Force_Flex Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 [align=center]The Cycle Continues Ok, this is a new Fan-Fic I'm making. It's called, "The Cycle Continues". It's about a group of people who flee from their robot overlords to Earth. It's like a Sci-fi of how Earth got inhabited... sorta. They're fleeing from present-day mars. I call them villagers because I don't know what else to call them... any ideas? [spoiler=characters][spoiler=Alix] Alix is the main character. He's short, has long brown hair and wear glasses. He's smart, and has anger issues. he's also a huge wise-ass [spoiler=Mike]Mike is the braniac of the "group". He's shorter than Alix. He has dark skin, big bug-eyes, and Really long black hair. [spoiler=Kull] Kull is the "leader", but no one really like him. he's tall and is really full of himself. he's strong but not the smartest, and has a buzz-cut. [spoiler=Dillon]Dillon is really strong and tall. He's not really smart though. He's just below average. [spoiler=CH 1: The Journal] This is to everybody who comes after us. This is a little Poem I wrote to explain why we're running. The Cycle... We humans are tampering with the natural order. We created these monsters.In our "scientific break-through" we created our demise, artificial Life.The robots we created outsmarted us. We became the slaves!We humans were tampering with the natural order of life. The Robots cunducted horrible experiments on us. they turned most of us into vile red beasts. The animals even worse!They became horrible monsters, hard blue-gray skin. Their bodies became an exo-skeleton. There were holes in their body, mind and soul. They turned us into hunted beasts. But a few managed to run.We call them, Freedom Flies.We left in search for them with little food and water. No shelter, and no weapons. We must travel to Earth in search of a new life.We must go against all odds to-[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChargerRebel Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Looks good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Chapter one is abit short and you haven't explained the characters well anouth........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Chapter one is abit short and you haven't explained the characters well anouth........ It's more of giving the story of everything... I vaguely explained them so you can use youre imagination... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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