Anarchy805 Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 O.K. Here are a few cards i been trying to do. TUX Warrior. This card is limited to 2 in the deck Soulreaper TUX. This is limited to 1 in the deck.and is gonna be lvl 4 when i get round to redoing it. The Shoe Bomba is an inegral part of this deck as you will see soon more to come as soon as i get round to uploading them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Penguin ichigo's ATK is a bit overpowerd apart from that i like em 8/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knil "Shadow Link" Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Nice, ummm 8.5/10 keep workin at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Thanks for the support guys i will get to sorting the other cards out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Well OCG errors for the first thing >.< Why penguins? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 next one in the line up is TUX Marine.I know its like the gadgets but i need 3 to do my fusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 there the linux mascot TUX :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 OCG Errors seem to be the order of the day. but a little constructive criticism would be helpful instead of ambiguous quotes such as 'This card has bad OCG' or'Well OCG errors for the first thing >.<' some constructive quotes or an example of a better OCG for the card wouldn't go a miss.but that having been said i am off to make some more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 heres what I think (When this card is Special Summond you may search your deck for 1 "TUX marien" and add it to your hand. When there are two or more monsters with TUX in there name this card cannot be destroyed as a resolt of battle.) that with better speling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 OCG Errors seem to be the order of the day. but a little constructive criticism would be helpful instead of ambiguous quotes such as 'This card has bad OCG' or'Well OCG errors for the first thing >.<' some constructive quotes or an example of a better OCG for the card wouldn't go a miss.but that having been said i am off to make some more cards. I know what you mean; it's gotten to the point that every time I see someone post something like that, I wonder if they actually did see any OCG errors or whether they were just saying it to sound smart. Anyway, first thing is that the combined ATK and DEF of your monsters seems a little high for their level. As for OCG: - "Special Summoned" is capitalized. - "Deck" is capitalized. - "side of the field" is just "field" now. - "Life Points" is capitalized. There were a couple others, but I'm not sure if what I would replace them with is actually right or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Thanks PyroWildcat good to see some constructive criticism. will get round to updating them probably tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.