Bloodrun Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 [spoiler=Match 1][align=center]Ring Announcer: "The following contest is scheduled for One Fall!"Ring Announcer: "Introducing first, Master Level 1 Muten"!fog spills from the entrance a frail looking old man comes toddering towards the ring pulling a wagon full of magazines.he is wearing beach clothes consisting of a hawaiian shirt and shorts.Master Level 1 Muten makes his way to the ring....he has a turtle shell strapped to his back and walkes with a walking stick.as he gets to the ring he pulls the wagon up to his corner leans his staff against the wagon.technicians create a terrific choreography with coloured lights as he steps into the ringRing Announcer: "and his opponent, Bloodrun"!Bloodrun makes his way to the ringThe two wrestlers stare proudly at each otherand then engage in a exciting test of strength, trying to overcome their opponentafter a few, seemingly endless, seconds and an enormous effort Bloodrun prevailsBloodrun draws back his arm rocking his bodyand with a great strength punches Master Level 1 Muten's face performing a light Big Punch!!Bloodrun grasps Master Level 1 Mutenand slams him down to the mat performing a light Body Slam!!Bloodrun climbs the top turnbuckle and raises his fists holding them togetherMaster Level 1 Muten suddenly shifts dodging the Double Axe Handle, taking the initiativeMaster Level 1 Muten gets on the top turnbuckle raising his fists held togetherand throws himself toward Bloodrun hitting him with a light Double Axe Handle!!Master Level 1 Muten bounces off the top rope with Bloodrun lying face up on the mat then leaps at himand executes a 180 degrees horizontal rotation before crashing on Bloodrun connecting with a light Springboard Corkscrew Splash!!Master Level 1 Muten gets besides the laying opponentBloodrun avoids the Knee Stomp and counterattacksBloodrun charges the legand brings it down to hit Master Level 1 Muten with an light Angry Stomp!!Bloodrun gets close to his grounded opponentand strikes his forehead with a light Knee Stomp!!Bloodrun grabs Master Level 1 Muten's hairBloodrun and lunges himself on the ropesBloodrun runs toward Master Level 1 Mutendriving him down to the mat levering on an arm, performing a light Running Arm Drag!!Bloodrun climbs the top turnbuckle and raises his fists holding them togetherand jumps toward Master Level 1 Muten quickly lowering them, performing a light Double Axe Handle!!Bloodrun gets on the top turnbuckle with a jump and raises his fists to the sky holding them togetherand leaps toward Master Level 1 Muten quickly lowering them, performing a light Double Axe Handle!!Master Level 1 Muten pulls himself together and fights backMaster Level 1 Muten prepares the back of his handBloodrun dodges a Back Hand Chop, starting a counterattackBloodrun stares at Master Level 1 Mutenand hits his face with an light Ear Slap showing no respect!!Bloodrun loads his arm chop style andMaster Level 1 Muten moves and dodges a Forearm Smash, taking the initiative backMaster Level 1 Muten loads an arm towards himselfhits the rival quickly with his forearm performing a light Forearm Smash!!Master Level 1 Muten grasps Bloodrunand slams him down to the mat performing a light Body Slam!!Master Level 1 Muten gets close to his grounded opponentand strikes his forehead with a light Knee Stomp!!Master Level 1 Muten grabs Bloodrun's hairMaster Level 1 Muten and lunges himself on the ropesMaster Level 1 Muten waits for the running opponentlifting him by the arm to make his body fall on the back, performing a light Hip Toss!!Master Level 1 Muten grabs Bloodrun's hairMaster Level 1 Muten uses the right hand to grab Bloodrun's head,and kneels down, flipping him over his shoulder down to the mat, back first connecting with a light Snapmare!!Master Level 1 Muten bounces off the top rope with Bloodrun lying face up on the mat then leaps at himand executes a 180 degrees horizontal rotation before crashing on Bloodrun connecting with a light Springboard Corkscrew Splash!!Master Level 1 Muten gets ready to hit his opponentexecuting a light Low Dropkick!!Bloodrun pulls himself together and fights backBloodrun points to Master Level 1 Muten with decisionand hits his face with an light Ear Slap showing no respect!!Bloodrun loads his arm chop style andand tosses it towards the rival executing a light Forearm Smash hitting him with his forearm!!Bloodrun puts his opponent on his shouldersand lets himself fall on his back, executing a strong Modified Samoan Drop!!Bloodrun climbs the top turnbuckle and raises his fists holding them togetherMaster Level 1 Muten suddenly shifts dodging the a Double Axe Handle, taking the initiativeMaster Level 1 Muten gets on the top turnbuckle with a jump and raises his fists to the sky holding them togetherand jumps toward Bloodrun quickly lowering them, performing a strong Double Axe Handle!!BLOODRUN HAS A CUT!!!Master Level 1 Muten gets on the top turnbuckle raising his fists held togetherand leaps toward Bloodrun quickly lowering them, performing a light Double Axe Handle!!Master Level 1 Muten bounces off the top rope with Bloodrun lying face up on the mat then leaps at himat the same time executes a 180 degrees horizontal turn before landing on Bloodrun in the light Springboard Corkscrew Splash position.!!Master Level 1 Muten tries a pinning maneuverReferee starts counting.......1........2........3....INCREDIBLE!!! BLOODRUN a breaks the count by pulling the referee shirt!!Master Level 1 Muten is forced to get upMaster Level 1 Muten opens wide his armsand strikes Bloodrun's face with both hands performing a light Mongolian Chop!!Master Level 1 Muten brings his foot upBloodrun dodges the a Axe Kick taking the initiativeBloodrun loads an arm towards himselfand strikes him with his forearm executing a light Forearm Smash!!Bloodrun grasps Master Level 1 Mutenand slams him down to the mat performing a light Body Slam!!Bloodrun climbs the top turnbuckle and raises his fists holding them togetherand leaps toward Master Level 1 Muten quickly lowering them, performing a violent Double Axe Handle!!Bloodrun is about to perform his tauntBloodrun Bloodrun Jumps Up To The Second Rope Pointing Towards The Fans And Then Points To Himself And Back Flips Off The Rope executing The You Don't Know MeBloodrun climbs the top turnbuckle and raises his fists holding them togetherand leaps toward Master Level 1 Muten quickly lowering them, performing a violent Double Axe Handle!!MASTER LEVEL 1 MUTEN HAS A CUT!!!Bloodrun is about to perform his tauntBloodrun Bloodrun Jumps Up To The Second Rope Pointing Towards The Fans And Then Points To Himself And Back Flips Off The Rope executing The You Don't Know MeBloodrun tries a pinning maneuverReferee starts counting.......1........2........3....BLOODRUN WINS THE MATCH AND DEFEATS MASTER LEVEL 1 MUTEN !!!!Vote Master Level 1 Muten:Vote Bloodrun:Master Level 1 Muten exp point gained: 1Bloodrun exp point gained: 1 [/align] [spoiler=Match 2][align=center] Titan tron:type of match:Ring Announcer: "The following contest is scheduled for One Fall!"Ring Announcer: "Introducing first, Earths Royal Badass V.2!"!Hell Bringa makes his way to the ringEarths Royal Badass V.2 rules the universe!Ring Announcer: "and his opponent, Bloodrun"!Bloodrun makes his way to the ringThe two wrestlers stare proudly at each otherand then engage in a exciting test of strength, trying to overcome their opponentafter a few, seemingly endless, seconds and an enormous effort Bloodrun prevailsBloodrun prepares to strike the adversaryperforming a light Punch!!Bloodrun prepares to strike the rivallifting his own leg and hitting him with a light Middle Kick!!Bloodrun is ready to hit his opponentHell Bringa avoids the Knee Strikes and gains the initiativeHell Bringa uses the right hand to grab Bloodrun's head, pulling Bloodrun above his shoulder performing a Snapmareand kneels down, flipping him over his shoulder down to the mat, back first connecting with a light Snapmare!!Hell Bringa grabs Bloodrun's hairHell Bringa uses the right hand to grab Bloodrun's head,and then pulls his opponent forward, flipping him over his shoulder down to the mat performing a light Snapmare!!Hell Bringa gets close to his grounded opponentand strikes his forehead with a light Knee Stomp!!Hell Bringa gets besides the laying opponentBloodrun avoids the Knee Stomp and counterattacksBloodrun grabs Hell Bringa's hairBloodrun grabs one of his opponent's armd and swings him into the ropesBloodrun bounces on the ropes running towards his opponentstretching his arm hitting his back with a light Clothesline to Back!!Bloodrun pulls Hell Bringa still groggy, by his hairBloodrun grabs his opponent's trunksand falls backwards while turning, hooking Hell Bringa's leg with his legs and the other leg with his free arm,ending up on top of him, pinning him performing a light Small Package!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa kicks outBloodrun pulls Hell Bringa still groggy, by his hairBloodrun jumps placing his own feet beneath Hell Bringa's shouldersand makes Hell Bringa roll in a Rolling Crutch Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa points to the opponent with decisionBloodrun avoids an Ear Slap and takes the initiativeBloodrun prepares to strike the adversaryhitting him with a light Punch!!Bloodrun takes Hell Bringa's head with both handsstriking it with an light Head Butt!!Bloodrun grasps the opponentHell Bringa gets free from the Body Slam, taking the initiativeHell Bringa loads his opponent on his shouldersand throws himself backward crushing him on the ground, connecting with a strong Samoan Drop!!Hell Bringa grabs Bloodrun's hairHell Bringa grabs one of his opponent's armd and swings him into the ropesHell Bringa makes a dash against the ropes and runs towards his opponent,then he hits his back with his arm extended performing a light Clothesline to Back!!Hell Bringa approaches his laying opponentBloodrun avoids the Knee Stomp and counterattacksBloodrun grabs Hell Bringa's hairBloodrun grabs one Hell Bringa 's arms and spins, swinging him into the ropes, then lunges himself as wellBloodrun runs toward Hell Bringaand spins hitting him with a light Rolling Elbow Smash!!Bloodrun gets close to his grounded opponentand hits him executing a strong Knee Stomp!!Bloodrun grabs Hell Bringa's hairBloodrun grabs one Hell Bringa 's arms and spins, swinging him into the ropes, then lunges himself as wellBloodrun charges his elbowHell Bringa dodges the Back Elbow Smash and counterattacksHell Bringa hooks Bloodrun from behindhooking him by the arms sliding him across his back while falling performing a light Backslide Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Bloodrun kicks outHell Bringa is about to perform his tauntBloodrun capitalizes on his opponent's distraction and jumps on him!but Hell Bringa is faster and is not caught off guard!Hell Bringa stares at the opponent in front of himBloodrun avoids an Ear Slap and takes the initiativeBloodrun moves sideways and charges his right handand delivers a blow connecting with a light Side Mounting Punch!!Bloodrun jumps placing his own feet on Hell Bringa's shouldersand makes Hell Bringa roll in a Rolling Crutch Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa points to Bloodrun with decisionand smacks his face with an light Ear Slap!!Hell Bringa loads an arm towards himselfBloodrun moves and dodges a Forearm Smash, taking the initiative backBloodrun holds his opponentand fiercely strikes his throat with an light Uppercut!!Bloodrun grabs his opponent's trunksand falls backwards while turning, hooking Hell Bringa's leg with his legs and the other leg with his free arm, ending up on top of him, pinning his shoulders against the mat in a light Small Package!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa stares at Bloodrunand smacks his face with an light Ear Slap!!Hell Bringa prepares to hit the rivalBloodrun moves and dodges a Forearm Smash, taking the initiative backBloodrun swings his whole body backand hits Hell Bringa's face with a light Big Punch!!Bloodrun puts his opponent on his shouldersand throws himself backward crushing him on the ground, connecting with a light Modified Samoan Drop!!Bloodrun is about to perform his tauntBloodrun Bloodrun Jumps Up To The Second Rope Pointing Towards The Fans And Then Points To Himself And Back Flips Off The Rope executing The You Don't Know MeBloodrun pulls Hell Bringa still groggy, by his hairBloodrun grasps Hell Bringaand lifts him up, slamming him down to the mat performing a violent Body Slam!!Bloodrun prepares the footand hits Hell Bringa with an light Angry Stomp!!Bloodrun prepares the footHell Bringa rolls over causing Bloodrun to perform an a Angry Stomp in vain losing the initiativeHell Bringa gets close to his grounded opponentand strikes his forehead with a strong Knee Stomp!!Hell Bringa gets on the top turnbuckle raising his fists held togetherand throws himself toward Bloodrun hitting him with a light Double Axe Handle!!Hell Bringa gets on the top turnbuckle raising his fists held togetherand leaps toward Bloodrun quickly lowering them, performing a light Double Axe Handle!!Hell Bringa is about to perform his tauntBloodrun capitalizes on his opponent's distraction and jumps on him!but Hell Bringa is faster and is not caught off guard!Hell Bringa points to the opponent with decisionBloodrun avoids an a Ear Slap and takes the initiativeBloodrun stares at Hell Bringa in front of himand hits his face with an light Ear Slap showing no respect!!Bloodrun loads an arm towards himselfand tosses it towards the rival executing a light Forearm Smash hitting him with his forearm!!Bloodrun puts his opponent on his shouldersand throws himself backward, trampling him with strong Modified Samoan Drop!!Bloodrun grabs Hell Bringa's arms between his legsand throws him forward in a pinfall position performing a Recliner Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa stares at Bloodrunand smacks his face with an light Ear Slap!!Hell Bringa prepares to hit the rivalBloodrun moves and dodges a a Forearm Smash, taking the initiative backBloodrun jumps placing his own feet beneath Hell Bringa's shouldersand makes Hell Bringa roll in a Rolling Crutch Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa stares at Bloodrun in front of himand gives him an light Ear Slap!!Hell Bringa prepares to hit the rivaland strikes him with his forearm executing a light Forearm Smash!!Hell Bringa puts his opponent on his shouldersBloodrun climbs down his rival's shoulders dodging the a Samoan Drop regaining the initiativeBloodrun jumps placing his own feet beneath Hell Bringa's shouldersand makes Hell Bringa roll in a Rolling Crutch Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa stares at the opponentBloodrun avoids an a Ear Slap and takes the initiativeBloodrun hugs his opponent's headand hits him right into his face with a knee strike executing a light Knee on Head!!Bloodrun grabs Hell Bringa by an armand pulls him down with an light Arm Drag!!Bloodrun charges the legand brings it down to hit Hell Bringa with an light Angry Stomp!!Bloodrun pulls Hell Bringa still groggy, by his hairBloodrun jumps placing his own feet beneath Hell Bringa's shouldersand makes Hell Bringa roll in a Rolling Crutch Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa points to Bloodrun with decisionand gives him an light Ear Slap!!Hell Bringa loads an arm towards himselfhits the rival quickly with his forearm performing a light Forearm Smash!!Hell Bringa lifts his opponent on his shouldersBloodrun climbs down his rival's shoulders dodging the a Samoan Drop regaining the initiativeBloodrun is about to perform his tauntBloodrun Bloodrun Jumps Up To The Second Rope Pointing Towards The Fans And Then Points To Himself And Back Flips Off The Rope executing The You Don't Know MeBloodrun grabs Hell Bringa's arms putting it between his legsand throws him forward in a pinfall position performing a Recliner Pin!!Referee starts counting.......1........2....Hell Bringa gets up and resolutely fights backHell Bringa points to Bloodrun with decisionand gives him an light Ear Slap!!Hell Bringa loads an arm towards himselfand strikes him with his forearm executing a light Forearm Smash!!Hell Bringa grasps Bloodrunand slams him down to the mat performing a strong Body Slam!!Hell Bringa is about to perform his tauntBloodrun capitalizes on his opponent's distraction and jumps on him!catching Hell Bringa off guard!Bloodrun prepares to strike the rivalHell Bringa moves to the side avoiding a a Middle Kick and goes to the counterattackHell Bringa prepares to hit the rivalhits the rival quickly with his forearm performing a light Forearm Smash!!Hell Bringa loads his opponent on his shouldersBloodrun climbs down his rival's shoulders dodging the a Samoan Drop regaining the initiativeBloodrun gets on the top turnbuckle raising his fists held togetherand jumps toward Hell Bringa quickly lowering them, performing a light Double Axe Handle!!Bloodrun approaches his laying opponentHell Bringa avoids the a Knee Stomp and counterattacksHell Bringa gets close to his grounded opponentand hits him executing a light Knee Stomp!!Hell Bringa gets on the top turnbuckle raising his fists held togetherand throws himself toward Bloodrun hitting him with a strong Double Axe Handle!!Hell Bringa is about to perform his tauntBloodrun capitalizes on his opponent's distraction and jumps on him!catching Hell Bringa off guard!Bloodrun prepares his arm to strike the adversaryHell Bringa moves to the side eluding a a Punch and taking back the initiativeHell Bringa stares at Bloodrunand hits his face with an light Ear Slap showing no respect!!Hell Bringa loads an arm towards himselfBloodrun moves and dodges a a Forearm Smash, taking the initiative backBloodrun moves sideways and charges his right handand strikes his opponent right on his jaw, performing a light Side Mounting Punch!!Bloodrun lifts his opponent on his shouldersHell Bringa climbs down his rival's shoulders dodging the a Samoan Drop regaining the initiativeHell Bringa lifts his opponent on his shouldersand throws himself backward, trampling him with strong Samoan Drop!!Hell Bringa grabs Bloodrun's hairHell Bringa grabs one of his opponent's armd and swings him into the ropesHell Bringa bounces on the ropes running towards his opponentBloodrun gets down and avoids the a Clothesline to Back. gaining the initiativeBloodrun gets on the top turnbuckle with a jump and raises his fists to the sky holding them togetherand throws himself toward Hell Bringa hitting him with a light Double Axe Handle!!Bloodrun gets on the top turnbuckle with a jump and raises his fists to the sky holding them togetherand leaps toward Hell Bringa quickly lowering them, performing a light Double Axe Handle!!Bloodrun is about to perform his tauntBloodrun Bloodrun Lifts His Head And Beats His Chest He Then Raises His Right Arm And Points Towards His Opponent And Yells The Words I Own You executing The DeclarationBloodrun tries a pinning maneuverReferee starts counting.......1........2........3....BLOODRUN WINS THE MATCH AND DEFEATS HELL BRINGA !!!!Vote Hell Bringa:Vote Bloodrun:Hell Bringa exp point gained: 1Bloodrun exp point gained: 1Go back to Main Board![/align] Lol the reason I am posting this is because one, those member writing a Wrestling Fan-Fic lack on the match details and inspiration.Two, I was playing a wrestling game, and both of these matches, I almost lost >_> Oh, and in case your wondering, the name I was going to originally pick was already taken, >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. tl;dr: No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is, and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Fanfics are novels. This isn't a novel. And yes, I noticed you said that you were playing some sort of game, but I thought you were using it as an inspiration. I could rewrite this properly, but I don't have the resources atm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Fanfics are novels. This isn't a novel. And yes' date=' I noticed you said that you were playing some sort of game, but I thought you were using it as an inspiration. I could rewrite this properly, but I don't have the resources atm.[/quote'] When I was getting at "this is how to write and fan-fic wrestling MATCH"I wasn't talking about the structural writing, I was talking about the fact that its not just: So-so gets in the ring, so-so hits, person B, person B falls, Person B gets up and hits so-so, Person B pins so-so. The wrestling fan-fics that are being written, are not expressing what is actually happening in the match, even though it is a made up match, the reader is not drawn into the tension of the match, it's just a big block of letters, whose pay off, is not worth the read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Lol, wrestling. Sadly I'm not interested in this :( I hate soapoperas. :/ But I'm sure it was good considering that you wrote it. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Lol' date=' wrestling.[b']Lol?[/b]Sadly I'm not interested in this :(That's what she said! I hate soapoperas. :/But girls do, why wouldn't you want to get laid? But I'm sure it was good considering that you wrote it. :)Huh? I didn't write the match. :? Do you mean that I wrote the thread? Im also assuming you meant that as an attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Lol' date=' wrestling.[b']Lol?[/b]Sadly I'm not interested in this :(That's what she said!Heh-heh I hate soapoperas. :/But girls do, why wouldn't you want to get laid?:| I'll rape them if it comes to this point. :P But I'm sure it was good considering that you wrote it. :)Huh? I didn't write the match. :? Do you mean that I wrote the thread? Im also assuming you meant that as an attack. It wasn't an attack. :) I thought you wrote the match things too. Hmmmmmmm.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 Lol' date=' wrestling.[b']Lol?[/b]Sadly I'm not interested in this :(That's what she said!Heh-heh I hate soapoperas. :/But girls do, why wouldn't you want to get laid?:| I'll rape them if it comes to this point. :P But I'm sure it was good considering that you wrote it. :)Huh? I didn't write the match. :? Do you mean that I wrote the thread? Im also assuming you meant that as an attack. It wasn't an attack. :) I thought you wrote the match things too. Hmmmmmmm....Lucy, youz got some expwainin' to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Because of your PM's "Please, comment my fan-fic""I was wondering, why you guys haven't commented on my fan-fic""Remember, I always like reading new replies to my fan-fic when I get up""Please, Please comment my fan-fic" Lol, just because people comment, doesn't mean they read the whole thing. The bolded, explains my reasoning, for Fan-Fics (Wrestling) being so damn lazily written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Because of your PM's "Please, comment my fan-fic""I was wondering, why you guys haven't commented on my fan-fic""Remember, I always like reading new replies to my fan-fic when I get up""Please, Please comment my fan-fic" Lol, just because people comment, doesn't mean they read the whole thing. The bolded, explains my reasoning, for Fan-Fics (Wrestling) being so damn lazily written. I meant that I barely read any of yours. It's just boring. People don't want to sit and read a three-page long Wrestling Match. What's wrong with sending the PMs? Especially when pretty much everyone has told me it's okay. Some people even prefer it because they don't always remember to check for a new episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 The PMs are to alert our fans and readers when a new episode is released. What you wrote is worse than ragnarok and Blaze. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Because of your PM's "Please, comment my fan-fic""I was wondering, why you guys haven't commented on my fan-fic""Remember, I always like reading new replies to my fan-fic when I get up""Please, Please comment my fan-fic" Lol, just because people comment, doesn't mean they read the whole thing. The bolded, explains my reasoning, for Fan-Fics (Wrestling) being so damn lazily written. I meant that I barely read any of yours. It's just boring. People don't want to sit and read a three-page long Wrestling Match. What's wrong with sending the PMs? Especially when pretty much everyone has told me it's okay. Some people even prefer it because they don't always remember to check for a new episode. Why to not read the Intro. I didn't write this, it is off of a game. Why write, when you don't read? It's like being a cop, and not following the rules.Or being a taxmen, when your 100,000 dollars in debt. The PMs are to alert our fans and readers when a new episode is released. What you wrote is worse than ragnarok and Blaze. Ladies and Gentlemen, two writers who don't read. Way to not evolve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Because of your PM's "Please, comment my fan-fic""I was wondering, why you guys haven't commented on my fan-fic""Remember, I always like reading new replies to my fan-fic when I get up""Please, Please comment my fan-fic" Lol, just because people comment, doesn't mean they read the whole thing. The bolded, explains my reasoning, for Fan-Fics (Wrestling) being so damn lazily written. I meant that I barely read any of yours. It's just boring. People don't want to sit and read a three-page long Wrestling Match. What's wrong with sending the PMs? Especially when pretty much everyone has told me it's okay. Some people even prefer it because they don't always remember to check for a new episode. Why to not read the Intro. I didn't write this, it is off of a game. Why write, when you don't read? It's like being a cop, and not following the rules.Or being a taxmen, when your 100,000 dollars in debt. The PMs are to alert our fans and readers when a new episode is released. What you wrote is worse than ragnarok and Blaze. Ladies and Gentlemen' date=' two writers who don't read. Way to not evolve.[/quote'] Why not read? Because it was incredibly boring. I'm not going to read something if it's not interesting. There's a difference between using detail and using too much detail. Plus, you can be a writer and not a reader. I love to write, but I don't like to read, unless it's one of Umbra's Fan-Fics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 [spoiler=Long quotes]This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Because of your PM's "Please, comment my fan-fic""I was wondering, why you guys haven't commented on my fan-fic""Remember, I always like reading new replies to my fan-fic when I get up""Please, Please comment my fan-fic" Lol, just because people comment, doesn't mean they read the whole thing. The bolded, explains my reasoning, for Fan-Fics (Wrestling) being so damn lazily written. I meant that I barely read any of yours. It's just boring. People don't want to sit and read a three-page long Wrestling Match. What's wrong with sending the PMs? Especially when pretty much everyone has told me it's okay. Some people even prefer it because they don't always remember to check for a new episode. Why to not read the Intro. I didn't write this, it is off of a game. Why write, when you don't read? It's like being a cop, and not following the rules.Or being a taxmen, when your 100,000 dollars in debt. The PMs are to alert our fans and readers when a new episode is released. What you wrote is worse than ragnarok and Blaze. Ladies and Gentlemen' date=' two writers who don't read. Way to not evolve.[/quote'] Why not read? Because it was incredibly boring. I'm not going to read something if it's not interesting. There's a difference between using detail and using too much detail. Which is exactly why your fan-fic is boring, not enough detail. Plus, you can be a writer and not a reader. I love to write, but I don't like to read, unless it's one of Umbra's Fan-Fics. Yes you can be a writer and not read. But you will never be estinguished as a writer if you fail, to go the roots of where writing comes from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 [spoiler=Long quotes]This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Because of your PM's "Please, comment my fan-fic""I was wondering, why you guys haven't commented on my fan-fic""Remember, I always like reading new replies to my fan-fic when I get up""Please, Please comment my fan-fic" Lol, just because people comment, doesn't mean they read the whole thing. The bolded, explains my reasoning, for Fan-Fics (Wrestling) being so damn lazily written. I meant that I barely read any of yours. It's just boring. People don't want to sit and read a three-page long Wrestling Match. What's wrong with sending the PMs? Especially when pretty much everyone has told me it's okay. Some people even prefer it because they don't always remember to check for a new episode. Why to not read the Intro. I didn't write this, it is off of a game. Why write, when you don't read? It's like being a cop, and not following the rules.Or being a taxmen, when your 100,000 dollars in debt. The PMs are to alert our fans and readers when a new episode is released. What you wrote is worse than ragnarok and Blaze. Ladies and Gentlemen' date=' two writers who don't read. Way to not evolve.[/quote'] Why not read? Because it was incredibly boring. I'm not going to read something if it's not interesting. There's a difference between using detail and using too much detail. Which is exactly why your fan-fic is boring, not enough detail. Plus, you can be a writer and not a reader. I love to write, but I don't like to read, unless it's one of Umbra's Fan-Fics. Yes you can be a writer and not read. But you will never be estinguished as a writer if you fail, to go the roots of where writing comes from. My WWE Legacy Fan-Fic used to be a lot worse than it is now. And if you want detail, just look at my Land of Nightmares Fan-Fic. But whatever, I'm not here to advertise, I'm here to make a point. This has too much detail, whereas WWE Legacy has a good amount. Sure, it could probably be a little more detailed, but a lot of people don't enjoy reading for hours on end, so it's better to not go overboard with detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 [spoiler=Long quotes]This is not how to write a fanfic. This looks like written-out script for an online wrestling game. Because that's what it is' date=' and that's why this thread was dismissed as being completely wrong. If wrestling fanfics were written like this, nobody would read them, period.[/quote'] Lol, nobody reads them anyway already. There isn't a right and wrong, theres only the way you like it. Also, it is from a auto script, and it is from a game, Nitton, way to not read the intro. If nobody reads them, tell me, why does WWE Legacy (mine and Swift's Fan-Fic) have nearly 700 posts? This is not how it's done. I can tell that, and I've barely read any of it. Because of your PM's "Please, comment my fan-fic""I was wondering, why you guys haven't commented on my fan-fic""Remember, I always like reading new replies to my fan-fic when I get up""Please, Please comment my fan-fic" Lol, just because people comment, doesn't mean they read the whole thing. The bolded, explains my reasoning, for Fan-Fics (Wrestling) being so damn lazily written. I meant that I barely read any of yours. It's just boring. People don't want to sit and read a three-page long Wrestling Match. What's wrong with sending the PMs? Especially when pretty much everyone has told me it's okay. Some people even prefer it because they don't always remember to check for a new episode. Why to not read the Intro. I didn't write this, it is off of a game. Why write, when you don't read? It's like being a cop, and not following the rules.Or being a taxmen, when your 100,000 dollars in debt. The PMs are to alert our fans and readers when a new episode is released. What you wrote is worse than ragnarok and Blaze. Ladies and Gentlemen' date=' two writers who don't read. Way to not evolve.[/quote'] Why not read? Because it was incredibly boring. I'm not going to read something if it's not interesting. There's a difference between using detail and using too much detail. Which is exactly why your fan-fic is boring, not enough detail. Plus, you can be a writer and not a reader. I love to write, but I don't like to read, unless it's one of Umbra's Fan-Fics. Yes you can be a writer and not read. But you will never be estinguished as a writer if you fail, to go the roots of where writing comes from. My WWE Legacy Fan-Fic used to be a lot worse than it is now. And if you want detail, just look at my Land of Nightmares Fan-Fic. But whatever, I'm not here to advertise, I'm here to make a point. This has too much detail, whereas WWE Legacy has a good amount. Sure, it could probably be a little more detailed, but a lot of people don't enjoy reading for hours on end, so it's better to not go overboard with detail. If it's a good read, anyone will read it for however long they need to. I am commenting about wrestling fan-fics, no other fan-fics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted February 28, 2009 Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 This has too much detail' date=' whereas WWE Legacy has a good amount. Sure, it could probably be a little more detailed, but a lot of people don't enjoy reading for hours on end, so it's better to not go overboard with detail.[/quote'] Time to step in with my 0,02 Euros. In all honesty, these match logs do have the right amount 0f moves. The way the text is structured would be unacceptable in any fanfic, but it goes into enough detail for a match to look realistic. This is actually the kind of length, the kind of moves a Main Event match should have. If you're describing a match, you can't leave out reversals, drop toe holds and other smaller moves, or else it'll seem like the entire thing is all about huge grapples and Irish Whips, which is unrealistic. As Bloodrun said, if it's written properly, and I'll add, if the setup for the match was properly done and advertised (i.e., PPV Main Event Matches), then yes, fans will read the whole thing and thrive on the detail. Believe me, I'm on that side. ;) That said, these logs are probably not the best way to find that extra detail, as they are poorly written and the moves are articulated awkwardly. Still, it's a game, and within those parameters, it's alright. Not acceptable for a fanfic, but all the details of a real match are in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted February 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2009 This has too much detail' date=' whereas WWE Legacy has a good amount. Sure, it could probably be a little more detailed, but a lot of people don't enjoy reading for hours on end, so it's better to not go overboard with detail.[/quote'] Time to step in with my 0,02 Euros. In all honesty, these match logs do have the right amount 0f moves. The way the text is structured would be unacceptable in any fanfic, but it goes into enough detail for a match to look realistic. This is actually the kind of length, the kind of moves a Main Event match should have. If you're describing a match, you can't leave out reversals, drop toe holds and other smaller moves, or else it'll seem like the entire thing is all about huge grapples and Irish Whips, which is unrealistic. As Bloodrun said, if it's written properly, and I'll add, if the setup for the match was properly done and advertised (i.e., PPV Main Event Matches), then yes, fans will read the whole thing and thrive on the detail. Believe me, I'm on that side. ;) That said, these logs are probably not the best way to find that extra detail, as they are poorly written and the moves are articulated awkwardly. Still, it's a game, and within those parameters, it's alright. Not acceptable for a fanfic, but all the details of a real match are in there. Lol the game was created by a "foriegner"(sp), I say that, because I don't know exactly where is from. And you can tell he speaks a different main language, as some of the normal american aren't properly written. But yeah, you get what I am trying to say. In the script, the color of the wrestlers name, changes on the "health" of the superstar. The same thing goes for the moves, except they change based on the "strength". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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