Starcraft; Terran Set (Critic please)

[Kroama]

Ok, so in the past i made a Zerg deck which i actually printed off and play with my friends now and then, it actually turned out all-right... though i made some pen-changes, here's a link to the old thread. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-68949-page-1.html Well, i started with Terrans there but i decided to scrap those and start completely over with the same idea of how to run them, but far different in my consideration of how they'll be worded and conditions. Here's the new list of Terran cards i have made, most pictures were googled. Please give advice to cards that should be altered and how, or punctuation where it is needed.

 

Note: Some cards are VERY identical to the effects real cards have, the reason behind this is I feel I need the staple cards, but im not going to add real cards in a completely fantasy set.

Note2: I didn’t really try to completely base of starcraft 2, or broodwar… I sorta did it my way?

 

[spoiler=Terran]

 

[spoiler=Bunker Effect]During your End Phase, you can remove from play up to 4 face-up “Terran” monsters and Special Summon this card as an Effect Monster with ATK and DEF equal to the combined ATK and DEF of the removed monsters, respectively. At your next Standby Phase, return this to the Spell and Trap Card Zone and Special Summon all monsters removed from play by this effect. If this card removed from the field when in the Monster Card Zone, Special Summon all monsters removed from play by cards this effect. (Monsters that are unable to return to the field are sent to the graveyard.)

 

[spoiler=Thor Effect]This card can be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 “Terran SCV”s from your Hand, Field, or Graveyard. If this card was Special Summoned, send 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard during each of your End Phases. If this card is destroyed as a result of card effect, Special Summon 1 “Thors Reckage” token to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. (Machine-Type/EARTH/Level7/ATK 0/DEF 2000)

 

 

 

 

As of now, Here’s how I think the deck-list should be. (Note, I am considering cards I think would be limited and such)

 

[spoiler=Decklist]

Auto Turret- 1x

Battlecruiser- 1x

Cloak- 2x

Crucio; Siege Tank- 2x

Defense Matrix- 2x

EMP Shockwave- 1x

Irradiate- 2x

Lockdown- 3x

Medivac Dropship- 3x

Mule- 2x

Nighthawk- 2x

Nuclear Strike- 1x

Stim Packs- 1x

Terran Bunker- 2x

Terran Ghost- 3x

Terran Marauder- 3x

Terran Marine- 3x

Terran Reaper- 3x

Terran SCV-3x

Thor- 1x

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Some of the Zerg pictures in the old forum have gone bad... but dun worry bout em, they're just more cards. (If anyone really wants to see the whole zerg set i could fix the images)

[Kroama]

Some advice today maybe--

[DJScias]

Nice cards, though i don't really know much of Starcraft.

Some OCG like Hand, you don't need to capitalize it.

I give 9/10

 

Sincerly DJScias

[Kroama]

Let's try bumping this up.