Skirts Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 Here are some Angels I have been working on. Lemme know what you think, and I do accept constructive crtiticism is accepted. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 I think the first card is a bit overpowere Lower its ATK and make it so it cant be normal summoned but can only be special summoned by tributing 3 monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 1st is OP'd! Both have bad OCG! Meh effects = 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 Yeah the frist one is over powered but other than that like one OCG error 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Thanks guys, I'll change it up. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 The correct spelling is "Despair".The first pic doesn't really look like an angel. The 2nd pick doesn't exactly look like an angel of despair to me. It looks more like an angel of grace or war coincidentally.The first card is slightly OP, as it opens the opponent up for a direct attack on top of all that. I suggest not allowing it to attack the turn it is summoned, or make the summoning criteria harder. The 2nd one is good, but almost as hard to summon as gate guardian, making it not a very viable card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Slightly OP? It's a one-sided Chaos Emperor Dragon, and combined with something like Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen, you could concievably perform an FTK without much strategy. Make it so she only gets her effect through a Tribute Summon and she can't declare an attack on that turn. Otherwise, it's broken as hell. And yeah, you're about as likely to pull off Gate Guardian as Angel of Despair's effect. And yeah, Despair's pic doesn't fit his effect at all. If you'd like to see a REAL Angel of Despair, see the Miracle at Twilight set in my sig. Good concept, poor execution. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Okay, thank you guys. I will rework The Angel of Despair.Thank you! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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