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Organization XIII (Adding nobodies and keyblades next)


Amethyst Phoenix

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I was a bit bored, so I decided to make Organization XIII.

So far, I Xemnas through Larxene. The whole deck will be focused on dumping them into the GY to activate something to win the game. I may go back and change it if that doesn't work. If marluxia, larxene, or zexion turn out overpowered thats completely my fault (they're my favorites). I know nobody isn't a real type but I can put it on these since its pop culture not realistic right? If I'm wrong I'll go back and change them. Images are from deviant art, except for the screenshots (which are screenshots from KH RE: CoM and KH 2)

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[spoiler=Marluxia's Effect]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special summoned by removing 7 Nobody-Type Monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all Spell Cards on the field and in your opponent's hand. This card cannot attack until your second Standby Phase after being summoned. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you gain and your opponent loses half the monster's combined ATK and DEF as Life Points.

 

 

 

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Feel free to to completely bash them. Except Zexion, he's too zexy for your critique =P (j/k) [/align]

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These are amazing! I can't see anything wrong with them and they are awesome. Really awesome. Can you make the normal nobody's soon? And add some spoilers for unread able card lore.

10/10 (I never have given this score before.)

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not bad, a few things need to be worked on though, you do have some OCG errors here and there, but those can get fixed, also you may want to change a few of the pics, demyx's is a little blurry, you could find a better pic of larxene, and maybe change zexion's, and i also didn't see image cred, if it's there sry

 

7.2/10 pretty good

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I say 3/10

Mistakes in all the cards and you created a new type! I would put you 4/10 but you are a 4 stars member already!

Ouch, mind telling me what these mistakes are? I did make their type nobody, I figured that I could because it was pop culture and not realistic. These are first pop culture cards I've done. I'm not sure what to make of your last sentence. Do you mean that it got a 3/10, but if I were a newbie you would have bumped it up to 4/10? Or do you mean that it got a 4/10, but you decreased it to a 3/10 because I have 4 stars. Either way it seems rather silly to look more at the member than the cards.

 

To everyone else: Thanks for the positive feedback =D

If anyone could PM me the ocg errors (or post them here, either way is fine with me), I'd appreciate it very much. I think my OCG might be a little outdated. I'll also work on posting the effects and getting new pics for demyx and larxene. Maybe zexion too, but only if I can find a pic of him with his lexicon.

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  • 3 weeks later...

Half of them are useless until you make the tuners, so do so. Other than that they are pretty good especially pics though Zexion will clearly be overpowered if his affect stealing abillity stacks, (you could make him attack directly, immune to traps, immune to spells, immune to creature effects, and more)

 

Don't worry I see your sigs,

 

I see everything.

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