LiAM Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 [align=center]Marvel Hero Black Panther [spoiler=[b]Card Lore[/b]:]This card is not destroyed as a result of battle when this card battles with a monster with an ATK of 2700 or less. (Damage calculation is applied normally). If this card is destroyed by battle while you control 1 face-up "Marvel Hero Storm", you can Special Summon this card in face-up Defence position to your field, this cards Special Summon cannot be negated. [spoiler=[u]Close Relatives:[/u]]T'Chaka (father, deceased), N'Yami (mother, deceased), Ramonda (stepmother), Bashenga (first Black Panther, ancestor, deceased), Jakarra (half-brother, deceased), Hunter (White Wolf (Hunter), adopted brother), Azzari the Wise (grandfather, deceased), Chanda (grandfather, presumably deceased), Nanali (grandmother, deceased), S'yan (uncle), Khanata, Joshua Itobo, Ishanta, M'Koni Wheeler, Zuni (cousins), Storm (wife) [spoiler=[u]Bio:[/u]]Black Panther's (AKA. T'Challa) Vibranium-weave uniform absorbs the kinetic force of impacts, rendering him bulletproof. His costume's gloves can generate energy daggers and house anti-metal claws that dissolve other metals on contact. His Kimoyo Card enables global communication, picks up satellite signals, and can block most radio transmissions. His boot soles are thick Vibranium alloy pads which can vibrate at various frequencies, allowing him to run up the sides of buildings, land soundlessly and without injury from a height of 50 feet, walk on water, or slice through metal. His costume is fitted with cloaking technology, allowing it to pass as normal street clothes. He also has access to the many specialized weapons and vehicles of Wakanda. The extent of technology T'Challa has access to is believed to be limitless.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 You might want to make his defense a bit higher; I see no reason for it to be so low. Also, you spelt "Defense wrong. Also, I'm not so sure that the last part is 100% correct. Overall, the effect is pretty good, and so is the Pic. I don't think the name really needs "Marvel Hero" before it. Clever code you have-"STAN". 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 result of battle = by battle Defense position to your field, this car This part is not needed^^^^^^^^^ It seems decent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 You might want to make his defense a bit higher; I see no reason for it to be so low. Also' date=' you spelt "Defen[b']s[/b]e wrong. Also, I'm not so sure that the last part is 100% correct. Overall, the effect is pretty good, and so is the Pic. I don't think the name really needs "Marvel Hero" before it. Clever code you have-"STAN". 8.5/10-defence is low because hes indestructable (almost)-it is spelt defence.-i like the pic, thats wh its my avi-it needs the name 'marvel hero' because this is part of a set, just like 'elemental heroes' or 'destiny heroes'.result of battle = by battle Defense position to your field' date=' this car This part is not needed^^^^^^^^^ It seems decent[/quote'] -first part was copied from 'obnoxious celtic guardian'-to your field, you could summon it to opponents field, much like ojama combo's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I know, but when you usually place special summon you are referring to your field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I know' date=' but when you usually place special summon you are referring to your field.[/quote'] there are some decks that would abuse this card(somehow) if it were to any field, so to your field is more appropiate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 -defence is low because hes indestructable (almost)-it is spelt defence.-i like the pic' date=' thats wh its my avi-it needs the name 'marvel hero' because this is part of a set, just like 'elemental heroes' or 'destiny heroes'.[hr'] -That makes sense now.-I'm not sure about that, but have it your way.-Yeah, the pic is cool.-That makes sense too. For my new DC cards in production, I just used DCU-EN00 to identify a guy from DC, but yours works too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I don't see how this will get abused? If a card is going to summon it is usually to your field. Unless there is some card that can steal it from your hand and summon it to your opponents field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Defence = Defense. XDNice card. It's pretty balanced, and a good stall. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Did you forget about how the british spell it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 it is honestly defence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Don't forget two different systems of spelling. American then british >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 well, i still spell it defence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Defence = Defense. XDNice card. It's pretty balanced' date=' and a good stall. ^_^[/quote'] I was talking to lazer ^^^^^^ So two different ways of spelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Whoops, sorry about that. XDLearn something new every day. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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