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POINT ZERO (Rated-R): INTRODUCTION AND PROLOGUE


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Hey there! It's cAde again! ^^

I decided to post my fan fic that I've been working on for at least two years now and right now I'm at chapter 4 of this great fan fic, I'm only gonna post the chapters one by one because it'll be a drag and really stupid if I put all four chapters in one thread. So today I'm only gonna post the intro and the prologue of my story and yes it is Rated R because it has some foul language in it and the action is pretty intense so...sit back, read and enjoy!

 

POINT ZERO

 

[spoiler=[font=Impact]INTRODUCTION[/font]]

In the city of Fulton, Blardagon, many series of events shaped this city’s past and one event was known by many of the citizens there. That particular event was the uprising of the renegade criminal syndicate called MEI. This radical group has done many things to disrupt the very sanity of Fulton’s civility. The main objective of the syndicate is to overrun the government of Blardagon so their leader and top criminal mind Takoyashi Kendo Okikawa (a.k.a: TKO) could gain control of the system that has brought about paramount success in Fulton. TKO’s ambition is accounted by great grandeur, and his intentions are to try to “recreate” the very foundation and ideas of the Fulton culture. Fulton is famous for it’s economical status and the development of their advanced technology, it was thanks to the many contributions and genius restitutes of the scientists of this urban metropolis that made Fulton what it is today. That is why TKO wanted power in this very complex city; it was because of the money and the use of the city’s technology, which could make any person’s ideas plausible. But the government wasn’t going to just let TKO and his followers run over the system. For over 13 years, the government has been fighting MEI to try to keep order in the city, but thanks to TKO’ s influence onto people, he recruited over 955,000 members in his syndicate to fight a very long battle with Fulton’s government. Till this day it seemed like the war between Fulton and MEI would be over, but it was only the beginning all over again for the city. MEI has gained control 3 of Fulton’s main trade countries. These countries that TKO seized are: Pandoria, Helenopia, and New Asbahr. MEI and TKO are overrunning these three top countries and now are the main bases of MEI, they won’t stop recruiting and invading until TKO becomes Prime Leader of Fulton. Two years later, Fulton decided to recruit their own group to counteract against MEI. The current Prime Leader; Hal Gavin, recruited the best top fighters to battle MEI. The group only has six members, but the Prime Leader is confident in the abilities of these heroes. These heroic people are entrusted to protect and dilute the poison that MEI and TKO poured onto the fabric of humanity, so far the group had gone through over 56,000 members of MEI. The downslide of it all is that TKO keeps on recruiting new members to his syndicate. He even created his own 6-man army to blockade Fulton’s heroes. Ever since then, it just gets even harder and harder for Fulton to retain control in the New World Continent. But little did the Fulton Heroes know that a 15-year old boy and his two friends would get involved in this and the hero unit have no choice to let them fight along side them…

 

 

[spoiler=[font=Impact]THE PROLOGUE[/font]]

The year is 2355 and the war between TKO’s Criminal Syndicate: MEI vs. Fulton City’s Political System still rages on. The point of the battle is chaotic and it seems like the war will never end! Many people were killed during the midst of the battle and most recently MEI terrorized the neighborhood of Maricort and killed up to 10 people and injured 37 from that region of Fulton. Concurrently, Fulton’s best military unit, the FHU (Fulton Hero Unit), has subjected the crimes in the streets of Fulton and now are preparing for their first minor mission. Professor Gannett Hawthorne, a member of the FHU, is briefing to the other members of the unit about the mission, and it seems that the objective will be done with espionage. The mission is to keep in tracks of movements of the syndicate’s leader; TKO. This mission is specifically designed to observe the whereabouts of this criminal and to report back with any new plans that are possible from the suspect. Lately, the unit found out that TKO discovered a mass array of newly imported weapons inside a Backwater Station out in the capitol region of New Asbahr’s famous wildlife reserve; The Del Hada Jungle. The FHU sent their best espionage agent to observe TKO’s venture towards the station. It’s been 4 weeks into the mission, and the date is marked, Operation Del Hada is now in procession…

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The scene starts with a jeep driving deep into the Del Hada Jungle with TKO as the passenger, the scene then fades to FHU’s Espionage Spy jumping from branch to branch trying to catch up with the jeep. Ten miles away from the Backwater Station, the jeep stops and two agents from MEI appeared out of the vehicle, one of the agents opened up the passenger’s door and out came the man himself; TKO. When the spy sees this, he ceased his movements and starts to observe…

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TKO: Finally! We are here gentlemen, the capitol area of Del Hada!

MEI Agent 1: Sir, are you sure you want to do this alone? You do know many political leaders are pursuing you.

TKO: Are you questioning my intestinal fortitude? ARE YOU?!

MEI Agent 1: No sir, I…

TKO: Don’t lie! You could question my ego and pride, but I fear neither man nor woman! I’ll take whatever crosses my path and if you have a problem with that, then…well! I guess I just have to kill you guys! (Slowly gets out his sword)

MEI Agent 1: NO, NO, NO SIR!!! I didn’t mean to offend you in anyway, we’re just concerned about your well-being!

MEI Agent 2: Yeah! Whatever he said! Don’t kill us sir, this guy took too much of his medication this morning, he has an anxiety problem sir! Please spare us!

TKO: Hm…(Puts his sword back onto his sword placer that was strapped on to his left leg) How pitiful, you guys aren’t even worth slaying! So I’ll take your guises plead into consideration.

MEI Agent 1 and 2: (Both sighs in relief)

TKO: You two stand patrol here and check for any suspicious activity, when I come back, call in for backup so we could transport the weapons back to base. DON’T LEAVE THIS AREA NO MATTER WHAT, UNDERSTAND?!

MEI Agent 1 and 2: (Nervously) YES SIR!!!

Rustling noises up in a tree

TKO: Hm?

MEI Agent 1: Did you hear that?

MEI Agent 2: Yeah, it sounded like it came from one of these Mangrove Trees.

TKO: Huh! Looks like we have a Peeping Tom on our hands gentlemen…

Espionage Spy: (Up in a tree) !!!

MEI Agent 2: A spy! (Took out his handgun)

TKO: Cease fire you fool!

MEI Agent 2: Huh? But sir…

TKO: Let him be, he’s only here for information it looks like, besides you two don’t know where his position is at in the jungle, shooting will only be a waste of ammo. (Looking at where the spy is at)

MEI Agent 2: Then what should we do?

TKO: Stick with your primary mission, he’ll probably follow me to the station and take notes of me.

MEI Agent 1: Who do you think he’s associated with? Toron, the WDS, Pandoria, who?

TKO: Who knows? But this seems very intriguing!

MEI Agent 2: I don’t like this…

TKO: You don’t need to like it! Just concentrate on your mission until I get back, got it?

The MEI Agents: (Salutes) YES SIR!!

Up in the Mangrove Trees

Espionage Spy: (Breathing hard) That…was…a…close one! (The spy’s radio is buffering) (Sighs) H.Q., almost got caught, but I’m still hidden!

H.Q.: Good, even though he knows that you’re tracking him down, continue on with the mission till further notice.

Espionage Spy: Right, I’m off.

H.Q.: Good luck! (The signal of the radio recedes)

As the spy continues to follow TKO, a half hour later, he finally arrives at the weapons station entering in the entrance area of the building.

Espionage Spy: (On his radio) He’s visual at the station, and he’s entering the complex!

H.Q.: Perfect, from that point, observe closely at the suspect, and use your Combat Scope to get a closer look.

Espionage Spy: Right! Over and out!

Meanwhile at the MEI Agents scene

MEI Agent 1: You think that the spy got TKO?

MEI Agent 2: I don’t know man, (Sparks a lighter and takes out a cigarette; puts the cigarette in his mouth) want one?

MEI Agent 1: Sure, (Takes a cigarette from #2 then starts to smoke) why do we even bother? I mean we’re not fighting for a better cause, we’re just helping out a maniac to finish his ambition!

MEI Agent 2: It doesn’t matter if it’s good or bad, we’re soldiers, and soldiers fight for whatever purpose there is. Hey, if TKO becomes ruler of this world, he might cut our tax rates in half!

MEI Agent 1: Possibly, but we’ll never know what his true intentions are.

MEI Agent 2: Whatever his intentions are, we’ll just have to go on with the flow. (Puffing on the cigarette)

In the sky, a group of helicopters appeared heading for the station where TKO is.

MEI Agent 2: What the hell…(Looking up)

MEI Agent 1: Are those…?

MEI Agent 2: THEY’RE COPTERS!!!

MEI Agent 1: And it looks like they’re heading straight for the Backwater Station!

MEI Agent 2: sheet! sheet! sheet!

MEI Agent 1: Don’t panic #2! Get the RPG-7 out of the jeep, we’re taking down those copters!

MEI Agent 2: Uh…uh…

MEI Agent 1: #2!

MEI Agent 2: Uh…right! (Runs to the jeep to get the RPG-7)

MEI Agent: 1: Geez, and I thought I was the one with the anxiety problem!

MEI Agent 2: Here! (Hands #1 the RPG-7)

MEI Agent 1: (Aims the RPG-7 at the helicopters) Dammit! I can’t keep my arms steady, my aim is going to be off! #2!

MEI Agent: 2: …!!!

MEI Agent 1: #2!!!

MEI Agent 2: HUH! Uh…HUH?

MEI Agent 1: Get out some Pentazemin and inject some into my arms!

MEI Agent 2: Right! (Unzips a pocket on his left arm and gets out a shot of Pentazemin.) Hold still! (Injects the chemical into #1’s arms)

MEI Agent 1: Okay, stand back #2!

MEI Agent 2: (Gulps)

#1 aims at one of the helicopters and launches an RPG-7 rocket. The rocket hits one of the copters but it only did minor damage.

MEI Agent 1: #2! Get more rockets! That wasn’t enough!

MEI Agent 2: Uh…yeah! (Runs to the jeep to get more RPG-7 ammo)

The helicopters changes direction and stopped at where the agents are.

MEI Agent: 1: Hurry up!

MEI Agent 2: Oh…

MEI Agent 1: #2, quit stalling! Give me the ammo!

MEI Agent 2: Uh…#1!

MEI Agent 1: What!

MEI Agent 2: (Pointing to the helicopters)

MEI Agent 1: (Looking up) What…

One of the helicopters opened up a compartment showing a huge bomb etched inside of it, a moment later the helicopter launched the bomb targeting the two agents.

MEI Agent 1: OH sheet!!! RUN!!! RUN FOR YOUR GOD DAMNED LIFE #2!!!!!!!! (Starts running frantically)

MEI Agent 2: AW MAN!!! THIS CAN’T BE HAPPENING TO ME!!!!!!!! (Running)

The bomb landed right on the jeep and exploded destroying everything in it’s radius including the two agents except for the copters, they survived because the helicopters have 6000 cm thick metal to protect them.

The MEI Agents: AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BOOM!!!!!!!

At the backwater station scene; the explosion was so strong, that the sound of the explosion could be heard near the station’s area.

Espionage Spy: What was that!!?

Inside the station

TKO: Hm!? (In mind) Is that Toron’s men? I better secure the weapons!

Up in the Mangrove tree

Espionage Spy: AW MAN, that must be Toron’s soldiers…(The spy’s radio is buffering, the spy answers the call) H.Q., I’m in reading frequency.

H.Q.: What was that agent? We heard a huge explosion over the Intercom!

Espionage Spy: I don’t really know who caused the explosion, but I’m guessing that Toron is after TKO’s tail.

H.Q.: If that’s the case, then we must cover our traces from Toron’s pursuit, your mission is to observe TKO and mask your appearance to any outside interference.

Espionage Spy: I already know that, I’ll keep in touch when anything new happens. Over and out! (Looking through his combat scope)

In mere minutes, the helicopters shows up at the Backwater Station scene

Espionage Spy: Hm? (Focuses his Combat Scope on the helicopters) Looks like urgent operative helicopters, hm… (Changes his scope’s view to 4x) I guess I was right, Toron’s men are after TKO. Gotta get a closer look. (Jumps to another tree)

Inside the station

TKO: sheet! Toron’s army is already here!

Outside the station, the helicopters landed just outside of the station’s entranceway, after the helicopters landed, a door opened and an army of android soldiers appeared out of the walkway.

Espionage Spy: Man, Toron is not fooling around! He must’ve known that TKO is no ordinary man. Those androids will waste him! (Turns on his communication radio; on the radio) H.Q., I guess my sources are right, Toron sent in an army of androids to kill TKO.

H.Q.: We were expecting this…Toron knew that an army of regular soldiers would be too easy for TKO, so he has the peripheral sense to send in an army of robotic soldiers, hmm…very interesting…regardless of the events, continue observing.

Espionage Spy: Right! Over and out! (Continues to observe through his combat scope)

The androids marched to the entranceway of the building and barged through the door.

Inside the building.

TKO: Hm?

Android Commando: Target detected, reprieve your current actions…TARGETED SUBJECT!!

TKO: So, Toron has the absolute sense on sending in an robotic army to kill me huh? No matter, I will make metal scrap out of you damned funked up pieces of junkyard trash!

Android Commando: Battalion…ATTACK!!!

TKO: Hmph! (Gets out a sword that was attached to his left leg) I will send all of you androids back to the hellhole you all belong to!!! Be prepared, because you will never, EVER mess with ME! (Eyes glowing red) TAKOYASHI KENDO OKIKAWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Up in Mangrove tree

Espionage Spy: AW sheet! The androids are commencing attack mode! (Looks at you) This is getting good! (Looking through combat scope)

Inside the building, the androids all came at TKO with tremendous speed, but TKO with a fierce look on his face ran towards them and slashed right through the incoming line of androids, seconds later the line of androids that were running at TKO were destroyed.

TKO: (Eyes glowing red) That’s all you got!? C’mon scrap metal, give me all you got!!!

The androids charged at TKO once again, but one android jumped in the air and shot out lasers out of it’s weapon compartment while three other androids did the same and the rest came charging at TKO. TKO easily outmaneuvers the laser shots then jumps into the air kicking down the three androids sending them crashing down to the ground destroying the three androids and a couple that were on the ground. TKO then took his sword and dived down to the ground and with tremendous force sliced right through a group of androids causing a minor explosion in the building. After TKO landed on the ground, he ran towards the androids slicing and slashing right through them, destroying one after another, but two androids from behind dived right into TKO’s legs and trapped him so he would not move. Then a horde of androids came jumping out of nowhere dog piling on top of TKO. When TKO was caught in the mosh of androids, one android activated a bomb that opened out of its face.

Android with bomb: 0:23:00

TKO: sheet!!!

After the timer went off, the whole entire station exploded with TKO inside of it. Seeing all of this, the espionage spy was in disbelief.

Espionage Spy: (On radio) H.Q….huh?

When the spy turned around, one of Toron’s androids was about to attack him, but the spy in a blink of an eye took down the android.

Espionage Spy: (On radio) H.Q., Takoyashi Kendo Okikawa…is dead…(Walks away from the scene)

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END OF PROLOGUE

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[spoiler=Side Notes]

-Toron: The Prime Leader (It's like a President or Leader of a Country) of New Asbahr

-Pandoria: One of the important countries in this story, it is one of Blardagon's main trading countries and this country also plays a big role in much later situations of the story, TKO took control of this country so that the superiors of Fulton City, Blardagon won't be able to trade and share their technological enterprises and political meanings are impossible because of TKO's implantation of his faction's militia like settlement.

-The WDS: The World Defense Society; it's like the NATO of this story, the WDS is a group of highly regarded people that oversees the trading, economic, and situations that goes on in the New World Nations of this time, they keep countries in line and councils them if one country is trying to subdue another, without the WDS, the New World Nations wouldn't have been possible and there would've been an all out war between the New World Countries of this story.

-RPG-7: A rocket launcher that weighs about 5.5 lbs and it's light to carry around, many militias ulitlizes this type of rocket launcher since the first Black Op missions of the first Cold War.

-Pentazemin is a chemical compound that help reduces unsteadiness in the hands, arms and it also helps you focus more on a task. Very potent. One shot of this and you won't shake for at least 10 minutes or so and it helps you focus with your eyes more as well.

 

 

[spoiler=Author's Comments]

The style of this story is in script style and I wrote it this way because it'll be a lot easier to come up with ideas and just to write them down, I don't like writing in original format because to me it's just too messy and stressful. Stay tuned for the first Chapter of Point Zero where the main character will be introduced, and just imagine the characters in anime style while reading POINT ZERO, I always wanted my storyline ideas and Original Characters to be in an anime or manga, because it's my favorite form of cartoonism (If that makes since, so stay tuned for more!) :D

 

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