Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Eradicator dragon Knight goes with my zakarum set but like judgement dragon for the lightsworn it is technically not a zakarum. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned unless you have 3 different "Zakarum" monsters in your Graveyard and 2 of any "Zakarum" monsters on your side of the Field. This card is also treated as a dragon. This card cannot be destroyed by battle against a DARK monster. This card is unaffected by monster effects. Once per turn you can remove from play all DARK monsters on your opponent's side of the Field and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each monster removed this way. If you use this effect you cannot attack this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 I like this card. A few OCG errors though. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andre007 Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 fuzzy pic, ocg errors, overall 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Bad pic. Errors here and there.Better than the last though. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok now i am curious at to what the ocg errors are. i kno i made a few but i am not sure what i messed up on b/c i make them on all my cards from what i understand but nobody has pointed out the specific errors to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 GraveyardDARK monsteret cetera... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 o ok so yea the graveyard i normally get right but i always forget to make it DARK and stuff like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 OCG stands for Official card grammar. It is the way the words are written, and when words have not been capitilised when they should be (example - graveyard should be Graveyard)and vice versa (example Monster should be monster. 1 example here is that you put "dark". The correct grammar is "DARK" You spelt destroyed wrong For me, the image let the card down, its a bad image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 woops i must have not payed attention to the spelling on destroyed and i will get a new pik b/c yea i agree it it horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 I've used this pic before. I have to say, your effect was more direct, but it seems a little complicated to bring out. I like it. Just to show I'm not lynig here is mine, I made it about a year ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 ok i changed the pik and made it a warrior that is also treated as a dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Awesome! I only spot one itsy bitsy error. "Card" should be lowercased. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 o ok i will change that nowok that Card is changed now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 A card that's a dragon? O,x Spooky. You meant "This card is treated as both a Warrior- and Dragon-Type monster." If JD weren't the god of the metagame ibidem, and I could actually see these Zakarum, this might be actually useful because of DAD/Chaos Sorceror. However, against Lightsworn Twilight, Glads, SixSam, MacroMonarchs... or anything that runs non-DARK monsters... this is pretty much worthless. It could be tough to maintain sufficient field advantage to Summon this. EDIT: IT'S UNAFFECTED BY MONSTER EFFECTS. Well, now it's just broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 well u can go to my other thread that has my zakarum cards its somewhere on either this page or the next and i am going to try to add cards to balance out stuff. and it is hard to get out depending on the situation so i made it 3300 and unaffected my monster effects so that it wouldnt b crap against a non dark deck. spell and traps can still kill it tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Link to the thread, or post the cards here. Obviously, S/Ts can kill it. I guess it can be unaffected due to its underwhelming destruction effect... still, it seems a tad broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke107165 Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 yo tommy its joe decent job too many errors though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 well i have a card that makes all monsters dark so the effects are good...i guess i can post this link to my others Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 pic could be better...try having someone put a holo on it...other than that...minor ocg errors, but still a good card overall. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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