Mr.G and W Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 These are my first couple of cards, hope u'll like them! = ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mister T x2 Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 they a bit under lvld for the last 2 card they should be 4 stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Increase the attack and level a bit but great graphics did you draw it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Well the cards are good but no villans or over used pics 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.G and W Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Increase the attack and level a bit but great graphics did you draw it? No, i found the pictures off of seaching on google, after a while... :) But ty 4 the feedback. I went and added a bit more stars and attack power to them now, so next time u'll see them, they'll be better :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Very good for a new member. I can't really point out anything more so read the other comments. Like everyone will tell you 3/7 cards having no effects is a very bad thing, actually they'll say 1/7 cards with no effects is bad. Just add effects and this looks pretty good. 7/10, just add effects and it goes up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Alright, great cards for your first set. Well not great as in amazingly awsome, great as it I can tell you put in the effort and you had a good result.-now then-Where you can improve: Acheus - I think he's a bit over powered. He can't attack if he's Special Summoned, but chances are he's just going be thrown right away and you get out your Synchro. And with your other two low level monsters be 3 stars, it makes the Summon seem to easy for me.Exdrea & Lestus - Normal monsters are boring. I feel, in a set 1 or 2 are alright if approprite, but this card maker was made for us to be creative and the forum is to show off that creativity, normal monsters don't show alot, unless they have an awsome story but sadly these don't. Serpent's Glar - Some what effective, good card. BAD PIC. The blurrieness ruins it and makes it look unrealistic. I know it's hard sometimes, but you have to find pics that look good. The Beast - Is that really the best name you can think of? Like I said, creativeity is key to making a good card, it counts in name too. Maybe a name like "The Leviathan Evoulved" or something. I like the effect, it may be Over Powered, but alot of Synchros are so I can over look that. The Leviathan - This is possibly the best card you made. I don't see any errors. This one gets a 7/10. I'll explain my resoning later.-Moving on-The Lord of the Sea - it's another normal monster. It should have some sort of effect. After all it's ATK isn't that high. Over all this is a decent set. In the future try to be more creative, give the cards effects and try to come up with effects you've never seen before. For this set as a whole, I give you a 5/10. Good effort, and I hope to see what you can do in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemiclehero Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 no offence but you can tell they are your first ones.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathwarden Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 All but one of those pics I used for my Mythical Serpent Set. Might have to come out with a few more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 A couple of cards like birthright and this deck could kik ass dude 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Nice, for a first try. Ok, actually good for a second try as well. Balanced... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bribri123123 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Great! Perfect grammer and everything! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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