Haseo Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 I have a project for English/reading class and i need to write a poem about pigeons. I Have written only a little, but if you can then plz help me make it better:[align=center]A PigeonA Bird with mysterious A creature that has no boundariesIt can fly from corner to cornerState to state, Country to CountryA creature that has numerous colors on itColors that show it’s personality [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Starting with "A" is generally a bad idea. Because we already know that it is something.You are not describing it as if teaching, but describing as if is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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