NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 I know I just posted a card but heres another hope its a bit more origanal. pleas help me perfect this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Hello there. The picture you have is quite interesting, but I think a change possibly, I'm not very found of pictures that have writing on them. Now as for the effect, well first off there are OCG errors and spelling mistakes, but who doesn't make a mistake hm? I believe that the card needs to be rewritten, however, I am a bit old on my OCG right now to give actual constructive advice on that part, so, I shall keep that to myself for now. The card idea is very neat. I give you eleven Happy Julia Roberts out of Eighteen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 someone help me make this better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rizikin Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 fase = Phase. attak = attack. OCG errors. I like the concept. The card is too cheap; try to give a bigger cost - 2 cards? 1000 LP? And, maybe you should try to put in some chaos like removing the monster and just attacking directly. rating: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 eney more problems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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