shiko11 Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 [color=#800000][size=x-large]DragonStones! Chapter 1 UP![/size][/color] [spoiler=Character Application] Name: Bio: Appearance: Weapon(s) of choice: Element: Territory:(Diamond,Emerald,Ruby,Saphire,Topaz,Opal) Side(Corrupter,Defender):[/spoiler] [spoiler=characters] Mr. Example - side - territory - element Tesaku Megami - Defender - Diamond - Wind/Ritual Stephanie McPhilleas - Defender - Diamond - Water Dusk Rayson - Defender - Not Specified - none Garoth - Corruptor - Ruby - Earth Drake Garthon - Corruptor - Not Specified - Fire Umeko Risashi - Corruptor - Ruby - Light and Dark Shirokami - Corruptor - ruby - dark Kyohaku Hika - Corruptor - Diamond - Dark[/spoiler] [spoiler=synopsis] It's been a year since the Gem Territories have fought. The Elder Dragons have settled the war. But evil is rising, and the dragons are no longer at peace. SOMEONE is corrupting them. Join a territory, and choose your fate: Corrupter or Defender![/spoiler] [spoiler=my app.] Name: Tesaku Megami Bio: Quiet, Calm, Nervous, Outraged by the corrupters. Appearance: [IMG]http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll117/aries-shiko/priest.jpg[/IMG] Weapon(s) of choice: spellbook Element:wind Territory:Diamond Side(Corrupter,Defender): Defender[/spoiler] [spoiler=Books] [spoiler=Emerald] [spoiler=Prologue] "Wow. The sun is bright," I thought to myself. "It never gets this bright in the Diamond Territory. Being so upnorth, It's normally snowy and cold. I wonder what's up? It's raining but... too lightly. Whatever, guess I might as well enjoy it." "Tesaku. Tesa- woah!" a voice hollered, but stopped abruptly."That must be Kedreth. What a klutz. What'd he do now? I don't have time." I walked to the windowsill, and peered around the corner. Of course, Kedreth had to trip over my dog. He was sprawled in the grass, forced to stay down by my retreiver. Buddy was on all fours, licking Kedreth from head to toe. "Come here, Buddy. Give the poor guy a chance to get up!" At my command, the dog hopped of and waddled his tail to the window. He got up on his front paws to lick my hand from the windowsill.. "Tesaku! Would you beleive the weather? My mom is actually wearing sunglasses!" He hooted. "Y'know," he started. "Scientists say that the weather changes to the Diamond Dragon's feelings. He probably finally stopped resting from the last war." "I don't blame him. That was a long one!" I commented. "Hey... wanna go outside and fight? Stephanie says she wants to do something while the sun is out." Kedreth said. "Okay," I agreed, "But are you going to fight? I mean, you don't even have an element!" I pointed out. "I could watch. I'm always up for a good show!" And he was right. Stephanie and I put up great fights. Though she tended to win in the end. Plus, the rain would give her an advantage. But what the hay, I was ready. And who knows? I might lead victorious today. Her feminine voice rang out like a bell. "C'mon guys. We don't have all day. Well, actually, we do." Stephanie decided. "I'm sure none of us planned anything special, right?" I was going to ask her to fight anyway. "Nope," Kedreth and I agreed. "Kay. ready, you guys?" Kedreth asked. We both silently nodded. Our eyes were locked. Not even for a second did I blink. Her sycthe was out and ready. My spellbook in hand, I flipped the pages with the wind, landing on the page I wanted. "Go!" He hollered. I was running up the tree in no time. With the wind to my back, it was a breeze. Literally. Stephanie reached back somewhere in the Saphire territory, and by the time her her arm stopped, there was emmense power behind that sycthe. She slung it at me with paralyzing speed. behind it was a string of water, holding the sycthe. What a clever trick! I felt it scrape my ankle. It swept back around as she pulled the water line. She caught it, and chucked it in a spinning angle yet again. I jumped, reached down, and felt for the handle. I got it! She pulled back before she noticed my grip, and felt the result. As it swung back to her, I kicked her in the face, a punishing blow indeed. Of course, we had just started. I had no clue the rain stopped. That explained the weakness of her water string. The thread disapeared. and I was trapped. Trapped in a... bubble? I kicked at it, trying to fight my way out. I then used air to inflate it like a balloon. That only caused me to float upward. "Ready?" she questioned in a mildly sarcastic tone. Just as sarcasticly, I replied "For?" Before she answered. She flung her sycthe toward the bubble. The orb popped, and the sound penetrated my ears, catching me off gaurd. The blade of the shiny sycthe slit my shoulder, then swung around for another hit. I ducked, but that didn't work out too well. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 1] "Agh!" I cried out. "No! Tesaku!" Stephanie hollered. "Hmm.. this one has quite the will, and a powerful skill for magic, as well." The fiend noted. He sat in his large lavish throne. Shirokami was staring into a crystal ball, pondering the battle. "Indeed, master." Those words were spoken by a half-demon, Umeko. They were in the underworld lair. "Ugh. What happened?" I asked. "Well, you uh, seem to have broke your arm. You won't be fighting for some while." The doctor answered. "WHAT? B-but.... how in the world did I break my arm?" "Well.." The doctor started. "You fell out of the tree when the sycthe hit you." "So? That doesn't effect my fighting whatsoever!" I screamed. "Actually," Kedreth butted in. "You do plenty with your arm. It'd be very difficult for you to-" but stopped there due to a painful jab in the side from Stephanie. "Shh!" she commanded. "Whatever. Let's go guys." I said. We just walked out like it was unimportant. "But.." The doctor said. "Peace!" Kedreth shouted, and we were off. We had continued home. Not one of us spoke a word, for all of us knew that we had taken a loss. The rest of my fighting. I woke up, and like before, the sun was shining. I remembered what Kedreth had said about the weather: It changed to the Diamond dragon's emotions. Apparently, it had woken up. Like any other morning, I sat in my room, reading through "SudoTake Chronicles." It was some old book my grandfather had given me, full of witchcraft and other stuff like that. I tended to read the same pages, over and over. It had taught me amazing things, like how to control the movement of the wind. But most of the pages were torn out. The parchment-quality paper in the book had yellowed. It had delicate edges, with intricate pattern around the corners. The font was elegant, but readable. Spells like "Increalirate" filled the pages, edge to edge, most of wich were in a different language. I mostly read the biography of the 6 Territorial Dragons, each having their own chapter. I never quite understood who the creator of the book was, or why it had dark curse symbols on the back. The back cover seemed to [i]burn[/i] when I touched it. What was up with this book? "The boy is seeming to pay close attention to the book. I want it gone. He will learn too much, and will become too powerful like his grandfather. Destroy that book!" He commanded. "Yes, my master.."[/spoiler][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Theme Song!]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DSNDRgs4KCc[/spoiler] NOTICE: We are currently accepting Defenders, and possibly ONE MORE CORRUPTOR! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Where's the chapter? Anyways:Â Name: Stephanie McPhilleasBio: At the age of 14, Stephanie's family was killed by the Corruptors, and she has joined Tesaku to crush the Corruptors. She is an expert Water Magician, and uses several Water Spells to her advantage.Appearance:Weapon(s) of choice:Frost ScytheElement: Water/IceTerritory:(Diamond,Emerald,Ruby,Saphire,Topaz,Opal) DiamondSide(Corrupter,Defender): Defender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 there are no chapters yet :D waiting for characters. Im hoping we get some corrupters. Wanna make a second? :DYour first is accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Did you read my mind?:D Name: Drake GarthonBio: Drake is one of the Dragon Lords, but he has since long retired. Now he lives to serve the Corruptors, and is determined to kill the one called 'Stephanie McPhilleas'.Appearance:Weapon(s) of choice:Eviscerators Gorutham Battle-Axe [spoiler=HUGE PIC]Grand Flail Element: FireTerritory:(Diamond,Emerald,Ruby,Saphire,Topaz,Opal) He travels between the different Territories, killing and burning as he goes, to find Stephanie McPhilleas.Side(Corrupter,Defender): Corrupter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeralSnake Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Name:Dusk RaysenBio:A young Man Born into a Family of assassins, he ended up joining the Defenders to keep Society together so he can make money. He doesn't talk much due to the fact that he never finished school, But he is very smart when it comes to math and Science.Appearance:[spoiler=Here] Weapon(s) of choice:[spoiler=Here]His Knife and Sword Element:None (If I have to have 1 then Wind But If I don't please go with none)Territory:(Diamond,Emerald,Ruby,Saphire,Topaz,Opal)Due the that fact that he is an assassin he does not have a set Country.Side(Corrupter,Defender):Defender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Yosh, that pic you have of the main character is actually a character from a video game, just to tell you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Yeah, I know. It's Dante from DMC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 No, not yours, the MAIN characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Tesaku? Which game is his pic from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Fire Emblem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 all accepted. Fenrir, care to make a character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 cmon one more : D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Ok, but seriously, you should start this fanfic soon! Name: GarothBio: Garoth is a Black Knight of the Corruptors, and he will do anything to crush the Defenders.Appearance: Weapon(s) of choice: Axe(The one in his pic), two giant swords and a spike club.Element: EarthTerritory:(Diamond,Emerald,Ruby,Saphire,Topaz,Opal) RubySide(Corrupter,Defender): Corrupter  Did my other two get accepted? I don't see them in the character register. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 im adding them all now:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Thanks for adding them! Will this fanfic start soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 im going to make another, for the corruptors! Name: Umeko RisashiBio: Enslaved by Shirokami, she was originally his fiance. With Shirokami's demonic powers, he has given Umeko wings, and forced her to become his slave. Don't let her smile and kindhearted appearence fool you. Appearance: Weapon(s) of choice: None.Element: Light,DarkTerritory: RubySide: Corruptor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Nice, but will this start soon?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Here's Shirokami (leader of the corrupters)Name: Shirokami Bio: Kyoshi was just a young teen in the ruby territory. He was exploring the Ruby Dragon's Fortress, an found an old book in the celler. When he opened it... Shirokami, the ancient Amethyst Dragon Spirit, was set free. But without his body, he had to posses Kyoshi. Now, Shirokami is trying to obstruct or "corrupt" the other Dragons. To each Dragon, there is it's jewel within it's territory. Find the jewel, corrupt the dragon. Simple. That's why we need to get the jewels before they do.Appearance: Weapon(s) of choice: Element: DarkTerritory: RubySide: Corrupter By the way, When the Amethyst dragon was bonded to the book, Ruby territory took over amethyst. Without their dragon, they could hardly fight back.chapter 1 up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 ch. 1 up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Nice man! I was waiting! Stephanie is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 i fixed a few grammatical (if that's a word. If not, irony.) errors. lol. I'm glad you like it. do you know anyone who could possibly make a banner? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Nope. I'm more the Fanfic and RP kinda guy, so here is where I hang the most. So no, I don't know anyone who can make a Banner.:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 that's ok. I'll end up paying someone at a shop later then. I'm getting a little tired.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Then get some sleep. Then try to make Chapter 2 tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 pfft. it's 5:08 AM here. I can't fall asleep now. I'll make ch. 1 soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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