Silent Omega Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 If you see the Hi with the italics...It means the thing is out of the story....Such as someone talking... Due to the fact that I've been mixing my Fanfic with Scholwork, I have decided to set up a Schedule for the seven days.[spoiler=Week Schedule]Sunday:Working Monday:WorkingTuesday:Not WorkingWednesday:WorkingThursday:Not WorkingFriday:WorkingSaturdar:Working Working=I'll be working on the Fanfic.Now Working= I'll be taking a brak friom the Fanfic. [spoiler=Book 1:The Beginning(Uncomplete)][spoiler=Chapter 1:A fate Worse than Death][align=center]I'll tell you a story...This story is about the Devil himself...And his trusted hunters...These Hunters hunt for the devil in exchange for something valuable...Here's a story I'll hope you'll listen to... The open reaches of Hell...They stretch as far as the eye can see...They'll fool you..For they'll kill you for a feast with the Devil.Those unwanted Deaths...They'll become servants working for exchange.These charcters are known as the Devil Hunters.There are 3 in fact...that will do just about anything to kill their foe...and that counts as the Devil... The Bell ringed. A Young man woke up,He has white-silver hair and a blindfold over his eyes. He got out of Bed wearing no shirt and a blue jean. ".....What next?...." he said, He started putting a shirt on with the word DH on it. Then he put on a jacket and walked downstairs from his house and into the living room. "Boss?" He said again,Then he walked outside his house and stopped in front of a school. "Boss?" He asked again,this time with more rage. "What!!!What do you want?" "Ahhh there you are...." The young Man started walking into the Forest and looked at a cloaked shape. "If you're looking for a job...Then you'll have to wait....For now you'll have to go to School again like the other kids..." "Undercover?I should've killed you when I had the chance..." "But you didn't....You had a soft spot for me didn't you...Alex..?" "NO....I don't...I'll just leave...." "Goodbye....Son.." Alex stopped, He looked back at the Cloaked Shape. "Don't..call me that.." The Cloaked shape smirked and pulled off his Hoodie.His head was covered in flames, so was his hands and legs, His Face was bony and thin like a Skeleton. "Hehehe....Sure...After all....You're my hunter and I'm only.... the Devil...HEhehe..." Too much story for you?If not then Bad luck because this chapter....is finished..[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 2:Brothers....][align=center]Let me tell you something...If it's one thing I hate it's brothers and this guy can't stand being around him...For someone so grumpy all the time his brother seems happy.... The bell ringed as all the students came in... "....So this is the High School...." Alex stood in front of the school walking to the main door,Besides him was a smaller figure...walking with him "This is the school?" "Well Ryan what else?" Ryan looked at Alex,His brother, And continued walking....,Alex was 17...His brother was 16.... =-+=-+CLASS=-+=-+ Class had started and the two boys were yet to be introduced... "Good Morning Class..." The Teacher said. "Today we have 2 new students please make them feel welcome..they are brothers..Now these two kids are Alex...And Ryan..Boys please find a seat.." Alex walked unto the very back of the class and sat on a chair,Ryan walked slowly to the back,Some of the girls giggled as he passed and he flashed them a smile...Then sat next to Alex.. "I'm starting to like this School already..." Said Ryan... Alex punched Ryan in the guts with his elbows... "Don't get any attention..." Alex sighed. "Sometimes you are an annoying damn Brother..." "Hey same for you!..." Both of them laughed a bit then looked at the Teacher... "Is that him?" Asked Ryan "Yeah...That's the Vampire we've been looking for...."[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 3:Better than any Weapon...][align=center]Vampires...They're horrible...Only a Stake and Garlic can kill them...But...Heres another thing it can get killed by...A Human...If you call it a Human...,Anyway in this Part of the Story it's only a battle... ----AFTER CLASS---- After Class everyone was told to leave to Lunch...except a 16-year old Girl who was told to stay with the Teacher... "May, I would like you to stay here...." "Yes sir..." Alex and Ryan looked one last glance at The Teacher then walked out the classroom door. The Teacher closed the door and locked it... "Uh, Sir why did you lock it?" The Teacher smirked...Then smiled at May with a smile that would send shivers down your spine... "Because...My student....That way nobody can stop me!!" The Teacher's skin turned Blue,His eyes turned red and his teeth grew sharp. "AAAHHH!!!" "Quiet my little butterfly...Or else you will be killed!!" May quieted and The Vampire looked at her with a glare...A hypnotizing glare...Then the Door bursted open.... "Wha?!!!" The Teacher shouted as he looked at Alex who had knocked the door down... May snapped off the Transformation and looked at Alex... "You can't kill a vampire Alex!!" Shouted May... "Quiet!!!Or Like I said I will kill you.....Now...Alex...I have treated you as a fine new student but now I Will kill you!!" The Teacher rushed at Alex with glistering speed but As the Teacher got in a foot's range he was punched by Alex,He flew back and slammed against the wall... "I'm not a student...." Alex rushed to The Teacher and glaredat him... "What?wHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO NOW?!!You can't kill me..." Alex shrugged as he put his hands INTO the Vampire's Heart... "AARRGHHHHH!!!" The Vampire screamed... "He.....he..." Alex smirked then twisted his hand,As he did that the Teacher yelped in pain...Then the other students came in,They then saw what happened.... Which means...Bad luck..[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 4:Murder or not?][align=center]The Students became filling in the Classroom as they say Alex,His bloody hands,And A killed Teacher.Alex looked at the Teacher,He returned to his Disguise... Police started filling the School as they arrested Alex. "Ryan...You know what to do..." was what he said as he went inside the Police car and taken away. Ryan nodded, Then he turned to face the Classroom and took the Body.While Everybody else was outside shocked of what happened he escaped the School with the body... XXXXX JAIL XXXX "So Kid what did you do?" asked one of the Questioners "You already know..." answered Alex... "Phft can anybody get a word out of this kid?" A Police officer walked in, and whispered to the Questioner "We have a child who we think is connected to this Murder.." "Then get him/her in..." The police officer nodded and walked out,A minute later Ryan walked inside and smiled "Uh..Hi Alex..." Alex grunted and facepalmed....[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 5:Breakout!!][align=center]"Ahh so you two do know each other?" Alex smirked, "Of course..." Then Ryan got it.... "Yeah...We do...We're buddies!!" Alex closed his eyes in embaressment Buddies? "Y-yeah Buddies....." He replied.... The Questioner frowned.... "Fine if that's the way you two want it then have it your way..." XXX PRISON XXX Alex and Ryan was stuck in the same Prison room.... "Buddies!!That's what you could come up with?!!" "Hey at least I said something Smart Guy!!!" Ryan started pushing Alex and Alex pushed back...The two argued until Alex finally said.. "Alright!!Alright!!Let's stop and let's think how we can get out of here..." The two then started at each other than started to laugh... "Hahahahha How we can get out of HAHAHa Let's HAha Go..." said Ryan... "Ok HAhaa...." replied Alex... Alex and Ryan stopped laughing and faced the wall....Then Alex put his hands into it and punched it...The wall broke.. "Well that was fast..And I thought you were gonna chant like those other guys..." said Ryan. Alex and Ryan ran through the woods, Escaping from the prison... If they only knew what would happen next...[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 6 part 1:Old Friend/Unwanted Battle][align=center]Alex and Ryan ran unto an Open clearinf in the Forest...Then they stopped for they heard a noise... "Ryan do you hear that?" "I do...." One of the bush rustled and a Minotaur came out... "Halt!!Who are you!!" The Minotaur recognized Alex...Then it ran up to him "Alex!!It's me!!" "How do you know my name?!!" "But it's me!!Doriam!!" Alex looked at the Minotaur then at Ryan... "Ryan...I want you to continue on further without me..." Ryan nodded and went further on into the Forest... "You're Doriam?" "Yes it's me!!" "I Believe you...But I still have to kill you!!" Alex punched at the Minotaur, But with Great Speed Doriam dodged his attack. "Alex please!!I don't want to fight!!" Alex took a punch again.Doriam dodged it again this time... "I Don't too!!But I'm a Hunter!!" "But Still would you rather work for the Devil than be with your best friend!!??" Alex punched him again and hit him...Doriam fell to the Ground... "It's to Bring my Family back!!!" "Just try to Imagine us!!" Alex got ready to punch Doriam when he stopped and thought about Doriam..His Best friend for his whole life....And then he put his fists down and stretched his hands toward Doriam "I'm Sorry....I shouldn't let a job take over Friendship..." Doriam grabbed his hands and got up... "It's alright..It was for your family...." Doriam smiled and so did Alex... "So Friends again?" asked Alex... "The Best!" shouted Doriam They both slapped each other a high five....[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 6 part 2:Evil or Good/The Decision][align=center]Just so you all know...This part of the Chapter is about the Evil ones... There he was, The Devil sitting upon a Throne... "So...You choose to follow your Sons' Footsteps...?" asked The Devil Upon Him was a Man who looked as if he suffered through Hell "Of Course....I Intend to do Good..." replied the Man. "HAHAHAHAHA YOUR SONS HAVE BEEN DOING EVIL!!" "I don't believe you!!You claim to be his Father!!You're not!!You're teaching him to be Evil!!" "ENOUGH!!!!FOR THAT PIECE OF DISRESPECT, I SHALL GIVE YOU A PUNISHMENT!!!A CHANCE TO SEE PAIN AND SUFFERING!!!" The Man looked at the Devil....And He looked back... "I'll fight you...." said the man... "HOHOHO THE MAN CLAIMS THAT HE CAN KILL ME!!" "Wrong...I never claimed anything..I Just wanted a fight..." "Grrr....I'll fight you..But let this be a lesson to you when-" The Man punched The Devil on the chin who was sent flying into the sky,The Devil dropped to the ground... "Grrr..HEHE Maybe this will be a heck of a fight....So what should I address you to?" "The name's John..." "HEHE WELL JOHN...LET ME GIVE YOU A RAISE!!!" The Ground on John's feet started to shake then they deformed and cracked, The ground started falling apart....And John was left hanging... "WHAT'S WRONG?YOU DON'T WANT TO HANG OUT?HAHAHAHAHA" The Devil made a fist then he swinged his fist upon John...[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 6 part 3:Reunite/Lover][align=center]John dissapeared...As the Devil made his strike he dissapeared... "What's wrong..Too slow?" asked John The Devil looked Behind him and saw John... "What!!??" "Haha what surprised?" The Devil slammed the ground,And it shook....Then again it started to fall apart but this time something came out...A Hydra. "HAHA MEET MY HYDRA!!!" John smirked at the Hydra...But it slammed it's head unto John.Before it could hit,John dodged it and appeared above the Hydra's head... "Too Slow!!" John punched the Hydra by the head and it sreeched...Then it's head started to burst open,Blood and Guts sprayed out.The Organs spread around. The Devil still smiled, "He....You're still not impressing me...." He rushed towards John and punched him by the guts, John gasped for air... "What's wrong you've had enough?" XXXX MEANWHILE XXXXXAlex and Doriam was able to catch up to Ryan. "Ryan!!It's alright..he's with us..." Ryan nodded and the three sped into the Deeper Forests... The Three ran as fast as they can Doriam being in the lead...because of his minotaur legs...Then the 3 were Launched down from the Earth... "Urrgh What happened?" asked Ryan as he was on the cold hard floor... The 3 had landed on the the Castle floor and behind them they saw...The Fight... John punched The Devil as he looked at the three and recognized two if them... "Dad?" asked Ryan..."Dad!!!" Ryan ran up to John and hugged his Father... Alex was shocked to see his Father alive and winning a Fight against the Devil... Doriam looked at the three reunite... The Devil got up and made a disgusted look "Urrggh What is this?" asked the Devil... "It's called Reuniting..." answered Alex.... John ran to Alex and hugged him... "Alex...." "Dad..." Alex turned his attention to his Boss... "You tried to kill my Father?" He asked... "Yeah...I did...But you can't quit the Devil Hunter...You signed the Contract..." Alex remembered about the Contract... "Yeah....That is true..." "But that doesn't change the fact I can send you to Hell!!!" The Devil shouted....He pressed a button on a secret hidden panel and the Castle started erupting... "Bye-Bye!!" The Devil shouted as he dissapeared leaving a trail of white smoke... "C'mon let's get out of here...." shouted Ryan... The voice echoed through the room... "How will you save your Lover..Alex?" Alex realized what The Devil had done... "You guys get outside and I'll find her!!" Ryan,John,And Doriam ran outside the Castle and rested on a patch of grass looking at the Castle as it started to fall apart... "Where did he put her?" asked Alex ashe tried to navigate the corridors of the Hallway... "Wait!!The Basement!!!" Alex ran down the Basement and found a girl there..he broke the cage around her and carried her out and landed into the patch of grass next to the others... "Cindy!!" He yelled... The Girl woke up and Looked at Alex... "Alex?!!" "Yes it's me..." The two looked at each other before they kissed at the setting sun.[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 7:The Devil's Betrayal][align=center]John looked at Alex... "Wow...You've already got a girlfriend While I was gone?" asked John.... "Dad!" replied Alex... Cindy giggled as she hugged Alex... "So where have you been?I haven't seen you for the past few weeks..." asked Alex... "Do I need to explain that?" She asked. "Well,I guess not..." Alex layed on a Tree and Cindy layed beside him,Her head tilted to his Shoulders..., Alex eyed John,Ryan,And Doriam, And they understood...They left the two alone... "I'm still wondering what happened to you.." said Alex... Cindy looked at Alex, "I'll tell you..." XXXXX 4 Weeks Ago XXXX Cindy walked, in the Forest.. Looking for the creatures on the Wanted List, She stopped when she heard a crack, Then she turned.After that She was put on a net and was captured. "Hey let me get out of her-" She Shouted, But was interrupted as she was thrown into a Van.The kidnappers closed the Back Door and drove away. .....They arrived in front of a Tall Mansion,Golden stripes fell from beneath them,The Walls were Silver.Then a Man came and Looked at Cindy. "Hello my Lovely Creature.." He said. "Let me get out of here!!!" She Shouted. "Ahhh So soon?I think not!!!" He shouted as he pressed a button and electricity crackled through the net and shocked Cindy. XXXX NOW XXXX "That's all I could remember...." said Cindy."After that....I woke up in the Cage...Then fell asleep..." "Oh,Well I'm just Glad you're back.." replied Alex... The two kissed each other again, Then hugged. XXX Meanwhile XXX "What do you plan to do with them?" asked a Creature... "Well I'll send you three to go after them!!" Shouted the Devil. A Figure stepped up, His face was pale, His eyes were pale blue..almost colorless, And he had fangs... "So Can I...Feast on them?" asked the Figure... "Do anything you want to them.HAHAHA" shouted the Devil. Another figure rose, He looked exactly like the Devil. "I shall Dispose of them nicely..." said the Figure, Which he then turned exactly like Alex. "And I'll crush their bones!!" Shouted another figure, This one was Hairy all over, He had wide fangs, Which he used to Grin. "Very Good Gentleman!!" Shouted The Devil. "You are...The Top Vampire,Shapeshifter,And Werewolf on the Block!!" The 3 grinned at each other... "So where are our enemies anyway?" asked the Werewolf. "Silence Forest!!!HAHAHAHAHA" Shouted The Devil. "Then it will be easier for us to...Haunt them...HAHAHAHA!!" The Vampire shouted. The Four laughed, At their Perfect plan.A Figure rose high up to the ceiling,Sticking on the Wall like a gecko.... "Code 462, I repeat Code 462..." He whispered through a small,high-tech radio transmitter.[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 8:SECURITY][align=center]The Sound echoed through the Silence Forest. The Sounds of Footsteps haunted the Group and tortured them. "What is that Sound?" asked Ryan. Alex listened carefully, Then he looked at the Rest, "It's Footsteps.Somebody's following us!" He shouted. The 5 looked forward and listened carefully.Then 3 figures appeared in front of them. "Who are you?!!" Asked John. The Three figures looked at each other then at the five. "I asked Who are you!!" Shouted John. The Three figures stepped up and revealed their faces from the shadows, They were...a Vampire,Shapeshifter, And Werewolf. Alex eyed them then looked at the others. "Ryan, Doriam.You guys take the Werewolf." He commanded.The 2 walked towards the Werewolf and made a battle stance. "Dad, Take the Vampire...." He commanded again.John walked towards the Vampire and made a battle stance. "Cindy, you're with me on the Shapeshifter." Alex and Cindy rushed to the Shape shifter,Alex took out his Longsword and attacked from close up, While Cindy took out a Gun and fired at Long-Range.The Shapeshifter turned to Alex and battled Alex.Alex swordfighted with the Shapeshifter, Feeling his powers get overwhelmed.His Body felt heavy,His minds were spinning out of control.The Shapeshifter smirked as he knocked Alex to the Ground and had his Sword up to Alex's neck. "Kill him!!" Shouted the Shapeshifter trying to sound like Alex. Cindy aimed her gun. "Wait no Cindy!!It's me!!" Cindy took the Gun back and hesitated. "Kill him!!!" Shouted the Shapeshifter."Kill him or else you worthless slime!!!" Cindy snapped, She aimed the Gun at the Shapeshifter and fired.The Bullet went through the Shapeshifter, but it didn't kill him. "Alex are you alright?" She asked as she helped him up. "Yeah I am..just feeling a little dizzy..." He said, Then he went unconscious... "I Better put you somewhere so you can rest" She said, She put Alex inside a Hole in a Tree.She looked back and was shocked by what she saw. John,Doriam,And Ryan flew next to Cindy.Bloody,Unconscious,and definitely not fine.She put them near Alex and saw the 3 enemies step up to her... "That hurt.." Said the Shapeshifter as he rubbed the spot where he was shot. "Don't whine..." said The Vampire. "Let's just get it over with..." the Werewolf replied. The 3 stepped forward,Cindy stepped backward,She felt the tree behind her and looked at the 3 creatures.They stepped closer and closer, She Closed her eyes.Then a Loud bang was heard,She opened her eyes to find the 3 creatures being shot. "Move out!!!" SHouted a creature, as hundreds of Creatures swarmed the 2 deadly creatures.A Werewolf walked to the 3 creatures,He was wearing a police suit,All of them were, But across his Shoulders he had the word 'Lieutenant'. "Well,Well,Well....What do we have here...The 3 wanted criminals...." He said."Take them away!!" He commanded, The other creatures grabbed them and dragged them into a helicopter.The Lieutenant walked to Cindy.... "You guys'll be fine...Those guys will be taken to Jail..." He said."I'm lieutenant Billy...Nice to meet you.." Cindy looked at the creature then at the others. "I'm Cindy,I was wondering if you have a Hospital to cure my Firends...." She replied. "Well haha of course...." He said. "Medical Team!!" He shouted again. This time the 4 guys were taken inside a Van. "You coming?" Asked Billy as he walked inside the Van. "Yeah!" She replied, She walked inside the Van and sat next to Alex, Who was half-unconscious and getting treated. "Are you alright?" She asked. "Yeah....I Am..." He said. Ryan woke up... "Hey where are we going?" He asked. Billy looked at the others... ".....Back to Headquarters...." He answered.There was something in his voice that made Alex and Ryan thought different.[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 9:A Man][align=center]The Van stopped,Billy asked the Driver what happened. "What happened?" asked Billy. "We're here...." said the Driver. Billy nodded, He opened the Van door and He walked out.The others walked outside after Billy. "This is it?" asked Ryan gazing at the Building.... "Yep...CPH...Creature Police Headquaters..." answered Billy. "It's huge..." said Doriam. Alex nodded,They all walked inside.Billy talked to an assistant and then Showed The Group to their Rooms. "You will have roomates in one room." explained Billy. "Here are the Partner-ups...[Doriam-Ryan,John-Billy,Alex-Cindy]" The Group nodded and went to their Rooms. Ryan jumped at his Bed. "Ahhh this is the life.." he said as he was comforted by the Bed. "Tell me about it..." replied Doriam as he slept on his own bed. John walked to his Room, He layyed on his bed. "Ahh..This is nice...." He said.... Cindy helped Alex lay down on his Bed. "Thanks for helping me...." said Alex. "No Problem, I am your Girlfriend.." replied Cindy. "Yeah hehe...You know...I still remember 1 year ago..When we tried it..." He said. Cindy remembered it, She blushed. "Yeah...I still can't believe we did it..." she said. "But it wasn't all that good..." "What?It sounded to me like you were enjoying it..." He replied. "Maybe, But I would maybe like it more since we're better..." She smirked. Alex smirked back.The two started kissing each other,Hugging intensely.They started carresing each other's body.The felt intenseness as they ripped off their clothes and layed at each other on the Bed. <> XXX Meanwhile XXX Ryan looked at Doriam, "Hey let's go see how Alex is doing...." He said. Doriam nodded, the two walked next to Alex's Room and they stopped.They heard sounds of Struggling and moaning. Ryan was about to shout but Doriam covered Ryan's mouth.He smirked while he dragged Ryan away. "Alex you are officially a man..." Doriam thought to himself. XXX NEXT DAY XXX Alex woke up, He looked beside him to see Cindy. He smirked as he thought to himself, "Alex you are officially a man!!" Alex got up and put his clothes on,He put the Blanket more upward towards Cindy and kissed her on the cheek. "Good Morning.. My love.." He whispered. Alex walked outside,He accidentally bumbed himself with John. "Ouch...Sorry..." said Alex. "Sorry...Oh Alex it's you..Jeez you look like a mess...What happened to you?" He asked. "Oh I...Nothing..." He said trying to sound innocent. Alex walked away, He had a smirk on his face as he walked.[/align] [spoiler= Chapter 10:CatFight][align=center] XX IN HELL... XX The Devil sat on a Throne, He looked Angry... "AARARRGGHH!!!Those Worthless scum!!!" Shouted The Devil. "But Father..." replied a voice... "What is it my dear?" asked The Devil. The Figure stepped up, It was a Woman with Blond hair,About the Age of 17. "Why not let me take care of him?" asked the Woman. "HMMMMM....You're right Lilith....I'l send you...My daughter..." replied The Devil... "Alright...And I'll do everything to make sure I can Kill him...." said Lilith. The Devil had a Grin on his face, He laughed his evil Laugh and sent Lilith away.... XX Meanwhile XX Alex and the Rest had taken a Walk into the Town....Doriam had to use his Human apperance... "Wow...This is a beautiful Town....." said Ryan. "Yeah it is!" replied Cindy. She knocked Alex in the Guts with her Elbow... ">_>....Yeah S-Sure......" muttered Alex.... Then a Scream was heard...The Group went straight for it... "What was that?!!" asked Ryan. "I don't know..But Let's go!!" replied John. The Group stopped at a Deserted Playground, There was a Woman being terrorized by a Vampire... "What's a Vampire doing in the Cities'" asked Ryan. "I don't know....But we better kill it..." replied Alex. The Vampire looked at Alex and walked straight to him.Alex cracked his knuckles... XX A FEW MINUTES LATER XX Blood was splattered everywhere,Internal Organs ripped out and hanged by the Trees,the Jaws of the Vam[ie was ripped apart,And the Vampire was standing at a Pool of Blood. "C'mon let's go..." Said Alex, Who had his Hands Bloody. "Wait!!" Shouted the Woman. "I'm Lilith...I never got the chance to thank you..So Thanks...." "No Problem...." replied Alex. Lilith hugged Alex as tight as she Could.Cindy saw this and was Enraged. "Hey!!Get your hands off my Boyfriend!!" shouted Cindy. Lilith hugged even tighter...Then she sticked her tounge out at Cindy. "What the?" asked Alex as he tried to free from her Grip. "C'mon You're mine...." Whispered Lilith.... "MAN!!I wish I was Alex....." replied Ryan.... "Same here...." said Doriam. "Meh,I'm too Old for it anyway..." replied John. Cindy was enraged, She walked to Lilith and slapped her on the Cheek. "Ow!!" replied Lilith as she fell down from the Ground. Lilith got back up and slapped Cindy back. "How do you like that?!!" snapped Lilith. "Why you-" snapped Cindy. "Stop!!Cindy just stop she's just trying to be nice...." said Alex. "Whatever Alex!!She makes you Horny!!!" snapped Cindy "Will you stop it!!" shouted Alex. Cindy stopped as she folded her arms, Alex sighed, Then he Hugged Cindy "Don't worry...I'll always Love you...." replied Alex. "Alright...." Cindy replied back. "But I warn you...Next time I see something...." "HAHA No..That won't happen...." replied Alex. Lilith got up, "Alright...Time for Step 2...." She thought... Ryan and Doriam drooled at the sight of Lilith, "Wow...Now I Wish I was Older...." said Ryan. "Good Luck..Because I'm gonna Try....." replied Doriam. "No way!!" snapped Ryan. "Yes way!!" replied Doriam. The Two began to Fight each other, Alex sighed. "This is what happens when You Bring 2 morons...." said Alex. "Hahhahaha" laughed Cindy. Alex laughed too, "HAhaha Yeah....." replied Alex....[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 11:The Daughter/The Son][align=center] Alex had a Headache,He sat down On a Couch downstairs,In the Headquarters,By his side was Cindy and Doriam. "Urrgh...." said Alex. "What's wrong?" asked Cindy. "I think I have a Headache...." he answered. "Why don't you go to your room and sleep...." replied Doriam. Alex nodded,He went upstairs and walked to his Room,When he closed the door and looked at the Bed Lilith was their. "Llith what are you doing?" asked Alex. "I told you...You'd be mine...." replied Lilith Seducely... "I-i-I...." muttered Alex...as he was distracted by Lilith seducing him. "Don't say a word.....We'll just do business...." replied Llith. Lilith jumped off the Bed,She came closer to Alex and fondled his cheek,Then she started to kiss him.Alex tried to hold it,But he couldn't resist her Body.She carresed him,Her tounge playfully fondled His tounge.They Moaned in Pleasure,Lilith ripped off Alex's shirt.They layed on the Bed,Carresing each other. "I gotta-No....It's so Pleasurable.....!!" He thought. Lilith carresed Alex's chest,Kissing his Neck,Alex moaned in Pleasure,Suddenly Lilith took out a knife and stabbed it at Alex.Alex dodged it and jumped off the Bed. "Woah....Trying to Kill me?" asked Alex. "What are you talking about?" She asked in a seducefull voice. Alex resisted,He almost gave in but he got it. "No!!I Know what you're trying to do!!" replied Alex, He quickly grabbed a shirt and put it on, "Part 3...." Lilith replied. "Believe it or not I'm The Devil's Daughter!!" "Yeah I kinda got that!!" Replied Alex. Lilith tranfrmed to her normal appearance a Sucubi. "Let's fight then....." replied Lilith back. "Fine..." said Alex. XX A Few Minutes Later XX Alex came crashing downstairs next to the Couch He moaned in Pain. "Owww...." He said weakly. Lilith went downstairs, "So Alex had enough?" asked Lilith. Alex got up, He wiped the blood from the corner of hiss mouth with his Hands. "No!" replied Alex. "Alex what's going on?" asked Cindy. "She...She sucked the life out of me.....I felt weaker..Then next thing I know I was getting beaten up By her...." answered Alex. "The only Reason He didn't fight back is because He had Sex with me!!" replied Lilith. "You what?!!" Shouted Cindy. "Hey...She seduced me...." said Alex weakly, Alex slowly drifted away,Then he fainted. Cindy got up, She was in a 1 on 1 battle with Lilith. XX FEW MINUTES LATER XX Cindy landed to the Ground with a Thud, Blood splattered everywhere. "See...You all can't beat me....." replied Lilith. Thousands of Raven flew in the Headquarters,Everybody took cover as they fromed into a Man. "Dusk?" asked Lilith. "Yes it's me and I've come here to take your current job..." replied Dusk. "But Father told me to...." Lilith talked back. "Your Father Has TOLD ME to take your current job....." repeated Dusk. "Fine...." Lilith complained,She disspaeared in a Trail of smoke. "So....You're Alex..." He said....To the Now, Half-conscious Alex. "Wh-Who are you?" He asked. "Me...I am Dusk...You're Worst Nightmare..." He spoke with a smirk....[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 12:Battle Spirits!][align=center] Alex Got up, He felt Weak, he knew that he would've died.... "Feeling Dizzy?" asked Dusk. Background music:The Messenger"NO....Gotta Stay Alert..." Alex replied weakly. Alex clumsily walked toards Dusk.Dusk stood still, With his Sword on His Hand... "You can't defeat me...." Dusk said Coldly. "I Can!!" Alex replied back confidently.He felt the energy rush back through him. Alex grabbed his Sword, And Rushed towards Dusk.Dusk did the Same.Doriam watched as the 2 battled. "Why do you work for the Devil Anyway?!!" asked Alex as he blocked a Hit from Dusk. "He Told me he would reward me!!" Answered Dusk, Countering Alex's kick from the Side. "He'll just kill you as a Reward!!" shouted Alex back. Dusk stayed quiet. Alex swinged his Sword at Dusk's Face, Dusk blocked it and countered it with his Sword.Alex dodged it as he sidestepped to the Right and Kicked Dusk in the Guts.Dusk flew a feet back from Alex and got back up, He rushed towards Alex with extreme Speed and managed to cut a gash on his Arm.Alex winced at the pain, He tried to Stab back but was countered By Dusk who jumped and sliced from above.Alex managed to dodge the Attack, He rushed towards Dusk, Dusk rushed back, They both were within an Inch, They swinged there Swords at Each other but both of the Sowrds were hitting each other.In a Flash of Light, Both of them was Dragged backwards... "Urrgh...." Said Alex, He stopped dragging and Looked at Dusk who also stopped. "......" There was silence, Then both of them dropped to their knees. "You're pretty good..." Said Alex, Panting. "You're not too shabby yourself" Replied Dusk, Gasping. "But, We've got to end this Duel...." said Alex. "I Agree...only One Way..." replied Dusk. The Two looked at Each other and said In unison "A Spirit Battle...." Both of them got up, Trying to save their energy. Alex's Body glowed with a Light that made Cindy woke up, "What?" asked Cindy, She looked at Alex and Dusk. The Others were on the Stairwell watching. Alex's Body glowed Red, His Shadow increased in Size,Then It came to life!The Shadow Got up His Shadow Turned Red as it Got up,Then it Roared..It Looked like Alex, only...It's Body was Red. Dusk's Body glowed purple-black, His Shadow Increased and Came to life just As Alex's.Only Thhing different was that it's color was Purple-Black The Spirits held Swords exactly like their owners.As Dusk and Alex moved the Spirits did too.The four ended in a battle.Dusk and His Spirit rushed towards Alex. Alex and His Spirit rushed towards Dusk, "This will be a battle to remember" He thought as he rushed. The 4 clashed their swords together,A Bright Light exploded in the Room...As the Bright Light faded The Others look at the Battle field....Dusk and Alex is gone!![/align] [spoiler=Chapter 13:The Devil's Game][align=center]Alex looked around him,Burning Stones and Fire all over.He looked forward, Only to be greeted by The Devil. "Why did you capture me?" asked Alex, He looked beside him and saw Dusk, "And Dusk?" The Devil laughed, "I've sent you here to tell you a Warning..And YOU" He said as he pointed to Dusk. "Didn't Your Father once tell you never to use Your Spirit..Wasn't that his rule?" asked Devil. "Shut up!!" Replied Dusk. The Devil ignored him and looked straight at Alex. "I'd like to play a Game....You and your Friends will play my Game or Surrender and Die." said the Devil, looking at Alex with devious eyes. "How do we play this 'game' of yours?" asked Alex. "Simple....You will receive a letter for instructions Every Round..There are 3 rounds.. and if you manage to Survive all of them...You'll live..However...In The Game there will be some of your Friends that will get....'injured'" explained The Devil. Alex went quiet, He thought he'd expected a challenge... "You and your Teamates will be seperated...If you all manage to get out of the Challenge within 1 hour...You'll Win...." said The Devil. "Now....The Challenge STarts and Clock is ticking......" Alex felt Heavy,He felt Pain in his Head and Fainted.When we woke up, He was back at Headquarters...But he was alone. "What?Where is everybody?" He asked. He looked at a Note stuck on his Foot, He grabbed it and read it, it read: Hello Participant,When you receive this Letter, You're First Challenge starts.Find your teamates, Then Find your way from the Maze and out, If you choose to Run away....You'll have bad luck coming your way.Your Teamates will be in very different Places, To find them Get your Head Clear and go 30 paces.To The North will be the Exit you seek, IF you leave your teamates you'll be in for a leak. "What the heck is this?" asked Alex, "Whatever...What's this maze anyway?". Alex looked up from the Letter and he looked around him,There was hedges of Leaves around. "The Maze..." He said. Alex went forward,left past a Hedge,Went to a Right turn,Passed the Statue,North of the Hedged he came and looked around. "AARGH!!This is the Same Spot before!!" shouted Alex. XX MEANWHILE XX Dusk moaned in Pain, He looked at his Arms which where lashed at.He found himself in a Maze, He read the letter on the Ground then he shouted, "Is this some kind of sick joke?!!!".Dusk followed his way through the Maze and still found himself hopelessly Lost. XX BACK XX Alex then remembered what the Note said, "Get your Head Clear...".Alex sat down for a moment on the Grass, He took Deep Breaths and calmed himself.He opened his eyes, The Maze was gone...But there was one thing he could see....Dusk. "Dusk?" He asked to himself, Ignoring how the Maze suddenly dissapeared, as He walked towards Dusk he felt a Solid hit in Front of him....The Maze wasn't gone...It was Invisible. "What the heck?!" he asked, He felt the Maze and slowly felt his way throught the Maze, It was as if He was inside a Dark Basement, trying to find his way out.... Alex stopped himself, He felt Fur, Then he looked Above him, A Gian Vulture stood in front of him, About 4xs the Size of an Elephant. "Damn it..." Alex whispered, The Vulture raised it's foot above Alex.[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 14:The Devil's game part 2][align=center]Alex glared at the Beast, It rose it's foot towards him, Then It scrreched in Pain. It's chest was bleeding, A Sword stuck out of it, Then it Fell.The Beast clumsily fell towards Alex, Alex easily dodged it and looked at his Saviour. "Ryan?!!!" Alex shouted. "Yea!" He shouted back, "I totally pwned that Vulture!". "Where are the others?" "Oh..There just over there...." Ryan said, Pointing behind Alex. "What?" asked Alex, He looked back, He saw Billy and Doriam. "But..Where's Dad...Or Cindy?" Asked Alex. "I don't know.....Let's just keep going, We've checked everywhere and we found nothing.....Maybe their in the next round." Ryan replied. "Alright...." Alex said. The 4 walked to the End of the Maze, They reached a pitch black Room, There was only a light, shining on a Letter. Alex picked it up, it read: Dear Contestant. To me..It seems you found few of your friends, This is the Second Round.It will be harder than the first round...and.....Lives will be at stake..... As Alex finished reading it...The Lights Shined all over. "What the?" asked Alex. They were in what looked like a Circus.... "Welcome, One and All!!!" A voice shouted, Alex looked at the Ringmaster who was talking to the Audience, They were all Clowns... "Hold!What are you doing?" asked Alex. The Ringmaster looked at Alex, "Kid, I'm working here..." He said.He introduced Alex and the rest to the Audience. "Thank you!Thank you!" The Ringmaster shouted, Happy with Glee, He looked at someoned standing by the Corner trapped, By 2.....Bears? "Now!Here's John!Trying to do a dangerous Trick!Remember folks...Don't do this at Home...this is an Amateur Clown working!" The Ringmaster shouted.The Audience laughed at his..humorless joke. Alex looked at the Man, It was his Father. "Dad!!" Alex shouted. "I'm Busy Alex..." John replied, forcing off the Bears. "Prepare for battle!!!" The ringmaster said as he got into a Battle Stance.... Alex slashed him with his sword, The Ringmaster easily dodged it and kicked Alex by the guts.Alex fell to the floor, Ryan rushed up to the Ringmaster and swinged his Sowrd, The Ringmaster blocked it with his cane, Then using his Force, Swinged Ryan away, He landed next to Alex.Billy and Doriam charged at him, they were instantly Hit and landed faraway from Alex and Ryan. "Haha..Nobody her can fight me?" asked the Ringmaster. He walked towards Alex slowly, His Cane suddenly revealed a Blade, he pointed it to Alex's neck. "Hehe....You'll be coming to your End....." The Ringmaster whispered. Alex looked at Blade pointed to his Neck. "Hahahaha_Urrgh!!" The Ringmaster yelled, He was bleeding on the Chest, A Blade had pierced him.He Fell dead to the ground, Behind him was John, Hi picked Alex up. "You okay?" He asked. "Yeah....." Alex replied. "That was too easy..." "Yeah....It was TOO easy..." The Ground shook, a gloved hand rushed out and a Head came next, Then the Body and legs.It was the Ringmaster, Huge and fierceful. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU THINK YOU"RE BETTER?NO YOU"RE NOT!!!" The Ringmaster shouted. He raised his Hand over them, ready to swat them like bugs...[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 15:The Devil's Game part 3/Voltaire][align=center] "Damn it!!" shouted John, who took Alex and Ryan, Then dodged from the Ringmaster's hand. "What kind of challenge is this?" asked Alex, "A Huge Ringmaster to go with our Circus?!!" "HAHAHAHA Of Course!!The Devil didn't just pick!!He Took his time!!!" The Ringmaster shouted. Alex rushed towards him, Then slashed at the Leg.The Sword bounced back. "HAHAHAHA Did you really think that would hurt ME?!!" "Well yes......" John rushed towards The Ringmaster, Punching him as he got there. "HAAHAAAA You don't think that will kill me?" A Bang was heard, then The Ringmaster stood there, jaw opened, Blood coming out of his Forehead. "ARRRGGHHH!!!!" A Figure tackled the Ringmaster down, And he smiled, looking at Alex. "V-Voltaire?!!" asked Alex. "In the flesh..." He replied. Voltaire came closer to Alex, "Looks like you needed help...." "I did...But how the hell did you get here?!!!" "Almost Everybody on Earth got here....." "Hmmm....Looks like everybody went through a Day of hell......" "Let's just go..." interrupted John, carrying Doriam and Billy who was..unconscious.... The 6 walked forward, past the Circus and into a pitch black room again... "Dad....Ryan?" asked Alex, "Voltaire?" Silence stood, creeping upon Alex. "Your Friend's aren't here...." replied a voice. "Who are you?!!" "Your killer....."[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 16: The Nameless Warrior][align=center]"What do you mean?!!" shouted Alex, fear driving through his body. "Jeez Alex Can't you take a joke?" replied a similiar voice...it was Ryan! "Don't do that to me you Dumba**!!" "Will both of you Stop!!" shouted John. "Let's just try to find a light" He searched through his hands. A Scream was heard, it made the guys jump, then it happened... "What the hell!!" shouted Alex, he awoke from a bed, sweat all over his face, he was panting. "What....The...Hell...". The Door busrt open, John ran up to him, "What is it?" he asked. "I'm sorry...It's just a bad dream..." replied Alex, he felt the calmness breeze back into his body as he talked. "Jeez...It was all so real..". "Well of course...That was because they are real.." replied John, his face suddenly changing, he changed into a young Man with sliver white hair. Alex felt the panic rush back to him, "Who are you?!!" He tried to feel for a weapon... "It is Alright...I am not here to harm you....I found you..lying in the woods.." replied the Man. Alex could see in the Man's eyes that he was not lying, "All right...." Alex calmed downed, "Who..and What are you?" "I am a Shapeshifter...a Master one at that..I even posses an ability that none other Shapeshifters have..When I change into someobdy, I can see their memories.." he replied, then sat next to him at the Bed. He continued, "My name...I have no name.........but enemies call me....The Nameless Warrior.." "Alright...But What reason do you have for taking me?" "I could not just leave you alone up on those dangerous woods....Those Woods have killed many travelers.." "What about my friends?!" "I...Have not found any others......But if I'm right...they are probably back at the Dark River.." "Alright.." He got up, "I have to find them!" "You Cannot...You need to rest..." "They're my friends!!" "Yes..." he added quickly, "But You will not find them without the right energy.." Alex frowned, then sat at the bed again. "I'll rest in here for 1 day then...I'll leave.." "Alright..." The Man slowly changed himself into Alex, then closed his eyes, after a few minutes he opened them "I can see that those friends of yours mean a lot to you.." "Yeah..They do.." "So....What happened to your Mother?I could not find one memory about her.." Alex looked up, his face steaming, "Why would you look into my private thoughts and memories?!!" "I was curios..." Alex sighed, then stood up, he leaned over a window near the bed. "My Mother....She died shortly after I was born......'They'...called me the so called....Devil's kid..." "I can see that you loved her so very much...I am guessing you are one of the Goods..." "I am...Just retired from being the Devil's Top Hunter..." The Man sighed, "I see....and Your Father loves you dearly....and your Mother....But I can see one of the faintest memory about her....What is this?" "That Memory?.....That is a piece of memory from my Mother....She gave it to me......." "But somehow I cannot see it...Why?" "It's because.....The Devil's here.." Alex glared across the Window looking at a figure walk up to him, Along his side.....was his Mother.[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 17: Mother's Help][align=center] Alex went out the front door, The Nameless man followed him outside. "What.....are you doing...with my mother?" asked Alex, every word his anger raised. The Devil only laughed, "I'll give you a trade....Work for me again...or I'll kill your mother...”. Alex grunted, he looked at his mom, "Don't do it Alex! Don’t work for him again!!" she cried. Rain started to hit the ground; The Devil put his hood on then stared at Alex. "Well? What’s it going to be?” "Don't do it...” replied the Nameless man. Backround Music... Alex felt a tear cross from his eye, he walked slowly to The Devil, then bowed.... The Devil smiled, then he let Alex's mother go, he simply pushed her way, then grabbed Alex's shoulder. "Good boy...Now Let’s goes...". "Alright....." replied Alex. He followed The Devil and mysteriously sank in the ground with him. The Nameless man sighed, then he walked away into the house. Alex's mother closed her eyes then she went to her knees....and prayed. Alex stood by The Devil's side who sat on his chair. "Are you glad to be back?" he asked. Alex grunted at response, then walked away, The Devil only smirked. Alex went inside his room, it was an old musty room, and it had grey wallpaper and cold hard stones. The Smell was horrible, Like Trash.....He carefully thought for a minute, and then he screamed. The Craziness "Arrgh!!!!!" He screamed, then he punched at the wall, The Wall shocked itself then fell apart. Alex panted, then he sighed and laid himself at the Bed. A knock on the door made Alex turn away and out his Head on the pillow. He couldn't just go back, if he does.. The Devil would kill his mother.....”Who is it?!!” he asked, screaming beyond his will… “It’s me…” a familiar voice called back, Alex turned around, it felt like a lifetime at this memory, Alex went into an argument at his dad and he lay still at the bed, crying, this was when he was 7. The Door creaked open and John walked inside the colorful room, he smiled at the young Alex. Alex couldn’t help but to cry at the memory as John apologized to the younger him. XX 2 weeks later XX Alex couldn’t stand it anymore, living with The Devil had been a nightmare…Now it was time to be free…and the only one who could help him was…..his Mother.[/align] [spoiler=Character theme songs]*.Yes all of these are from FF Dissidia.*Characters__________Alex-Chaos-The Final BattleRyan-The Decisive BattleDoriam-The ExtremeJohn-The MessengerCindy-Blue FieldsBilly-Clash on the Big BridgeThe Devil-The Fierce BattleLilith-AmbitionScenes________The 1st War-MarchPreparation for the Last War-Preparation for BattleDeath-The Order that must be protectedTheme song-Main Theme [spoiler=Submit a charcter...]Name:Age:(15-17)Devil's Hunter or a Wanted Creature:Species:(If Devil Hunter you're a human so if you choose to be one do not put anything in this.Vampire,Werewolf,Doppelganger,Shapeshifter..ect)Bio: (3+ sentences)Appearnce:(optional) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Oooooohhhh!!! Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Thank you....Very much...So what did you think of the parts anyway..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 It's really nice! Never thought you liked those kinda things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Nice. Though you have to space more. Personally, I find the character's personality a little common, but over all it's nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Thank you, And I'll try to space more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Hope to see next chapter soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Nice, abit short, but i can't say much....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Yeah...i'm not that good at making long Chapters....Sorry but I'm glad you liked it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Hmm. You have to space more, and some letters should be lower case. Again way to short, that wouldn't be much of a problem if you made the chapter a bit juicy and interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Like I said a long time before....I can't make a good Fanfic...Anyway Chap 3...is up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Interesting. Again, the same problems as before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Nice chapter man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 @Finalflash:Thank you Finalflash.! @:Fenrir's herald...:What do you mean? I thought the spaces were enough....Double spaced from top to bottom.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 He means that you should space between the dialouge ends. Like this: "Don't get any attention..." Alex sighed. "Sometimes you are an annoying damn Brother..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Yup. Double spacing is not the problem. Spacing in between certain words are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 OK....I didn't notice that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Well, everyone makes mistakes! That's what makes us human! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 Yeah...Anyway I mad a new poll!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Bump....Chapter 4 is up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Nice chapter 4, but a bit short. Anyways, I WANNA SUBMIT! Name: Doriam DoroganAge:(15-17) 17Devil's Hunter or a Wanted Creature: Wanted creatureSpecies: MinotaurBio: (3+ sentences) Doriam used to be Alex's best friend, until he found out he was a Minotaur, and one of the wanted creatures on Alex's list. His friendship with Alex has been since 13 years age, and Doriam hopes that Alex will ignore the fact that he is a Minotaur. He just wants to be Alex's friend, and has never killed anyone innocent.Appearnce:(optional) Human Appearance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Yea, still got to work with spacing. I recommend that you check your chapter after you're done typing it. Oh, and still short. Ending was lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Chapter 5 is up!!And finalflash's character will be accepted!! @ Fenrir's Herald:I know I'll try to check it when I post the next chapter tommorow..I'm glad you thought it was funny... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Yea, the whole facepalm thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 I know....That seemed familiar so I decided to put it on...LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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