DeMeNTeD vs. Nitemare452 - OVER[LOCK]

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Any monster card

 

No holoing done to the pic.

 

Winner: 3 +reps

 

End date: 24 hours after both cards are up.

 

1st person to post a card will be my opponent.

 

My card:

 

Effect:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters

This card cannot be Summoned from the Graveyard. All Battle Damage this card inflicts is also treated as Effect Damage. Once per turn, during your opponent's Battle Phase, if this card is in Attack Position, you can pay 500 Life Points to select 1 monster on your opponent's field. The selected monster must attack this card this turn. The selected monster is not destroyed by battle (Battle Damage inflicted to your opponent is halved). All monsters this card destroys by battle are treated as Defense Position monsters. The Battle Damage inflicted to your opponent is equal to half the difference between this card's ATK and the DEF of the destroyed monster.

[Nitemare452]

Well ill give it a try I guess

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set, it can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2000 of your Life Points. Once per turn you can send a monster to the Graveyard to increase this cards ATK by half of the tributed monsters ATK. When this card battles a monster in Defense Mode, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

[.Gideon.]

augh Damn I wanted to be your opponent 8)

 

 

Nitemare ur doing a big mistake challanging this dude

Good luck !

[Nitemare452]

well Ive never done one and I know hes goin to win

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Alright. My card is up. Voting can begin.

[GHawk]

DeMeNTeD is getting my vote. Nightmare452 has OCG errors and DeMeNTeD I can't find any on your card. Plus, I just like DeMeNTeD's card better overall.

[.Gideon.]

I like nitmare's effect more,

I'm really not inrerested in DemeNTeD's effects ! :p ( that was rude >_< )

 

 

but my vote goes to DeMeNTeD, reasons:

OCG + pic

 

Good luck 2u both !

[Shiranui]

First card

[tommers2008]

Demented gets my vote, nitemare's card has numerous ocg errors and is a tad op'd and demented's effect is more interesting..

[Debrom]

I vote for card 1(demented).

[Carbon V3]

DeMeNTeD of corse.

[rodri666]

My vote goes for the DeMeNTeD's card, good pic, OCG and a creative effect.

[Nitemare452]

well its safe to say I lost, bad to. So congratulations Demented. so can people tell me where my OCG errors where..I know I left out a comma but what else?

[Angel Of Death]

demented

[.Requiem]

I voted and my vote is my vote.

[§hadow §triker]

Demented. Awesome effect. OCG is perfect. Both pics are good though.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

well its safe to say I lost' date=' bad to. So congratulations Demented. so can people tell me where my OCG errors where..I know I left out a comma but what else?

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Here's a fix:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 2000 of your Life Points. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control. This card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the Tributed monster. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster your opponent controls whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, your opponent loses Life Points equal to the difference.