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This is my first contest and it is about-------->Warriors.

Only 5 members can join and I need 1 Judge.Judge will get 1 rep.

Entry fee is-------->10 points

It is only 1 winner--------->6 reps and nothing else

Others------->3 points

Contesters:

1-Nightmare452

2-Megadriver

3-Anro

[email protected]

5-Lovemoon

Judge:

1-Snitch

This contest will end when All cards will be posted.

You can only post 1 card.

All YCM rules aplly.

No swering,spaming and flaming.

You must post Pic credite.

Have fun and Good luck.

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well im in and here is mine

178320.jpg[spoiler=Effect]This card can be Special Summon if, "Arthur Pendragon, King of the Dragons" is on the field. This card gains 100 ATK for each Warrior-Type Monster on the field. When "Uther Pendragon, Defender of the People" battles a Fiend-Type Monster, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent.

 

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I like warriors so I will enter:

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When this card is Summoned, switch the Battle Position of all face-up monsters on the field (except this card). Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 Warrior-type monsters in your Graveyard. If you do, this card can attack twice during this Battle Phase only. When this card destroyes a monster in Defense Postiton by Battle, your opponent cannot enter their Battle Phase during the next turn.Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard.

 

 

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I am going to reserve 1 spot.

Here is my card:

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When a Warrior-type monster you control is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can pay 1000 life points to special summon this monster from your hand or graveyard.Add 1 "Polymerization" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. This effect can only be activated once per turn, during your Standby Phase.

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[Judging Format

Name : Max of 1 point.

Pic : Max of 3 points.

Effect: Max of 4 points.

OCG: Max of 2 points.]

 

Nitemare452 (nice name.)

 

Name: Well, it's interesting, but it's a bit weird. The name seems a bit long in my opinion, having a whole full name following by a title is a bit much. Maybe "Uther, Defender of the People" would be better, but meh. 1 point given.

 

Picture: Well, it's very nice and looks good, but the dragons throw me off. If he's defending people, why is he staring at dragons? Of course, that also branches off to he's defending people from dragons, which works I guess. It's well cropped (if cropped) and doesn't look blurred - good job. 3 points given.

 

Effect: It's not exactly an original effect, instead a sort of overused one. I dislike how it's an easy Special Summon with no cost, as long as this certain card is on the field. The 100 ATK boost seems a bit UP at first, but it's ATK makes up for it. The Fiend-type effect is rather random, and I think something like, "increase this card's ATK by 300 when battling a Fiend-type monster." would have worked better. 1 point given.

 

OCG: A few minor errors spotted:

 

This card can be Special Summon if, "Arthur Pendragon, King of the Dragons" is on the field. should be:

This card can only be Special Summoned if "Arthur Pendragon, King of the Dragons" is face-up on your field.

 

Warrior-Type Monster should be, Warrior-Type monster

 

When "Uther Pendragon, Defender of the People" battles a Fiend-Type Monster, can be simply put as, When this card battles a Fiend-Type monster. 1 point given.

 

TOTAL : 6/10

 

megadriver

 

Name: Okay, this kinda sucks and looks incredibly rushed, but, the name fits with the pic, so I'm gonna give you it. 1 point given.

 

Pic: Well, it flows, but it's not exactly...realistic? I mean, you're supposed to be going for cards you find in real life, and this doesn't really fit the mark. 1 point given.

 

Effect: Seems kind of OP, being able to remove your opponent's Battle Phase causing them to defend again most likely, and stuff like that. I sort of am against this effect as it doesn't really flow with the card itself - nothing music-like or guitar-ey. The double attack makes it even more OP, and the removal effect seems unncessary. 2 points given.

 

OCG: Well, more errors. D:

 

Warrior-type should be, Warrior-Type.

by Battle should be, by battle

during their next turn.Once per.. - there should be a space after the period.

1 point given.

 

TOTAL : 5/10

 

anro

 

Name: Well, it's interesting, but 'the' shouldn't be capitalised methinks. ^-^ 1 point given.

 

Pic: Works with the name and goes well with the card. 2 points given.

 

Effect: Well, the effect is rather jumbled and placed wrongly. The first part is original, so I'll give you a point for that, and it works due to his low ATK and DEF for a high-star. The last part of the effect is worded wrongly, and seems slightly OP. 2 points given.

 

OCG: As the first part is your own effect, I can't say how to word it. ^-^

 

When this card is destroyed it is removed from play. When this card is removed from play you can draw 3 cards from your Deck would be better as, When this card is destroyed, remove this card from play and draw 3 cards from your Deck.

 

REMEMBER PERIODS! 1 point given.

 

TOTAL : 6/10

 

[email protected]

 

Name: Okay, really one of those 'wtf o.O' moments. 0 points given.

 

Pic: Works with the epic-weird name sort of, but isn't too great. 1 point given.

 

Effect: Well, the first part is pretty good, but the second is poorly worded and jumbled up. 1 point given.

 

OCG: Very poor here, I'm just going to re-do the whole effect.

 

When a Warrior-Type monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, you can add 1 "Polymerization" from your deck to your hand.

0 points given.

 

TOTAL : 2/10

 

Lovemoon

 

Name: Meh, sory of works. Should be a space between the comma and Dark, and it's a bit weird (Dark Sword Lady Warrior, lolwut?) but I'll let it slide. 1 point given.

 

Pic: Works with the name, but isn't anything great. S'all I can say. 1 point given.

 

Effect: Nice first effect that works with pierce, and it balances with the card's low ATK. Good job! 3 points given.

 

OCG: Meh, some minor errors.

 

battle position should be, Battle Position.

the attacking card = this attacking card

the ATK of this card inflict = the ATK of this card, inflict

 

1 point given.

 

TOTAL : 6/10

 

So, looks like we have three joint-winners! Congratulations Nitemare, anro and Lovemoon for winning this contest! Congratulations me for judging! :D

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The effect from him goes with a set im working on, and its not he can only be special summoned. Uther Pendragon was king arthurs father, and It's suppose to be like that just a little extra way to get him on the field. The Dragon thing in the background is there because the dragon was there family crest.

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