Winged Wolf of Divinity, Arek

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[spoiler=Lore]

This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied normally). When this card is successfully Special Summoned from your Graveyard, you can increase this cards ATK by 400. For every WIND card on your opponents field, you can decrease your opponents Life Points by 200. When this card is destroyed by a Beast-type card, destroy both cards.

 

 

 

 

Plz be nice and rate/correct. If you're going to be mean/cruel, atleast make it seem like constructive criticism.[/align]

[General Grievous]

I just see a couple errors in the description, but otherwise, it's a real nice card.

 

The description should be like this, though:

 

"This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied normally). When this card is Special Summoned successfully from your Graveyard, you may increase the ATK of this card by 400 points.* For every WIND card on your opponent's side of the field, you may decrease your opponent's Life Points by 200 points.** If this card is destroyed by a Beast-Type monster, both cards are destroyed."

 

* = Leave that sentence the way it is if you want that effect to be optional and up to the owner of the card, but if you want it to be a non-controllable effect, make it this, instead: "When this card is Special Summoned successfully from your Graveyard, increase the ATK of this card by 400 points."

 

** = The same as above; if you want the effect optional, leave it as is, but if not, make it: "Inflict 200 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points for every WIND monster your opponent controls."

 

 

And I think you'd need to specify whether or not the damage inflicted to your opponent is a one-time effect (as long as it's face-up) or a continuous effect, and happens every Standby Phase, etc.

 

8/10, though! Nice picture.