Lev2005 Posted March 8, 2009 Report Share Posted March 8, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Zane is OPed in ATK. So is Syrus. Remeber, they're just humans, and Syrus is kind of a weak, nerdy type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assegai Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Shouldn't Zane be able to summon a pwn monster... I don't know... Cyber-something, wasn't it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lev2005 Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 its because zane is syrus brother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Unless the card was changed since ironmanben's post, Zane's ATK/DEF is fine, there are plenty of 6 star monsters with similar stats. Syrus' ATK/DEF are a little high for a 3 star, though. Zane's ability is also a little powerful; you should either reduce the frequency with which it can be used, or include a cost of some sort. BTW Assegai, I'm pretty sure Zane's monster is "Cyber Dragon". If I remember right, that monster was reduced to only one copy being legally allowed in decks, so the effect Lev has is probably more balanced. Also, OCG: - 'Normal Summoned', 'Special Summoned', and 'Graveyard' should all be capitalized. - 'their' in Syrus' card should be 'its' - 'When this card is Normal Summoned' should have a comma after it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenIsAGreatBand Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 What the... so I find out that these are your first cards and the only sort of response you get are a bunch of complaints? Like srsly, I know that people here are trying to be helpful but we shouldn't spare the compliments just because of that! Now I'll be the first to say this: These cards are great for your first try! I hope you'll have fun making more! 8/10 :D So what I'm trying to say is, listen to what others have to say about your cards but don't take it to seriously! (^-^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 OCG is not so good. Pics are fine. Effects are a little to simple. Not too bad though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Hey, I gave constructive advice; if nothing else, it's better than all the bozos who just say "There are OCG errors" and leave it at that. I'm just trying to be helpful by giving hints on what can be improved. Admittedly, I didn't mention in my last post that they are good cards, especially for a first try, so I am now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheNightRider96 Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 yeah the cards are pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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