VAZURE Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 My first effort to put up some cards. Please let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
World Eater Gig Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 Okay, some corrections for your Cards. We'll start with Allies. First, no blank lines, EVER. Second, make it a Trap Card. It suits its effect better.Next, Super Pervert Jutsu. The first sentence should read "This Trap can only be activated by Releasing 1 'Naruto Uzumaki' and paying 700 Life Points." As of the introduction of 5ds, tribute has been replaced by Release. Opponent should have a capital O, too.For the Forth Hokage's Legacy, remove the empty lines. First line should read "When this Spell is activated, select 1 of the following Effects:". Hand shouldn't have a capital, either, and Deck should (second effect).For Ultimate Defense, it should read "This Trap", not "This Card". Good, otherwise.Will of Fire, likewise, should be "This Spell", not "This Card".Well, I must say that its better in concept then some of the dribble we get around here. Keep trying, you'll get there.P.S. Super Pervert Jutsu, ditch the captions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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