Nman4479 Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 Check out this Kratos card pleas rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitemare452 Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 a lot of OCG...If you would lower it to 8 and reword it, it wouldnt be a bad card...O and a clearer picture would be cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
World Eater Gig Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 Don't need to lower the Level, Nightmare. Once its over 7, they all take 2 Tributes. As far as game-play is concerned, anyway. Actually, its probably better that its a high level, cause their the ones who normally have Special Summon conditions.This guy is ridiculously strong. Sorry, but I need to say that. 200 ATK for every warrior in the Graveyard? Damn, the average Warrior deck has at least 20 Warriors, so at best, we'll say ten are dead. 10 X 200 is 2000... way too strong. Give him a Special Summon condition, and lower the boost to attack to 100.I'll correct your current OCG for you, since I'm feeling nice. It should read something like this."When this Monster is successfully Summoned, increase its ATK Points by 200 for every Warrior-type Monster in the Graveyard."Don't quote me on that, though. I'm pretty sure there's a mistake in that somewhere. His name should also read 'Kratos, God of War', not 'Kratos God of War'.Still, not bad, especially if you haven't been here for long. Keep trying, you'll get it right soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nman4479 Posted March 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 Thank you for your comments here is my new version of the card after taking the comments into consideration. I didn't know how to phrase a special summon so I skipped it, but I rephrased the effect and got a new picture I hope you like it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 "When this monster is successfully Normal Summoned" type should be Type Its level is bit high. Change to 8. You do know your supposed to give image credit. I rate it 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 5/10a lot of OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
World Eater Gig Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Better then before. I won't rate it, but, compared to some of the dribble you can find here, its good. Don't listen listen to Kataroninja on the Normal Summoned part. If you change it to Normal Summon, its effect won't activate on a Special Summon (unless you want that). I still think you need to give it a Special Summoning condition, though. If you don't give it one, then make it a 8 star.Don't worry, "When this Monster is successfully Summoned" is a Card effect. i've seen it before.Kataroninja is right, though. It's Type, not type.Keep working at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheNightRider96 Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 6.5 out of 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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