Guest Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 CnC this time people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 Well this really has no focal >.< All of your sigs atm are b&w. You need to add colour for a better abstract ^.^ Also c4d's have been used very badly. Considering this is your first time it's okay. What are the stars about on the sides as well? Kill it nao! Hioco. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 lol i love how people who aren't inter can't see the focal.Not many people know this but I'm a tiny bit color blind which is why most of my tags are B&W lately (yellow c4ds)Theres only 2 C4Ds so your wrong lol and the stars are so thebg isn't plain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 I'm not too good at critiquing abstracts, but I must say I like it. EDIT: KIZZI, YOU'RE A GRAPHIC DESIGNER, STOP THIS N00BISH IDIOCY NOW The subtle focal effectively draws attention, the variety of distributed shapes give it a very abstract feel, and the setup of the lighting is clear and well-distributed. The blending and composition is really good in some places, but even as an abstract I'm pretty sure there should be some bridge to bind the left to the right. Finally, at the right, your usage of lower opacity modes means that some detail is lost and the abstract contrast isn't as good as it could be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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