Raelen Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 I'm back with a new card! ^_^ [spoiler=Card Lore]When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, send this card to the Field Card Zone. (If there is already a card in the Field Card Zone, destroy this card.) While this card is face-up in your Field Card Zone, each time you take damage, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of the damage inflicted to your Life Points. Image credit: http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20warrior/loyal_warrior/Dark_Warrior.jpg?o=8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 WARHAMMER 40K FTW!!!sweet card just for the pic :)wrhammer rulezoriginal eff to nice job ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 WARHAMMER 40K FTW!!!sweet card just for the pic :)wrhammer rulezoriginal eff to nice job ^_^ Lol, I just picked it cause it looked cool! =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 WARHAMMER 40K FTW!!!sweet card just for the pic :)wrhammer rulezoriginal eff to nice job ^_^ Lol' date=' I just picked it cause it looked cool! =P[/quote']well...good choice!! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Very good card! Nice pic, good effect and i think there is no OCG errorz! Great work! 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Oooh, another monster idea that utilizes the Field Spell Zone. I like it. Image looks sweet. Lemme see if I can tweak the OCG (It might not be 100%): When this card is destroyed by battle, place this card face-up in your Field Spell Zone. This effect cannot be activated if a Field Spell Card is on the field. If a Field Spell Card is played, destroy this card. While this card is face-up in your Field Spell Zone, when you take Battle Damage, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the damage inflicted. Think that's right. If it's not, then somebody please fix it. The balance is good as well. Very nice job, dude. Sailor Stud Says: 9.5/10 for you >=3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Thaynx, everyone! I'm glad you like it!SaTuRn, thaynx for the fix. It's been a while since I've made a card, so I'm a bit shaky. ^_^Thaynx again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 maybe being as these are space marines, the type Machine would be appropiate. card may be OP, i know 1800 ATK isnt alot for a 5-6 star, but still, its undestructable. and teh half damage thingy, thats quite powerful. maybe... 7+ stars, with 2100 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 and you did a pretty good job with it as well. The pic is pretty good and your ocg is already been fixed. Maybe increase its ATK and DEF by a bit because its a 5 star monster which normally has over 2000 points. I rate it a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Wow. This from the person who is "Shaky"!! ^_^ 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Hey...wait a sec...I used the same image for my Templar of the Shadow Priory card! This is the card: [spoiler=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Hey...wait a sec...I used the same image for my Templar of the Shadow Priory card! This is the card: [spoiler=] So? Again, 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Hey...wait a sec...I used the same image for my Templar of the Shadow Priory card! This is the card: [spoiler=] So? Again' date=' 10/10[/quote'] I just want to point that out, because some images here are overused and I never thought that image would be used again because it's a hard image to find for the exact kind of image I wanted for my Templar monster idea...that's all...:\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daichi159 Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Very Good Very Good 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Hey...wait a sec...I used the same image for my Templar of the Shadow Priory card! This is the card: [spoiler=] So? Again' date=' 10/10[/quote'] I just want to point that out, because some images here are overused and I never thought that image would be used again because it's a hard image to find for the exact kind of image I wanted for my Templar monster idea...that's all...:\ Lol, okay... I just looked on Photobucket... @ Marvel™: Maybe Machine would work. Didn't think of that.Also, how is it indestructible? It can be taken off of the field pretty easily and even when it is in the Field Card Zone, if someone activates a Field Spell Card, it gets destroyed...Half damage is pretty powerful, but it's only half of what is inflicted to you, thus it's not too powerful. If a Blue Eyes White Dragon attacks you directly with 3000 ATK, that's only 1500 damage to your opponent. Also, I'd rather not raise the ATK or the level.Thaynx for the suggestions, though! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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