DJ Pwilliam Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 First deck i make Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 "You need the correct terminology. For example,'Every "Dj" monster on your Field gain 400 ATK and DEF'"Though this is too simple so you might have to make it different even for a field card. & also, this is a card not a deck. A deck consists of 40+ cards ;). Hope I Helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 "You need the correct terminology. For example' date=''Every "Dj" monster on your Field gain 400 ATK and DEF'"Though this is too simple so you might have to make it different even for a field card. & also, this is a card not a deck. A deck consists of 40+ cards ;). Hope I Helped.[/size'] Your better at gfx, although you make a good point.According to my knowledge OCG should read"Increase the ATK and DEF of all "DJ" monsters on your field by 400."It should be a continuous seeing as a field card affects the whole field. You need to also add some "DJ" monsters otherwise there is no point to this card and in my eyes is considered as spam. The Set-Id is wrong and you need a golden stamp. Other than that Making it an Ultimate Rare seems pointless. If you just improve what has been stated you'll improve in no time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 "You need the correct terminology. For example' date=''Every "Dj" monster on your Field gain 400 ATK and DEF'"Though this is too simple so you might have to make it different even for a field card. & also, this is a card not a deck. A deck consists of 40+ cards ;). Hope I Helped.[/size'] Your better at gfx, although you make a good point.According to my knowledge OCG should read"Increase the ATK and DEF of all "DJ" monsters on your field by 400."It should be a continuous seeing as a field card affects the whole field. You need to also add some "DJ" monsters otherwise there is no point to this card and in my eyes is considered as spam. The Set-Id is wrong and you need a golden stamp. Other than that Making it an Ultimate Rare seems pointless. If you just improve what has been stated you'll improve in no time. "Field should always be capitalized. I was a card maker before I became a Designer therefor I still know stuff ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 All monsters with "DJ" in their name gain 400 ATK and DEF. [/CorrectOCG] DJ Osiris is gonna sue somebody. :D I can't wait to see more! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 yeah, he really will. =/ You are missing 39 cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 At least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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