A better sneak peep at my next

[miker3]

hi guys this is a sneak peep that i put in custom cards at first but i changed the card and made it realistic and balanced in my opion so here it is

ps.this is the best card from my next set(coming soon)

pss.dont put negtive comment either put ones that can help me improve it

[Starly_64]

This card is still a disappointment. Here's why:

Why do you combine 2 words like Icelord? Surely there's space.

"Aqua" is best suited for a monster that resides in water or fish. This card deserves to be a "Warrior"

Bad OCG.

Also a bad effect. If "Icelords" are anything like this card, the effect is too powerful. Not to mention bringing back 3 instead of a reasonable 1.

ATK and DEF stats are still badly overpowered. Make it at least 3000 or under if there isn't a process to only Special Summon it.

What is it with your comments. You had black on your last thread, now you have recognisable white on this one. Please sort this out., because it doesn't look good.

 

p.s. it's no change from the other "most powerful" card you made. Next time, show cards that are at least Level 7 or under. 1.8/10

p.p.s. If you can't stand criticism, then don't post cards here for users to review in the first place.

[magnific0H]

Overpowered.

"When this card is summon select 3 icelord monsters and add them to your hand"

select them from where graveyard, deck or Out of play?

2/10

[miker3]

thx starly i will use your tips

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it is because i hav a diffrent way of putting my cards on to this website(i use my own site)so they allways come up a reconisable white.

here is a edited one(used tinypic this time)

yes i know it has white but i dont know how to get rid of it and the text went like that when i typed it for some reason