Marble King Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 This card is for Ayasato-chan[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Well at least you got the Type right.The picture needs a background.The DEF stat could be a bit higher, and the ATK could be a wee bit lower.Give him an effect."A funky tazmanian devil detective" is not a good description.Make his name "Detective Taz" to match his description. Something like that. 1.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Why is it FIRE?ATK is overpowered for a Level 6Needs a backgroundIncorrect circulationStop making vanillas. Make effect monsters, since they are more useful and show the monster's personal abilities. Overall: It's horrible. 0.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Well at least you got the Type right.The picture needs a background.The DEF stat could be a bit higher' date=' and the ATK could be a wee bit lower.Give him an effect."A funky tazmanian devil detective" is not a good description.Make his name "Detective Taz" to match his description. Something like that. 1.5/10[/quote'] Why is it FIRE?ATK is overpowered for a Level 6Needs a backgroundIncorrect circulationStop making vanillas. Make effect monsters' date=' since they are more useful and show the monster's personal abilities. [b']Overall[/b]: It's horrible. 0.9/10 These Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Name/Type:Why is it FIRE, and why did you change it to a Ritual Monster? Now it needs a card to Ritual Summon it.Level and Stats:DEF is too highPicture: No background?Sub-Detail:Incorrect CirculationType and Effect: When you start an effect, don't go "Taz's effect", and there are lots of OCG and grammar errorsAnd the effect is too cheap. With it, you can have a 4400 ATK and 6000 DEF monster? CHANGE the effect. Overall: Even worse than before. 0.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I didn't mean raise the DEF THAT much, just by like 1000 or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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