cris181 Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 How'd i do yah guys? Like I said, this is my first card so if you could give me some pointers that'd be great! Peace! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 wow a flip effect over level 6 first one iv ever seen good allrownder 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 a few ocg errors but nothing major...idk if that should be a 2 trivute mosnter b/c i dont think when somebody attack it that it counts as a flip summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 if your opponet flips it thats not a flip summon.but thats ok cus if they attak it they die if they don't you flip it and it becomes worth the tribute and there monster dies eney way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betrayd Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 yea i guess so ...i guess that balances it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 I like it, some OCG errors, good picture, good effect, original idea, and because it's a very good first card. I give it a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cris181 Posted March 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 hey thanks alot for replying and giving some pointers, fill me in on some of the language here, what do you mean when u say OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Official Card Grammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 If you're going to make a 2-Tribute flip effect, you should make it a little stronger, b/c it's almost a given that your opponent will attack it. maybe raise the ATK to 2500 or 2600 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Correct OCG: FLIP: Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If this card is Flip Summoned successfully, it gains 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Two-Tribute Flipper? AI DIG IT!! Pic is also epic. Fix the OCG, then 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 OCG is "Original Card Grammer" which is the cards description and how it is written.Once again, good card. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 OCG: FLIP: Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If this card is Flip Summoned successfully, this card gains 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cris181 Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 thanks you guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God-Card-Master Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Part slate warrior, part man eater bug. Considering it's 2 tributes and only 2400 ATK and that you'll rarely get the chance to utilize its ATK increase effect, I'd rather run a man eater bug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 OCG: FLIP: Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If this card is Flip Summoned successfully' date=' this card gains 500 ATK.[/quote'] I've fixed it and your version is the same as mine, except you replace "it" in the last sentence with "this card", which is an inefficiency of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDW Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Why would you EVER set a two tribute monster? Decent first effort, but no one would ever use it unless they were choosing between it and a thousand eyes idol. Think of it this way: This card or Blue Eyes White Dragon. BEWD is superior because it is GUARANTEED 3000 ATK, can be fused, and doesn't have an effect which could otherwise hurt it in game. 1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cris181 Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 MDW what do u suggest to better the card? Increase the amount of ATK? or decrease amount of stars? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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