Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 erm.. can you point me to the general areas that need > in it, fenrir Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 The fight scenes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 ah right, i'll give it a try at repair the problem. i'll notify you when i've finished have a try at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Ok then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 well i've had an attempt at it, if it's still wrong then tell me so i can learn from my mistakes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Yea it's good, but you put > instead of . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 oh damn it, my bad, i had little sleep so my mind is a mess. i'll fix itfixedhow's it going with your eternal shadows fan fic, you working on chapter 8 right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 thanks for helping fenrir, i'll try to remember to keep doing that from now onyou can put up another character if you want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 One more char coming up! Name: Voltaire La PercAge: 22Country you came from: FranceBeast Form: HydraSide(escapee or hunter): EscapeeBiography: Voltaire escaped when Kevin and the others did. Instead of joining Kevin, Stephanie and Auster, he ran away and decided to terrorize the people that imprisoned him. He is cold-hearted, and doesn't care if the people he kill are innocent or not. He just wants revenge for his capturing and imprisonment.Normal Appearance(plz use pics): Beast Appearance(plz use pics if possible): Elemental Enhancement(while in beast form, only allowed one): Poison Special Moves/Abilities(while in beast form and plz describe them the best you can): Abilities:Head RegenerationMultiple senses of sight, sound and smell. Moves:He spits vemon like a cobra, making the target blind if it hits the eyes. The toxins inside his stomach is forced out, and he spews out acid that is able to melt Titanium and Kevlar. All his heads spin around and spews acid. It's like the previous ability, only with all his heads. Toxic fumes are exhaled from special "holes" in his skin, which acts like tear gas and poison at the same time. The Toxins from his stomach are forced out from his holes, making him slippery. Then, it hardens, and acts as a second skin, protecting him from swords and bullets. Transformation: His eyes change to reptile eyes, his tounge becomes biforcated, and his extra heads burst ouf of his neck and shoulder. Finally, his body is covered with scales, and his arms and legs transform to reptile legs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Name: Rei DrazkAge: 19Country you came from: FranceBeast Form: GargoyleSide(escapee or hunter): HunterBiography: Rei's past is actually unkown really. Her parents were from another country, she was just born and raised in France. She joined the hunters to make some profit. She's ruthless when she comes to killing her targets, but has a small crush on Auster.Normal Appearance(plz use pics): Beast Appearance(plz use pics if possible): Elemental Enhancement(while in beast form, only allowed one): WindSpecial Moves/Abilities(while in beast form and plz describe them the best you can): Twister: Creates a twister.Wind Flux: Can create a portal out of wind.Wind's Requiem: Can change the way the wind blows and how strong it blows.Cyclone's Wrath: Creates a Cyclone when over water, much stronger than a twister.Hurricane: Self explanatory. Transformation: Wind envelops her and she grows larger, with dark wings pertruding her back. Her eyes turn piercing red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Saqre Bleu! French Mania! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Got to love those Gargoyles =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Yup! You're Gargoyle is cool! Buuuuuut I prefer Hydras and Minotaurs! I just LOOOOOOOOVE Greek Mythology! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 I used to love Greek Mythology, but to much people focus on the Roman names. I love Norse/European Mythology more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Me too! Norse Mythology, that is! Since I'm from Sweden, I love Norse Mythology too! THOR FTW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 FENRIR FTW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Fallen Hero, you have enough characters now for more chaps now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 yeah i do, thanks flash and fenrir i do like the creatures, i'll try to get more up as soon as possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Lol, I loves chapter 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 thanks, unfortunately next next chapter won't be posted till some time tomorrow. I got a slight writers block right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 It's only 24 hours, everyone has the patience for that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 yeah, i know you guys will be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 besides, if you choose tommorrow morning, I'll be getting it by today anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 i'll see if i can post it in the morning but just so you know i usually sleep till the afternoon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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