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Black Capricornus (Dark Synchro)


Jace Beleren

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this my first ever Dark Synchro card

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[spoiler=Lore]1 non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner monster

In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card. When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap cards until the end of the Damage Step, Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT or DARK monster from your hand or Deck

 

 

plz rate and comment + OCG fix

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1 non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner monster

In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card. When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap cards until the end of the Damage Step, Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT or DARK monster from your hand or Deck.

 

Fixed just a little bit (Just added a comma and period; nothing insane)

 

As for the card itself, it looks very nice. Maybe a little too strong for its Level - especially with the last part of the effect. Either you should reduce the ATK of this card OR ditch the last part of the effect. If you choose to lower the ATK of this card (Only by about 100 or 200 due to the effect, methinks), you should also tweak the last part of the effect ever so slightly - perhaps to:

 

Once per turn, you can (cost: Pay LP or something) to Special Summon 1 (Level restriction would be nice) LIGHT or DARK monster from your hand. (Deck is a bit much)

 

If you can fix those little quirks, then this card would be balanced.

 

8/10 for you >=3

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OCG fixed by Devil! The card is a bit OP'd! You should then at least make it:

''Once per turn, you can pay 800 Life Points, to Special Summon 1 LIGHT or DARK monster from your hand or Deck.''

 

OR

 

''Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT or DARK monster from your hand.''

 

So take out the last effect or make a price or make it that you can Summon only from your hand.

 

8/10

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