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[Skirts]

Here is a card that I was working on while I was wanting to come up with a card similar to "Graceful Charity", so I made it a monster. Tell me what you think, and constructive criticism is accepted. :]

Here it is:

[cursedhydra]

Great card!10/10

[Skirts]

Why thank you! ^_^

First good comment I've had in a while. :]

+1 rep for you! xD

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

It's an attacking "Graceful Charity." I do like the idea, but I think the second part should be changed to something like "When this card successfully attacks your opponent, you can return 1 card to your Deck. The Deck is then shuffled and you draw 1 card"

[Skirts]

It's an attacking "Graceful Charity." I do like the idea' date=' but I think the second part should be changed to something like "When this card successfully attacks your opponent, you can return 1 card to your Deck. The Deck is then shuffled and you draw 1 card"

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Actually, now that I think about it. I love your change, thank you! What's your rating? :P

[Jovi Siagian]

Correct OCG: When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 3 cards then discard 2 cards. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, draw 1 card.

 

Oh, well, I'll give you 8/10.

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

8/10

I think you should also lower the defense...DARK monsters DEF stats tend to be low...maybe 1000?

[Skirts]

Heh, thanks guys. And thank you Jovi for the correct OCG. :]

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There, I updated it! What do you think now?:]

[Bull3tM0nk3y]

Great card! 9/10 here's how it is meant 2 b.:

"Select 1 card on the field and return the card to the owner's deck."

[Skirts]

Great card! 9/10 here's how it is meant 2 b.:

"Select 1 card on the field and return the card to the owner's deck."

I meant for the effect to be how it is. But thanks for the rating and the fixing. :]

(Not trying to be an a**, I wasn't saying that rudely. 'Scuse my language.)

[SuperheroDecks]

hehe personly i love it

=P better then what most people come up

with even though im new iv been browsing loads of

posts and none of them are original I think this one is very

original an attacking version of graceful charity i love it :D

(I think warrior monsters usualy tent to be earth type) but i still

think Dark type suits the card better -- by the way all of the

people who focus on how well structured the card is sometimes

its about if it fits i may be new but i have been dueling in Yu-Gi-Oh

tournements scince i was 8 hehe those were the good days hehe my

first deck was Joey's -- 10/10

and not just because were friends =P

i think this card realy deserves it

[MDW]

Isn't Graceful Charity banned?

 

If it is, why wouldn't this card be?

 

It's definitely overpowered with all the draw power though.

[Andx]

I love that a DARK monster is generating cards. My only suggestion is to specify where you return the card to the deck from after it attacks. Other than that I like it, 8/10.