OrcMan321 Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 This is my first finished card so please rate. I don't mind crticsm but if your gonna be just rude, then leave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Dont capatalize words like: the, of, and, a etc. OCG errorsImage is iffycards OPspelling errorsgrammar errors advice:-learn English-read yugioh cards extra:-should be spellcaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 [align=center]OCG Fix:When this card is Tribue Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Phader Token" (-Type//Level /ATK 0/DEF 1000) in Defense Position for every monster your opponents controls.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magnific0H Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 OCG errors but I personally like the picture though.keep up the cards :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrcMan321 Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Iv'e made the changes you said, and Marvel, wtf did you mean by learn english, I know i spelt critisism worng if thats what you meant (spelt it wrong then too. Lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 [align=center]Official Obsidian Rating OCG Fix: When this card is Tribute Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Phader Token" (Level 1/DARK/Fiend-Type/ATK 0/DEF 1000) in Defense Position for each monster they control. Copy and Paste that fix into your card. Grading:Picture - 1/2OCG - .5/2Usefulness - 1/2Balance - 2/2 Total: 4.5/8Grade: C+ The Picture is okay. Could use a better background though. OCG is actually kinda similar to mine when I started. (But I learned my mistakes quickly. So take my rating into account). Feel free to send me a Private Message when you need help. The token summoning is pretty nice but the chances of you getting some decent amounts of tokens summoned is next to none. If your opponent has a field full of monsters, you most likely won't even get the chance to summon this card. That is the reason this card is balanced. If this were a Level 4 monster, things would be much different. Overall, nice work. I expect to see you improve as time goes on. May the Darkness of Bug MegaMan guide you to Total Victory![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
russ0930 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaradon Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Bad OCG and no circulation. Pretty OP 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Well, you're a new memeber.. And I remember my first cards being bad to, so I am gunna give you some slack.You should read your Yu-Gi-Oh cards to pick up some OCG, and you should also get better art for your cards. I rate this uhhh... 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Bad OCG and no circulation. Pretty OP 3/10/\|| <= this post is lolz but anyways seing as this is your first great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 [align=center]OCG Fix:When this card is Tribue Summoned' date=' Special Summon 1 "Phader Token" (-Type//Level /ATK 0/DEF 1000) in Defense Position for [b']each[/b] monster your opponents controls.[/align] You made a mistake DarkA! Nice pic and a meh effect! Its too simple! 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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