Infernalhero Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Ok.As I said,I have a new set planned out.And I need much criticism.This way I can work out my kinks and what not.So heres the first cvard in my new set. [spoiler=Maverik]"Guardian Blitz"+"1 or more Non-Tuner monsters"This card can only be Synchro Summoned.When this card is Synchro Summoned,this card gains 200 attack for every monster with "Guardian" in it's name.If this card destroys a level 6 or lower monster,this card loses 300 attack points. I'll have the Tuner up in a matter of minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 I don't know much about Synchro. I'll just say it seems about right. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a coffee Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 What's with the losing ATK points? Still, not bad. Uherm, 7/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Cause hes meant to be a big hitter in GUARDIAN decks,which is what ill hopefully make,just in set form.So,usually,in my opinion I'd run him as the round winner cause of his ability to increase for every GUARDIAN card.So naturally I,and maybe some others,would run him for when the graves full of GUARDIANs,giving him the biggest boost of a lifetime.And it's hard to me it kinda balances him out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 How many cards are there with the name "Guardian"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 I don't mean those Guardians,actually the difference was the Capitalization,or is that not enough?That's what I was getting at,these are new cards,with no tie to any old,so I capitalized the word,but again,is that not enough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Not really. *laughs* OCG fix:"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. When this card is Synchro Summoned, this card gains 200 ATK for every face-up monster that includes "Guardian" in it's name on the field. If this card destroys a level 6 or lower monster as a result of battle, this card loses 300 ATK." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 It's not. There has to be further distinction, though I highly doubt that you'd bother running the other obscure "Guardian" named monsters if you're planning a set. Also, there has to be specification as to its source for gaining ATK. Meaning, does he get 200 for each Guardian on the field, each face-up Guardian your opponent controls, each Guardian in your Graveyard, or a combination of those? Not much to say about this, since it's part of a set in progress, while there's nothing about it that stands out as unique. 7/10, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Would you suggest a different name then?And I'll fix it,sorry about that.Thanks for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Trying to decipher from the picture, but I don't know how it clashes with your other pictures. Auraguards/Aura Guards, Darksides, I really don't know. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 I'm sorry.What do you mean?Being gone for so long,I kinda got lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Would you suggest a different name then?And I'll fix it' date='sorry about that.Thanks for the help.[/quote'] Trying to decipher from the picture' date=' but I don't know how it clashes with your other pictures. Auraguards/Aura Guards, Darksides, I really don't know. >_>[/quote'] ^ Was referring to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Oh.I get it.Sorry there really is no certain style.They'll be different types pics effects,everything.But they'll support eachother in some way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Meh...Not thorough enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyrnen Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 The OCG needs to be edited. Otherwise it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ғαlşє 0ρρяєşşịợи Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 OCG is good, remember to put spaces after periods though :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacoby746 Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 GUARDIAN=Guardian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sargentkillzone Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 i think the card is definitely good but u have a few spelling errors and that card has great attack position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
underneathean Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Ya, it needs some kind of name change and a specification on where the "GUARDIAN" monsters need to be to increase its attack. I really like the effect though, it has a lot of creativity. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AxelJeff Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Nice. But the loseing atk points thing shold go. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 u got some OCG errors but im sure ur already aware from the other members XDcool idea and another amazing pic by fatherwolf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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