IkaruTak Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Hello yugimakers I'm new in the forum and here I they present my first booster-pack (yesterday fact to today xD). Some new strategys and anothers strategies for not so new, cards for almost all the tastes and my creation "God-Type" Monsters (well... I think that it's my creation xD)Here you have them: Please coment!My next booster: Angelic Force & extras. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 You have a lot of potential I'll tell ya that. There's still room for improvement, but the main thing is your Official Card Grammar or OCG. Work on that. Keep up the good work :) 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imadjinn Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 For such a positive comment, 4/10 is a pretty low score. ^^; Some good cards, some broken cards, some that are meh. Generally nice art. Text isn't too strong, but I can understand it so it's alright. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Its not bad for newbies. Need some OCG improvements and dont forget to put the artwork credit.Some of them are overpowered, some of them are awesome. Cool. 7/10. B- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IkaruTak Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Well I found all the pics in google but who make it... I don't really now, respect the errors in the cards.. I'm mexican and my english isn't perfect xD I take ahmm... the example of my own cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 See I'm sort of disappointed, because I absolutely LOVED some of your pictures and names, like I really like the "Kingdom of Gods" card, but then I read the effect, and it is kinda, eh unoriginal and unrealistic. Your pictures got better and better, but btw, for the the first 5 cards, that like "Set", if you would've posted that alone, I probably would've gave you a 2/10, sorry, but I don't think there good at all. But overall, 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IkaruTak Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 kk, Yes, I... really exaggerate with Kingdom of Gods, believe that I'll change the effect, suggest something to me, and if the first ones 5 were really bad cards but well... in the first 5 I was more newbe than... in the following xD but well, thank you for the critiques. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
god_duel Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 when you new pack is on?:? this pack is awesome for new:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IkaruTak Posted February 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Hell yeah! I'm back xD, ahmm... sry if I am breaking non-rebirth rule or something, I'm actually working on a Fenix Feather pack :B so wait it.. the Newbie is come back! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metanite Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 jace as a thunder god...and chandra i see wat u did thar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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