Choke Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 My new card. Need help with it, seems wordy to me and don't know how to reword it. Image Credit goes to =TheGuardianDragon on deviantART for the image. Rates/Comments/Fixes Effect: "Hyozanryu" + "Crawling Dragon"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards on your side of the field. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card is sent as a Tribute for a Level 8 or higher Dragon-Type monster, negate the effect of the Summoned monster to reduce the monster's DEF to 0 and increase the ATK of the monster equal to half of the ATK of this card. If the Summoned monster is destroyed, the owner of this card cannot Summon a Dragon-Type monster for 10 turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 okay kinda cool but its a bit costly 7/10 brilliont pic by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Bad pic, not a really good effect, try harder next time. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Hm, I say, the picture you have is quite lovely ^^ The card it's self is not too shabby. I believe the effect needs to be looked over, possibly something different, it isn't terribly appealing. I give you seven frosted cupcakes out of twelve. Keep trying, your doing an awesome job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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