FallenFanel21 Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Yeah dragons i like them so if you want to say your tired of them just dont say anything only for pic, OCG, and Comments on making it better Pic courtesy of Photobucket.com I have more Dragon synchros. One for each element and are all unique Heavens Light DragonGaia Forse DragonDark Ice DragonHell Fire DragonStill need Wind and Devine but give me a week and they will all be done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Noob. I mean that with the most respect you could get. You.. used.. Stardust Dragon's effect. Exactly. -10/10 This doesn't deserve a neg. Consider this a warning. DO NOT COPY REAL CARDS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenFanel21 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 no offence to you but with plenty of to you respect doesn't everyone do it when they make cards even real cards have the same effect like E-hero Wildheart and Tenkabito Shien also cards like mystic tomato, shining angel, and UFO turtle are exactly the same just with a different attribute. But to be true would it be better if i made it so it could only cancel out trap cards and monster effects? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 But to be true would it be better if i made it so it could only cancel out trap cards and monster effects? Sure. Change some of the effect, like you mentioned or anything else you want. Just do not make it the exact same copy of a real card. Maybe different requirement, or different cost, or else. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenFanel21 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 You see I give you Pros Jovi and you hae respect when you critique cards you dont just say o this this and this is wrong. i want to make it say in right OCG: that you have to pay 500 life points to negate a trap card. and when this card destroys a monster in battle it negates its effect until the end phase. Can you help a brotha out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Well, make it have a uniqueness to match the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenFanel21 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Now that is constructive criticism i can actually build on this. Thanks fellas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 no prob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I agree. You used SD's effect. If you're going to rip an effect of a card, rip the effect off an unknown card instead of the most known card of the moment.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenFanel21 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 You see what i mean Galaxy and Jovi, Alf what you just posted is wrong bro you are promoting OCG copying I fixed the card and just like you said its more unique similar to Rainbow Dark Dragon but not the same Now is this better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Make it go away at teh End Phase, and it'll be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Well, at least it's original now. I'm not sure about OCG, but I think this is the right one:You can remove from play any number of DARK monster you control and in your Graveyard to have this card gain 500 ATK for each card removed by this effect. Your OCG is pretty good for a new member. Another suggestion, find another image. People have been bored seeing that image on cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenFanel21 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Yeah i know some images have been "overused" but meh i like this one with this card1 Tuner + effect:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersYou can remove from play any DARK monsters you control and in your Graveyard to have this card gain 500 ATK for each card removed until the End Phase of the turn it was activated. You can activate this effect during either player's turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 It gets better, IMO. ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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