Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 How Is It?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 No.You brushed and you have 2 focals.The text is distracting as an old lady naked and the border is not very tasty looking.Above the text it seems as if you had some depth but then covered it with brushes.Btw never use a chibi as a render....ever.They usually are not workable and provide a terrible result.It's better if you use a render that isn't so small.Also dont use borders and dont use text till your ready and I will tell you when your ready.Well that seems to be about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Thanks For The Tips :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Thanks For The Tips :) Eh.It's what I do =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 No.You brushed and you have 2 focals.The text is distracting as an old lady naked and the border is not very tasty looking.Above the text it seems as if you had some depth but then covered it with brushes.Btw never use a chibi as a render....ever.They usually are not workable and provide a terrible result.It's better if you use a render that isn't so small.Also dont use borders and dont use text till your ready and I will tell you when your ready.Well that seems to be about it. Although this is all true, a lot of people start off with brush work. :P Also, I love borders, ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 No.You brushed and you have 2 focals.The text is distracting as an old lady naked and the border is not very tasty looking.Above the text it seems as if you had some depth but then covered it with brushes.Btw never use a chibi as a render....ever.They usually are not workable and provide a terrible result.It's better if you use a render that isn't so small.Also dont use borders and dont use text till your ready and I will tell you when your ready.Well that seems to be about it. Although this is all true' date=' [b']a lot of people start off with brush work. :P[/b] Also, I love borders, ;) True but people will never stop using brushes if you dont comment ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 True but people will never stop using brushes if you dont comment ;D I said that everything you said was true. ;D @OP: Try reading some more tutorials that don't involve brush work. It'll help you improve, even if you start off bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Ok :)Thanks To All For Comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 I'm glad that you're not taking the comments as flaming and that you're listening to them to improve. I respect you for that. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Yeah... It could use some work on the text and brushing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 I'm glad that you're not taking the comments as flaming and that you're listening to them to improve. I respect you for that. ;DThanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 [align=center]I agree with what haris said!You need a better render too![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 What's Wrong With The Render Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 What's Wrong With The Render They Are Chibi's.Dont Use Chibi's As Focals.Also Dont Capitalize Every Word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Why Not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Thanks For The Tips :) Are they called tips now? =P Well, I pretty much agree with haris. Also, Itachi's cloack doesn't fit the blue BG =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 KK :)I'll Take All Comments And Use Them When I Next Make A Sig :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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