Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 This is my newest card, please rate:[spoiler=Effect]When this card is changed to Defense Position, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. You cannot use this effect again until your second End Phase after this effect was activated. If you activate this effect, send the topmost card of your Deck to the Graveyard. Picture Credit: Marc Scheeff aka Dangermarc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Elemental Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 cool were did you get the pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 cool were did you get the pic?The artist's name is Marc Scheff. I'm pretty sure he makes concept art and such for movies and TV. You can find his website by searching his name on Google. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 You have a few OCG errors, well maybe as I can't really see the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 I didn't think the words were that small, sorry about that. Effect added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 You can switch this card to Defense Position and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, you cannot change the Battle Position of this card until the End Phase of the turn this effect is activated, except with a card effect. During 2nd End Phase, after this effect is activated, send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard. There fixed. Also how did you miss using one battle phase as you used end of the turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 You can use the effect in one turn, but not in the next. You have to wait until the end of your next turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Then word it as this, "You cannot use this effect until the 2nd End Phase after this effect is activated." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Then word it as this' date=' "You cannot use this effect until the 2nd End Phase after this effect is activated."[/quote']Thanks, I'll change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbatesman91™ Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 9/10 cool pic and a good effect as well. good card:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 9/10 cool pic and a good effect as well. good card:PThanks for the rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 When did you started on making cards?Not a fan of the pic as it looks like a wallpaper.The drawback is good, maybe make it a bit below 1000 Defense and lower the Level by 1?I would say, 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Thanks a lot. I usually don't make great cards, but I've been working on a couple of them for a long time. This is one of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Nice card! Nice pic! Good effect and X-31 Fighter fixed the OCG errors! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Me neither, but with practice you're truly getting there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Thanks, I'll probably post my other one in a few more days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 [align=center]Official Obsidian Rating OCG Fix: When this card is changed to Defense Position, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. You cannot use this effect again until your second End Phase after this effect was activated. If you activate this effect, send the topmost card of your Deck to the Graveyard. Copy and Paste that fix into your card. Grading:Picture - 1.5/2OCG - 1.5/2Usefulness - 1/2Balance - 2/2 Total: 6/8Grade: B+ The card's Pic is nice, though 3D pictures aren't really Yugioh-ish. Your OCG actually wasn't that bad. It just needed to be modernized really. Your OCG is equivilent to how cards were worded back in the Game's Genesis (The beginning). The Spell/Trap destruction effect combined with a 3000 ATK beatstick is nice. But the fact that it must be switched to Defense and that it can only be activated every 2 turns takes away from it's usefulness, and yet, adds to it's overall balance. To be honest, it's RARE that cards that I rate have a 2/2 on both Usefulness and Balance. Mostly because if it's 2/2 Useful, it must have a really good effect, but the way to activate is usually insanely easy to take advantage of. Vice-Versa, if Balance was at 2/2, the effect must have some pretty heavy limits, so activating the effect is much harder. So if both were ever at 2/2, consider yourself lucky. Overall, an excellent attempt. I was happy you grabbed my attention for this. I expect to see more in the future. May the Darkness of Bug MegaMan guide you to Total Victory![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Thanks, you rated my card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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