there soon and my name is Mary Nathanmine is Nathan Sky walker INT Empire space station- CONTROL ROOM Operators move about among the control panels. A storm trooper runs towards Van. Then Van ran into theControl room VanWhat is the matter OPERATORWe have detect a republic transporter shipWith two republic Cruise fighters followed VanWere are there heading OPERATORTowards the Outer Rim Sir VanLaunch are xyz fighters to attack the republic transporter ship OPERATORwe are at peace with the Republic for 15 years so far VanSo what, the peace will be broke do it OPERATOROK Sir The control officer moved towards a view port and watches as A fleet of xyz fighters flew out heading towards theRepublic transporter Ship,as more pilots moved towards the XZ bomber INT republic transporter ship -COCKPIT The Republic co-Pilot, John Tam, a tall, confidentSkill, Open into the COCKPIT sitting right near the pilotThe pilot looked surprise John TamWhat the matter WillI am not sure but there something not right John TamHow you mean WillI can see some bombers and fighters heading towards us John TamSee as our cruiser ships blasts towards the oncoming fleet WillWarn the Jedi at th e back to get on the gun ports John TamRight away Sir INT republic transporter ship -Lobby As another rookie called Money, a small and Happy Head towards the outer toilets and the other Jedi started singingNathan as well as Mary was sat back into their seats The co-pilot runs into the lobby John TamWe have incoming empire fighters MarkI thought we was at peace with the empire John Tamthe peace as been broke MoneyWhat we going to do John Tamwe need two of you Jedi to head to the gun ports NathanI go MaryBe to Then John Tam ran backing the COCKPIT INT Republic transporter ship - Gun ports As the door to the ports open Nathan and MaryRan though looking around to see two unmanned Guns on the left and Right Nathan ran to the right just as Mary ran left but with thereFace happy the defense was surly good NathanGet ready he there come MaryI am ready lets begin the fleet of fighters, Bomber started firing a the ship NathanO right i got one Marywell i did to and let see who can blew up the most NathanFine Lets begin Marythat makes 5 NathanDam I only got 4 but it not over yet the firing was blasting out of ship, starting to blew up the fleet,Just as there fired Back INT republic transporter ship -COCKPIT the pilots looked out of the window seeing the fleet being blow up John TamYou think that we can get though without dieing WillI hope so as i do not want to end up like them cruiser ships John Tam I know A short time later...... WillDam we are losing number two engines, go check it out John TamRight away As the door closed behind John the ship started shaking INT Republic transporter ship - Gun ports Nathan and Mary kept firing at the fighters but two missile was heading to Both side of the gun ports,Mary could not see the missile heading toward hr as she blew up 3 bombers. Nathan-I got 25 altogether MaryI got 25 altogether so it looks like we got a draw Nathan-You wait and see MaryI will NathanMary jumped now MaryWhy NathanDo it Just before the missile hit both gun ports Nathan jumped moving him and Mary towards the door,But as the missile hits, the gun pots blew off leaving to big holes. As the wind came blasting moving Nathan and Mary slowly near the holes. The gun port door opens. INT Republic transporter ship - Lobby hallway A rookie called Monkey a middle, Smart Jedi pull Nathan though first then Mary afterwards.The door closed as the hip was still shaking due o it being attack. MonkeyCome we have to get to the lobby quick Nathan looked at Money MaryWhy Monkey because we are about to hyper jump to the outrim avoiding this attack NathanOk lets go before it to Late MaryDon’t want to die So there ran though just in time before the transporter ship hyper jumped into the outrim near Yavin IV Ext of republic base on naboo As the rebel troopers, walking in and out of base as well as people walking around the planet with it two big arks then a lot of the stairs. Then as the commander of the base walked with two rebel troops behind him, a Jedi Master Bruce wills with his tow dual lightsabers inside of his Jedi coat hat he worn, walked up to the commander Commander RexWelcome to the republic Main base the home of the new Republic council Bruce I need to speak to the republic council Commander rexWhy, do you need to BruceWe got a SOS from the republic transporter on route to the Jedi Academy Commander RexOk since Luke skywalker, does not know that it happing BruceThanks So as there headed towards the Jedi council, The republic council launch an attack on Hoth to try to take it back from the empire. INT of republic base on naboo-republic council chamber around a round table the eight members of republic council Sat down with a few rebel guards inside Tomwhy have you come the republic council in this time of War BruceWe have an SOS from the republic transporter Ship heading to the Jedi Academy JedI think the empire is something to do with this BruceCan we sent a Small fleet near yavin 4 TomI suppose we could JedOK we sent a near by fleet right away BruceThanks So as Bruce ran out to give the order, the transporter Ship was badly damage outer rim - over Yavin IVThe transporter was still under heavy attack as all the engine blew up and the ship was heading on the crash course of Yavin IV, how ever a small republic fleet arrive with two big battleships, with fighter flying out of the hanger and the Heavy Blasters firing as well as the guns firing. Int republic transporter ship- command room as the fleet commander 'Hut walked into the control with a black hamlet on this and the green suit armoro with gold plats on it like the storm trooper armor. HutWhat Happing.. everyone tell me captain, 210Yes Sir, we are battling with a small fighters from the empire. HutGood, sent a code back to the coucil saying we have arrived Captain 210OK Sir but what er going to do for that transporter ship which is nearly crashing on Yavin IV Hutnothing but we must make sure that not another attack hits it Captain 210Right away Sir Int republic transporter- lobby The transporter Ship crash into the floor blowing up the Cockpit as well as as few Jedi, Nathan and Mary passed out after hitting the wall.after a day had passed all the Jedi was gone heading to the Jedi Academy then Nathan woke up just after Mary NathanWhat happen MaryI think we crashed landed, come on let check on the pilots NathanOK MaryDam there dead, come help me get this door down NathanAll you have to do is this (bang) the door drop off Marywe better head to the academy as it is nearly time Then after that split second, Nathan passed just as Mary was taken my a storm trooper. Nathan wake up Ext of Yavin IV- out the woodland Nathan jumped out of the transporter and look around as he saw a wood leading down to the river. He shout out of Mary but there was no reply. Then a very badly hurt Jedi was walking right up to Nathan. Nathan look shock as the Jedi kept walking towards him dipping blood onto the glass. As the trees move in the wind the Jedi drop into Nathan hands. ???Please Help NathanWhat happen to you ???storm troopers shot me Nathan thinkingWhy, are the storm troopers here. ???there also had a Jedi called Mary, I think there near the river NathanWere ??????At........ The badly hurt Jedi drop to the floor and before got the change to thinking about what he was going to do. Here pick me up a green color lightsaber which was still open. Then he ran in after Mary. Ext of Yavin IV- The woodland As Nathan ran in, here slice up two storm troopers guarding the Path to the river. The trees blew faster as the wind pick up more speed, Running down the Path he saw trees amd a few dead Jedi laying down dead. The sun started to go down, Nathan knew that there was not a lot of time left to get to the Academy but finally he saw Mary on the other side of river MaryNathan over here Nathanhow can I get you MaryCut the tree down NathanRight So with one slice of his lightsaber the tree fall and he ran across. the river was starting to flood as th water came down the waterfall. When Nathan got across the bridge Mary was unhurt. MaryThanks Nathan for saving me Nathan That alright but come on we must get to the Academy times running out. Maryright Lets move Ext of Yavin IV- outskirts of the Jedi Academy A gentle wind blew passed Nathan AND Mary as there was on the outskirts of the Academy. As the moved closer up ahead was a small group of strom troopers with a empire rookie Jedi. There Both jumped behind the rock. NathanDam, what we going to do MaryNot sure, but we have to get to the Acadmey NathanI could usemy lightsaber Marygo for it Then as he try the lightsaber would not work NathanDam it borke StormtooperGet them there over there Marysheet As there storm troopers hear the broke lightsaber, there rush across to were Nathan and Mary was hiding. there could not go anywhere as the empire rookie Jedi ran towards then with is lightsaber out But as hope was being lost a Jedi Master called Lee jumped down, slice the two stormtroopers as well as the Jedi with big, round Blue lightsaber. LeeAre you two alright NathanWho are you LeeI am a jedi master from the Acadmey, come I take you the short cut away MaryThanks Lets move NathanLets Then there ran off down the short cut. Ext of Jedi Academy- The entrance So as there arrive outside of the Jedi Academy Lee and Mary ran inside as Nathan climb up the Jedi Academy walls. When He got to the top he looked down seeing a few storm trooper as well as a empire Jedi Master talking NathanWhats going on here Then he ran back inside Int of the Jedi Academy- The lobby The 280 Jedi gather in six lines facing the font of the Acadmey, a short time later Luke sky walker walked out with two Jedi Master Lee, Zulu behind Him. He walked to the steps we lent down wth ithers. The jedi look around to see Luke skywalker. MoneyIt luke LukeThank you but, i have gather you all here today because, you Jedi need to learn the way of the force as well as using a lightsaber. NathanSo, what we doing Then MarkYes what Lukenow, am going to talk to you about the dark side of the force Marycool LukeThe dark side feeds on hate and if you ever feel hate you may turnto the dark side just like my father Anakin Skywalker Nathanwhen do we start training LukeWell, training will begin now, so pleasego to the location on this piece of paper. then Luke hand around the papers Int of the Jedi Academy- The Training room The door opened to the trianning was stand wiating for students to come in. As Nathan and Mary walked into the Training room there saw the same person as what saved them from the storm-trooper. NathanWhat you doing here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyubi20017 Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Plz take the pll. the vote will be counted in 24 hours if there is not vote it will be a posted it like a full episode and in a Script. plz comment and on the four choice it's ment to be like a book style but also in full episode lie I,II,III,IIII,V,VI. Poll closed!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Lol. It's in script format, and you claim it's to be done book-style. You've already heard my opinion; I'll bring down the rest of the Writer's Guild to prove my point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyubi20017 Posted April 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Lol. It's in script format' date=' and you claim it's to be done book-style. You've already heard my opinion; I'll bring down the rest of the Writer's Guild to prove my point.[/quote'] sorry, for nt book format but I am planning to sent this off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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