Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok this is my entire Zakarum set so far as i have it. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 different "Zakarum" monsters. Once per turn during your Standby Phase you can discard the top card of your Deck and activate the appropriate effect.*Monster- Increase this monsters attack by the number of stars x 200.*Spell- Inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.*Trap- Destroy one card on the Field and switch the position of this monster and it cannot be switched back until your next turn. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle against a dark monster. Once per turn during your Main Phase you can discard one card from the top of your Deck to your Graveyard. If the card is a monster increase this monsters attack by the number of stars x 200. Once per turn you can discard one card from the top of your Deck to return a monster that includes "Zakarum" in it's name to your Hand from your Graveyard. If the monster is level 4 or lower you can Special Summon that monster to the Field. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle against a dark monster. Once per turn during your Main Phase you can discard 3 cards off the top of your deck to Special Summon 1 level 7 or higher monster that includes "Zakarum" in it's name from your Hand to the Field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle against a dark monster and is unaffected by effects of dark monsters. When this card battles a face-down or dark monster that card is destroyed without flipping or applying damage calculations. ok so now here is the time for my lvl set. this is what i care mosta bout so definitely give me feedback on it especially...of course i still want feedback on the others too. This card cannot be destroyed by battle against a dark monster. During your Standby Phase you can tribute this face-up card to Special Summon a "Paladin of Zakarum Lv. 4" from your Hand or Deck. This card cannot be destroyed by battle against a dark monster. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Paladin of Zakarum Lv. 2" this card negates the effects of any dark monster that it destroys as a result of battle. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroys a monster as a result of battle you can tribute this card to Special Summon a "Paladin of Zakarum Lv. 6" from your Hand or Deck. This card cannot be destroyed by battle against a dark monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of dark monsters. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Paladin of Zakarum Lv. 4" then during the End Phase of the turn this card destroys a monster as a result of battle you can tribute this card to Special Summon a "Paladin of Zakarum Lv. 8" from your Hand or Deck. This card cannot Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Paladin of Zakarum Lv. 6". This card cannot be destroyed by battle against a light or dark monster. You can choose to negate the effect of any dark monsters as long as this card remains face-up on the Field. ok now for my newer cards This monster cannot be destroyed by battle against a dark monster. As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field other "Zakarum" monsters cannot be selected as attack targets. You can discard 2 cards from the top of your Deck to negate the activation of a Spell card and remove it from play. All "Zakarum" monsters on the field gain 400 attack. All monsters on the Field other than "Zakarum" monsters become Dark monsters. Each time a "Zakarum" monster destroys a monster as a result of battle the respective owner of the destroyed card discards 1 card off of the top of their Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Realy good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Nightmare? :S The card is fantastic. However, the picture is bad...DeviantArt is your friend. 9.4/10. Absolutely fantastic for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 I don't like it that much. The effects are too weak for the risk. Example: "hey look its a spell and you take 500 damage, yes! wonder what I discarded? Lightning Vortex.......#$%^!!!" Big jump in quality from your previous work. You're learning fast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 good point but if he can work with the fact that hes gona have alot in the grave like the lightsworn the it dose not mater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 yea, just remembered what lightsworn does lol. *silly moment* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 yea i think i might boost it up to 1000 damage maybe but i thought that would over power it a bit...i still need to make quite a few cards for this set such as a version of judgement dragon for zakarum and cards that will help me with the discarding...the thing about this deck is that the discarding is all optional unlike the lightsworn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Meaning you can switch strategy if someone has figuerd out lightsworns weeknes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok my new updated thread with my entire collection :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 cool all of them are brill against dark but if your opponent has no dark monsters then the effects are ussles apart from the first four but two of them are built to get the ones that are only useful against dark.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Nice cards and pics 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 yea i am thinking about making them all immune to certain things...i made a dark version to fight against light that is almost the exact equal to my lvl set...the whole point of the zakarum is a holy thing that fights against the minions of darkness so i think that it should apply only to dark but of course they will mostly have the main dark effect but there will b other cards to balance it to a deck that can face any kind without much trouble without dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok can't wait to see it, im realy intrested in this deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 DNA Transplant is froshing at the mouth for these cards. Love them all. OCG errors and bad pictures get you an 8.9/10. But seriously, this deck can seriously screw over a lot of popular stuff in the metagame right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok anybody posting here can u plz also check out my glaedr-dragon of dawn and my Brisingr-dusk rage dragon somehere on the thread page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 did not think of that why not a feild spell or continuos spell to change all enemy to Dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 yea make it kinda like zombie world...maybe i will do that...and give a bonus to zakarums slightly like lightsworn or gladiator beasts field card but i need a more original thing to do than the lightsworn counter thing where they gain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 have the gain asosiated with the amount of cards in the grave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 yea but i am going to make some cards that mix the graveyard with the deck or the card that goes with the lightsworn that does that would b adequate. otherwise u would deck out too fast. also i think i will have a card like light spiral but just discards them instead of removing them from play Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 have the gain asosiated with the amount of cards in the grave. No. 100x is too much, 50x is too cheesy. "All "Zakarum" monsters gain 400 ATK. The Attribute(s) of all face-up monsters your opponent controls are also treated as DARK. Each time a DARK monster is destroyed by battle, both players send the top card of their respective Decks to the Graveyard." Just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 have the gain asosiated with the amount of cards in the grave. No. 100x is too much' date=' 50x is too cheesy. "All "Zakarum" monsters gain 400 ATK. The Attribute(s) of all face-up monsters your opponent controls are also treated as DARK. Each time a DARK monster is destroyed by battle, both players send the top card of their respective Decks to the Graveyard." Just a thought.[/quote'] yea i do like that but i think i might make it just my opponent discards or sumthing. o and btw i am about to post a new zakarum card onto my collection Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 not badnew card is good talk about defence and it works for the offence set up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok so now i am awake again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 First timer, amazing job. I didn't do nearly as good as a first timer. Pictures don't match the cards, and a few OCG errors. Effects could use some work. Other than that. you're fine. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok so i have my new field spell added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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