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The Devil's Hunter Chapter 17 up!!(I need characters!!)


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Accepyed! Working on it now....But is Bobby....allies to Alex?Even though they never met...

 

Well, Bobby is much like a merc. He will only join Alex and co. if they pay him enough, otherwise he just tries to kill the Devil alone.

 

Oh, I forgot to add, he has the same sword as the one in the pic.

 

@Fenrir: I know, but I can't find a better pic=/

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...Wait, why is Voltaire in chapter 15? Isn't he a musician.

 

Name: Roscuro

Age:(15-17) 16

Devil's Hunter or a Wanted Creature: Devil's Hunter

Species:(If Devil Hunter you're a human so if you choose to be one do not put anything in this.Vampire,Werewolf,Doppelganger,Shapeshifter..ect)

Bio: (3+ sentences) The highest ranking Devil Hunter. He is unique in that he can control bodies, (No way to resist this since he takes complete control over your nervous system) with puppet strings. However he himself is a corpse possessed by the manifestation of the devil's will so he is infact a puppet (Interestingly enough he is a manifestation of the Devil beforehe was forsaken so he is considerably more polite and laughs allot less (it is even possible for him to be a good character)) He is after Alex as the third part of the game, mainly because as he would state: "Do you think your pure and untainted? Do you think that after you no longer breathe that you will go to heaven? Such ignorant optimism, snatching your soul wasn't gonna change where you were gonna go, I'm merely speeding the process up..." Regardless he manages to keep the powers he had as an angel and can use light and dark powers in devastating combinations or even resurrect the dead.

Appearnce:(optional)

Theme song:Dreadful battle

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What about my charecter, though he is somewhat made redundant... unless he becomes Alex's new partner.

 

Roscuro's sorta story: One day He (Aka God aka Larxene (a member of YCM)) decided to let human's into heaven. Devil objected because letting anyone into a perfect world when human's where kicked out of Eden because they became imperfect (though in reality Eden IS Earth, we just ruined it's perfection) would have probably had a bad outcome. God predicted this and appointed Devil ruler of hell, which he was supposed to use to make people understand thier sins so they can be admitted to hell (the punishment is not about the what it is about the why). Devil did this very well but since few people were pure or even just really nice the Devil had to much work to leave. Because of that the Devil divided his conscience into two so that he could admire his work in heaven (all old residents used to eventually go to heaven, unless you understood the Devil's reasons and stayed to help.) However the new consince that stayed at hell got mad and was convinced that God tricked him, this embittered him and turned him into the cruel person he is now. The old Devil, (having retired as King of Hell) eventually went back and was forced to do the Devil's bidding since Hell belongs to him now (however the Devil can't make Roscuro do anything Roscuoro considers "Immoral" he just uses him to get the evilest beings who cheat death).

 

This is one detailed charecter application, the old one is one the next page.

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He's another devil, anyway John seemed to be able to fight the devil and was arguably winning. Over the top characters seem natural in this fic, I mean in one of the early chapter you meet a good guy almost as strong as the ultimate evil, so who can be stronger? Also it is a super major plot twist.

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Well if I didn't tell him then he wouldn't know. However if he posts this on another site then it would be an awesome plot twist, especially if Roscuro has ammesia so he doesn't know that he is the true devil and the evil one is a twisted clone. (that is definitely one step up from Luke, I am your father)

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Well then your character will certainly be in a shocker, also how can you copy memories that Roscuro himself is incapable of remembering...

 

Also Roscuro is a tall but unmuscular male in a black suit with a bowler capo on, he is extremely pale like many dead people but hasn't rotted or gone through rigor mortis. Just in case anyone needed to know what he looks like.

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